Still G.I.Z.
the brown papers are from my journal, just random crunk that i like/
im having trouble tightening up my colouring in photoshop, i don't really get how people make it look all nice and neat.
sweatdrop mostly practice helps. I dont know if you're mousing or have a tablet...
the coloring in the 3rd and 4th is a little distracting. The strokes are in general a bit sloppy...i guess you could play with different tools or techniques. your lines might be improved if you used the eraser to trim down rougher bits. It's kind of a tedious process but pays off.
the other thing that seems to bug me is the awkward cropping in a few of the images. when you can't avoid cropping a subject, always put enough thought in to where you crop it so as not to hurt the composition or make the image look unfinished,
i dont really know how to explain this any better..it's sort of something you just develope a feel for? i dunno. maybe someone who knows what they're talking about will help me out.