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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:55 am
Profile Submissions This is where you must come to submitt your profiles, and use the format provided in the profiles thread. And just to not make it hard on you, it will be provided here as well. You must submitt your profile here, and then it will go under review. Just because you submitt a profile, that does not mean it will be accepted. Once it has been accepted, it will be posted in the "Listings" thread. You may not RP in this guild untill you have an accepted profile, and after that point, you may still need to go through training. I have declared that we are the elite of the Gaian military world, and I want to live up to that declaration. [b]Name:[/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] This should include your characters age, height and weight, as well as a general description of their hair, eyes, build, and other physical descriptors. You would also do well to describe your clothing. Using your avatar as a base is not acceptable. [b]Personality:[/b] How does your character think, act, and behave. This will require at least a paragraph. [b]Belongings:[/b] This includes weapons, as well as anything else you would happen to possess. Don't just list things. [b]Other:[/b] There is no definite criteria for this, just to include any information that you think we need to know. [b]History:[/b] This will entail your childhood and pervious experiences in life. You may not be some mysterious badass that came out of nowhere. This should have some good length to it. [b]RP Sample:[/b] This is your time to shine. If you want to get into anything, you'll have to prove your worth for it. Do not provide a link to a previously written sample unless it is with the character you are using. Also, take note that when writing your history, that nothing that has previously happened in the guild has happened. We are starting completely over. Sorry about that inconvenience. Note: It will help you to read this thread before you start making your character here.
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 5:25 pm
Name: Kyle (James) Anderson Appearance: Kyle, at 24 years of age, stands at approximately six feet three inches and weighs two hundred and twenty five pounds. He has long brown hair and dark blue eyes. His hair is of a silky texture despite it’s thickness and it tends to stay where Kyle puts it. His eyes are bright and you can see a large amount of expression through them. Most of the times you see him, he will be wearing a black assault shirt and black assault pants. He wears a custom made black shoulder holster with three extra magazine holders on the opposite side. When undercover or doing assassinations, he bears a black trench coat which conceals his arsenal. He does wear a light Kevlar vest but, that too, is hidden underneath his coat. If there comes a time when he can’t ware his regular clothes, he will ware almost the same attire. He wears digitalized camouflage assault pants and shirt, varying on the terrain type, and wears a combat Kevlar vest, balaclava, and tactical helmet. Personality: He is perfectly capable of being a smartass and, at times, does act like one. Other then that he is pretty laid back and follows orders pretty well. He likes to joke around because he feels as though if a job as serious as this is always serious, everyone will go insane, therefore, he tries his best to cheer them up. He is open to talk to anyone about anything because he likes to help people. There are rare times when he isn’t open to give advice and help out his team. One of the necessities for a successful fire team in Kyle’s book is that the team he is with needs to trust one another. They need to be close like family before they go into active duty. If someone makes a mistake, everyone needs to take the fall with him; they must all support one another. Like all the parts of a clock, they must function with precision, and if one piece fails, the clock won’t tell the time until the piece is replaced or fixed. While on the field, he acts mostly the same. After all, he can’t change who he is. He might add quirks here and there to keep the unit lighthearted and to keep their morale up. He doesn’t, however, accept slacking and the impeding progress. Most importantly, he likes to stick to the task at hand. Belongings: As his primary weapon, he carries the now cancelled OICW-program, M-29 project. It fires a standard 5.56mm NATO kinetic round and has an attached 25mm grenade launcher with a 6 round clip in back like a bullpup design. On top it has a ballistic computer for firing the grenades. While on the Ranger Team, during the first year or so, he signed up for the field testing of the OICW. He made some friends in the process. His comrade was dishonorably discharged for stealing some of the few they had there. They were never recovered. He met up with him before the hearing and he told Kyle where the guns were and to help himself. Normally, he wouldn't accept that but because he was going off the grid anyway, he didn't care. As a secondary weapon, he carries dual Glock 18’s with high capacity magazines with custom built silencers. He, lastly, has a Mk. 23 SOCOM. As an emergency firearm, he carries one USP 45. He has a Battle Knife which doubles as a bayonet. Other things might be thermal/nightvision goggles, grapple, radio built into his helmet, frag grenades and WP grenades. He also has other gadgets like Gas Masks, Tear Gas, trip wires, C4, etc. His layout changes when stealth is needed. He carries an UMP-45 and if a more compact gun is needed, an MP-5K. He doesn't bring the Glock 18's or the Mk.23. He has Dual USP's and a M-9 for backup. He has more then enough flashbangs, and 2 WP grenades if needed. If they need to capture someone, he brings tear gas and wears a MSA Millennium Gas Mask. Other: He considers himself an exceptional tactician and will give suggestions for operations. He knows CQC(Close-Quarters Combat) and aikijujitsu. History: Kyle was born to wealthy parents and was raised like a normal child. He lived in the San Francisco Bay Area and went to a private school there. He received rather high marks. During the course of his childhood, he tried racing, football, surfing and other things but he never stuck with anything. His parents dreamed that he would take over the family business that spawned all their fortune. However, he did not want to take over their company. At that age, he didn’t care about unbreakable condoms. By age 18, he was ready to go off to college. His parents had money saved up to sent him to Harvard but it never happened. Over the summer after his senior year, his parents were brutally murdered and all of their fortune gone.The police found out that some church radical killed them wanting to enforce sex before marriage teaching. Kyle had to sell the company, home and all their assets due to bills, minor debt, and restoration of the severely damaged house(from the murder). The crook, after stabbing them repeatedly, blew apart the foundation and left the house in a heap. The action also did left some money in his pocket. Not enough to go to school though. He knew now that the only way to get an education was if someone gave him a scholarship. He received several but none of it could cover any of the schools he wanted to attend. That is when he enlisted into the Army. He would have liked to go to one of his family member's houses but he had no where else to go. His parents lost contact with their families long before his birth. After Basic Training and a small tour. He applied for the Special Forces and was leading a team within 2 years after his Squad Leader was KIA. He led his Ranger Team through multiple operations and was accepted into the Delta Force, however, after 6 years of the Army, he was done. He wanted a normal life. He was Honorably Discharged with medals abroad including a Distinguished Service Cross, and 3 Purple Hearts.
One Purple Heart was received after becoming squad leader. He was still pretty young and inexperienced, however, so was his group. He accidentally led them into an ambush resulting in him getting shot in shoulder, through-and-through.
A second Purple Heart was during an operation in Afganistan, He lead his team in to recover intel from a bunker. He got it but on the way out, he was attacked resulting in them missing thier chopper. Basically his whole team received the Purple Heart, he personally was shot in the left arm. He re-established contact and were picked up 2 days later.
His last Purple Heart was acheived in a firefight in Iraq. one of his men was hit in the middle of a road and he went out with the medic to treat him. He was caught with a bullet right above the right part of his a** and it traveled up his back and ricocheted out off his rib, fracturing it.
He was given the Distinguished Service Cross upon his debreifing from his last operation. During that time, they reviewed his file and nominated him for it. RP Sample: Kyle sat the his desolate apartment. It was desolate of life, furniture, and light. The shades were pulled and Kyle laid down on the blanket-less matress spread eagle. He was staring at the brownish colored ceiling. It wasn't painted brown either. The leaks were uncountable. Kyle didn't care though, he was only here for the night. He got up and poured himself some scotch. He sipped it and walked out of the room in his boxers. He looked through drawers and in between couch cushions. He finally found his cigarettes. Kyle wasn't one to drink or smoke, especailly on the job, but he didn't give a s**t anymore. He wasn't to go back home where he coud actually inhale without grimacing.
The smoke emitting from the cigarette was the air freshener of this apartment building. The blackened walls and cheap...everything was worn out. Finally his alarm went off. He smirked, "It 's about ********' time." He torn open the blinds flooding hell's doorstep with light. Kyle closed his eyes and sheilded them with his hand. oce his eyes were adjusted, he looked out the window across the streets of New York City. The curtains were extremely heavy or Kyle was extremely drunk. When the curtains were opened, the sounds of NYC were bustling around the room like it was taking part on that spot. Kyle took out binoculars and saw the building.
It was a bank, led by someone named Carl Johanson. Evidently, Carl was more then just a president of a bank. Kyle watched until the men sat down at his desk. Kyle put on earohones and listened.
Carl spoke to a non-visual person from Kyle's view, "It's going me a long day."
Kyle chuckled as he sipped his scotch, "Hoho, this day is goign to be over before you know it I assure you."
Kyle has been at the apartment for a week prior setting up plans, escape routes and emergency routes. Kyle was a fan of worst case senerios and planned for them accordingly.
Kyle spoke to himself while watching the prey from afar, " 3, 2, 1..aaaaand...meeting!"
Sure enough, Carl spoke, "Oh s**t. I have a meeting."
Kyle laughs and threw the binoculars on the couch. He didn't have much time. He got out his laptop and found a connection in the city and started presing buttons. He got out a 95M from it's case and loaded it. He set it by the open window. He pressed a few buttons and took another sip from the glass. He walked over to the window and saw the meeting commence. He put on the earphones and matched the presentation perfectly.
"Banks are one of most important networks to exist on this earth. They are in charge of loans and safeguarding your personal gain."
It went on and on and Kyle was quoting it like a favorite song. Suddenly there was a knock at the door. He whipped around, "s**t!" He ran into the bedroom and returned with a silenced MP-9. He spoke, "Who is it?"
From the other side of the door a voice spoke, "NYPD. We have some questions for you." Kyle spoke, "Ummmm, this place is kind of a mess, how many people am I suspecting? I don't want two house parties this week." The detective chuckled, "Just me and Officer Bradley."
Kyle looked at the computer screen and the words were scrolling, " The time is near for action. These clients who try to beat the system must be punished!" Kyle knew that it had to go down now. If he missed this hit, he would have to spend another week planning. Kyle walked up to the door and opened it, the MP-9 held at his hip, "Officers...now isn't a good time. He pulled the trigger several times sending bullets into their chests. He dragged them in and onto the bed in a spooning position. He ran back to his rifle and shut the presentation off and got out a microphone while aiming at the culprits head.
Inside the meeting room the voice sounded masked and altered, "Mr. Hoban. Have you been wondering where all your money has been going? Have you? Let me ust tell you, Mr. Hoban, it isn't the clients cheating the system." Kyle paused as he pulled he bolt back and locked it back into place, "Mr. Johanson. Have you been selling weapons to the wrong people?" Just then a shot rang out and Mr Johanson was no longer in his seat, but on on the floor covered in blood."
Kyle spoke again, "Mr. Hoban, consider this, an engagement gift for you! I think that saving your bank chain is worth enough to Helen."
Meanwhile, Mr. Hoban had a look of horror on his face and Kyle said, "Oh don't look too surprised. It was either me or his suppliers! By the way, I'm looking forward to dinner next week."
Kyle cut the line and laughed, " I love ********' with 'em."
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Alucard von Dracali Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 6:22 pm
Name: Carlos Sanchez
Appearance: Carlos stands five foot ten with lightly tanned skin. He is also lean in build. Though he is twenty four, his clean cut face portrays one in his later teens. The only facial hair he has been able to grow is a nice full moustache. He has fine brown hair that is often kept short in length. His eyes are a dark brown and often can be mistaken as black, giving him a slightly cold stare.
Carlos, when not on duty, will dress nicely. His casual wardrobe is usually either khakis or a nice pair of jeans accompanied by a nicely ironed button shirt or polo. Just because he spends his time in the mud doesn't mean he has to parade as such. Depending on his mission, Carlos wears a variety of clothing ranging from a slick all black suit for espionage type missions to the down and dirty grunt uniforms when in a war. Carlos tries to shoot for the former as he prefers to stay blended.
Personality: Carlos tends to get cocky when it comes to efficiency and progression. Though he'll parade as a good samaritan when it comes to telling others about protocol, once on the field he's been known to take action. He is always efficient when it comes to the job and despises pointless bickering when the setting is to promote seriousness.
However, when not in uniform Carlos can kind of be a friendly person. He obeys the chain of command and respects his superiors. He still holds a dislike for inefficiency though, and will be open about it when it comes around.
Belongings: While armed, Carlos can be seen with two Springfield XD M913. A small engraving can be seen on along the barrel, El Cid. He will also carry on occasion an M16 battle rifle. He also carries a single battle knife hidden within his left boot. He also carries a pair of dogtags around his neck. They aren't his...but noone has been close enough to see the name engraved on them.
Other: Other pertinent information about Carlos can be simplified to his immense techniques in stealth and strategy and his keen computer skills.
History: Carlos grew up with his father. His father was a well known and well liked Captain in the military. Way back when military consisted of soldiers who fought for their country rather than ones that fought for money. Carlos was pushed to be physically fit since he was old enough to crawl. Growing up lean made his father angry and found Carlos to be a disgrace. No matter how Carlos progressed he could never be seen with respect in his father's eyes. He was able to pick up most anything faster than other soldiers. However, when it came down to physical brawn, his light stature had limitations. What he lost in strength and bulk, he made up for in speed and agility.
At the age of eighteen he joined the military, in hopes his father would start to respect him. After three years in the service he quickly rose through the ranks, but still his father found faults that he would point out in him. At the change in military battle, Carlos found himself moving to mercenary leagues, progressing as he became better. The next three years, Carlos fought honorably which gained him the title El Cid in his squad while he worked for the Spanish government. It means Lord. As in nobleman, usually fierce knights during the medieval ages.
RP Sample: Again another wall and again more repition of hand over hand and foot over foot. Carlos continued the slow pace, which didn't seem to falter too much, past this wall and the next and the next. He counted eight walls behind him and he was certainly starting to feel it. His arms and legs burned with fatigue and as he continued to the next wall wondered if he could make and how much more he could do. When he reached his ninth wall Carlos grabbed the rope with his right hand and used it to stable himself as he leaned forward, not falling simply because he had hold of the rope, and started to catch his breath. After a couple seconds he looked up at the wall and his shoulders dropped. With deep breaths he thought, Only one thing to do. He grabbed the rope with his other hand and firmly placed one foot against the wall and started his climb. Right foot, left hand, left foot, right hand and the cycle continued until he reached the top. Carlos again sat at the top of the wall to catch his breath and watched as the sun just hit the peak of the horizon.
Carlos let himself self off the edge slowly and grabbed the rope with one hand. Before he grabbed it with his second hand he started to rapel and instead decided to go into a plummeting fall. Not much deciding as it happened anyway. Disoriented in his falling, Carlos reached out to grab anything. He reached the wall but there was no grip and all he did was burn his fingertips. About halfway down, Carlos finally grabbed the rope and squeezed his fist as hard as he could. Then he used his other hand and his legs. Letting out a small moan of pain as the rope tore some of the skin off his hands. He held on for as long as he could and let go, falling about three meters onto his back knocking the wind out of him.
Carlos started to gasp for breath as his body seemed to reject all notions of breathing. After a couple seconds he could breathe again and started to do so in huge amounts. With deep breaths Carlos continued to lay there on his back cursing himself. He then looked at his hands and noticed that they were badly injured. He cursed himself again as he looked up, more along the ground, at the final stretch to his disappointment another wall.
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 6:33 pm
Alucard von Dracali
As for your appearance, what are "Assault" shirts and pants? What does that mean? Also, phrases like "It’s too late then." are a show of arrogance, especially somewhere where that's not even needed. I would avoid things like that.
As for your weapons, how did you come across your OICW? As that it was an experimental weapon, it is likely that only few prototypes were made, and so purchasing one would be an impossibility. Also, what kind of 'gadgets' do you have on you? Go into more detail on that.
And it's understandable that you understand CQC, as that you were an Army Ranger, and that you could preform a rarer martial art, but where would you receive training to fight with a katana, and for what reason would you have done so?
You see to be a well rounded child, very athletic, highly intelligent, and rich. You're from the OC, plus intelligence. So you're about to go to one of the most prestigous schools in the country, and everything is looking up, and then for no reason whatsoever your parents are killed and all of their wealth disappears, and you are put into substantial debt. Then, despite that you made very good grades and were able to get into Harvard, yet all your scholarship opportunities are now null and void? So the logical conlusion is to join the army? How did you become the squad leader, how did you get those medals, how were you able to just say 'I don't wanna any more' and quit? You leave too much not explained.
And as for your RP sample, you can keep that one if you like, but I'd suggest making a new one, and having it be at least twice that long.
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 6:46 pm
Alonzo Joker
It looks like you were trying to hurry up and get your profile done with, instead of taking the time to think it through. It's too short, you need to add in more information everywhere.
"Everyday individual" tells me nothing. Is he tall, short, average? Does he have brown hair, blonde hair, green hair? You've told me what his clothes are usually like, but does he look like?
For your belongings you just gave me a list and described the items on the list. Anyone if they like can go and look up the info you said about each of those items. Your belongings is more than a list of weapons that you'll use, it also says something about the character, what they're like, and what their style is.
Gaian history doesn't exist. As stated in the first post, nothing in the history of the Black Templars happened, it's all no longer in existance. We're starting completely over. And your history doesn't really say anything either, merely that he was part of a few associations. I will quote the description from the template for your benefit; "This will entail your childhood and pervious experiences in life. You may not be some mysterious badass that came out of nowhere. This should have some good length to it."
And about your RP sample, I have this to say: It is a characteristic of a good writer to be able to write about even the most mundane things. Anyone can write about saving the world or fighting evil aliens or demons, but it takes some skill to write about walking down the street. However, the most important thing that a writer must keep in mind is that they must be able to hold the readers attention at the least, and captivate them if they can. This is something that you'll need to work on, if this is a sample of your RPing, as it is so implied. If you like, you may submitt another one.
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 7:02 pm
Xenos Mortium Alucard von DracaliAs for your appearance, what are "Assault" shirts and pants? What does that mean? Also, phrases like "It’s too late then." are a show of arrogance, especially somewhere where that's not even needed. I would avoid things like that. As for your weapons, how did you come across your OICW? As that it was an experimental weapon, it is likely that only few prototypes were made, and so purchasing one would be an impossibility. Also, what kind of 'gadgets' do you have on you? Go into more detail on that. And it's understandable that you understand CQC, as that you were an Army Ranger, and that you could preform a rarer martial art, but where would you receive training to fight with a katana, and for what reason would you have done so? You see to be a well rounded child, very athletic, highly intelligent, and rich. You're from the OC, plus intelligence. So you're about to go to one of the most prestigous schools in the country, and everything is looking up, and then for no reason whatsoever your parents are killed and all of their wealth disappears, and you are put into substantial debt. Then, despite that you made very good grades and were able to get into Harvard, yet all your scholarship opportunities are now null and void? So the logical conlusion is to join the army? How did you become the squad leader, how did you get those medals, how were you able to just say 'I don't wanna any more' and quit? You leave too much not explained. And as for your RP sample, you can keep that one if you like, but I'd suggest making a new one, and having it be at least twice that long. 1. Assault shirts and pants are shirts and pants with extra padding where needed. They also have Kevlar stiched into them. 2. Then they shall be avoided. 3. While on the Ranger Team, during the first year or so, I signed up for to field testing of the OICW. I made some friends in the process. My comrade was dishonorably discharged for stealing some of the few they had there. They were never recovered I met up with him before the hearing and he told me where they were and to help myself. Normally, I wouldn't but because I was going off the grid anyway, I didn't care. 4. Gadgets - Gas Mask, Tear Gas, trip wires, C4, etc. I guess the appropaite words here is accessories. I couldn't think of one at the time. 5. Parents had the cash to go anywhere they wanted. I suppose they went to somewhere in asia and learned and it was passed onto me by my father. Nothing too fancy basic moves and what not. 6. I still had the scholarships they weren't enough to get me into Harvard or any other school I wanted to go in. Some radical church person wanting to enforce the sex before marriage teaching killed them. I joined the army because I had no where else to go. My parents lost contact with their families. Squad leader, O.K. Well, During one of the operations, my squad leader was relaying information to base, we were doing recon work. We came into contact with heavy weapons fire and he was killed. Kyle was then put in charge because of what the Army saw in training. The medals are complicated. 1) After becoming squad leader I was still pretty young and inexperienced, however, so was my group. I accedentally led them into an ambush resulting me getting shot in shoulder, through-and-through. 1 PH 2)After that, during an operation in Afganistan, I lead my team in to recover intel from a bunker. We got it but on the way out, we were attacked resulting in us missing our chopper. Basically our whole team received the Purple Heart, I personally was shot on in the left arm. We re-established contact and were piced up 2 days later. 3) Lastly, in a firefight in Iraq. one of my men was hit in the middle of a road and I went out with the medic to treat him. I was caught with a bullet right above the right part of my a** and it traveled up by back and richcheted out off my rib, fracturing it. I was rewarded with the cross after the Army reviewed my file and saw my resume and reports and debreifing, etc. That is went they offered me a postion is Delta Force. I left the army soon after because I had gathered enough money to start a regualr life up. I wanted at least part of a civilian life. 7/ I'll do that, but it'll have to wait if you don't mind.
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Alucard von Dracali Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 7:04 pm
Me=Me
So, your personality is that you're very serious when on the job, and nice and friendly when not, but always a**l retentive about efficiency?
Best belongings yet, and better than mine. You actually go as far to say the importance of each item or something special about it, rather than just say you have them or list weapons specs. And I think I may just know.
Granted that your character is not that old, it just seems as if your history is more of background into his personality rather than just history. I don't know necessarily what else you could do, but if you can, try to add something to it.
And for your RP sample, you'll just make a few seconds of actions? As with what I said of Alonzo, remember that this is a sample of your writing skill, and what division you get into will determine if you are able to even get into a division of your choosing. One thing that I would pay greater attention to is your stealth. Simply moving into and out of the shadows isn't going to cut it. Why would a room be so dark with a bright light to create such a contrast? If it's not very bright and dark, why didn't the General notice you when he came in? If he is a General in one of the most secure and guarded rooms in Germany, you don't think that he'd just walk in completely alone and unprotected, would you? As you well know, it's all in the details. I know you're a very capable writer, I've seen it. Now prove it.
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 7:15 pm
Alucard von Dracali Xenos Mortium Alucard von DracaliAs for your appearance, what are "Assault" shirts and pants? What does that mean? Also, phrases like "It’s too late then." are a show of arrogance, especially somewhere where that's not even needed. I would avoid things like that. As for your weapons, how did you come across your OICW? As that it was an experimental weapon, it is likely that only few prototypes were made, and so purchasing one would be an impossibility. Also, what kind of 'gadgets' do you have on you? Go into more detail on that. And it's understandable that you understand CQC, as that you were an Army Ranger, and that you could preform a rarer martial art, but where would you receive training to fight with a katana, and for what reason would you have done so? You see to be a well rounded child, very athletic, highly intelligent, and rich. You're from the OC, plus intelligence. So you're about to go to one of the most prestigous schools in the country, and everything is looking up, and then for no reason whatsoever your parents are killed and all of their wealth disappears, and you are put into substantial debt. Then, despite that you made very good grades and were able to get into Harvard, yet all your scholarship opportunities are now null and void? So the logical conlusion is to join the army? How did you become the squad leader, how did you get those medals, how were you able to just say 'I don't wanna any more' and quit? You leave too much not explained. And as for your RP sample, you can keep that one if you like, but I'd suggest making a new one, and having it be at least twice that long. 1. Assault shirts and pants are shirts and pants with extra padding where needed. They also have Kevlar stiched into them. 2. Then they shall be avoided. 3. While on the Ranger Team, during the first year or so, I signed up for to field testing of the OICW. I made some friends in the process. My comrade was dishonorably discharged for stealing some of the few they had there. They were never recovered I met up with him before the hearing and he told me where they were and to help myself. Normally, I wouldn't but because I was going off the grid anyway, I didn't care. 4. Gadgets - Gas Mask, Tear Gas, trip wires, C4, etc. I guess the appropaite words here is accessories. I couldn't think of one at the time. 5. Parents had the cash to go anywhere they wanted. I suppose they went to somewhere in asia and learned and it was passed onto me by my father. Nothing too fancy basic moves and what not. 6. I still had the scholarships they weren't enough to get me into Harvard or any other school I wanted to go in. Some radical church person wanting to enforce the sex before marriage teaching killed them. I joined the army because I had no where else to go. My parents lost contact with their families. Squad leader, O.K. Well, During one of the operations, my squad leader was relaying information to base, we were doing recon work. We came into contact with heavy weapons fire and he was killed. Kyle was then put in charge because of what the Army saw in training. The medals are complicated. 1) After becoming squad leader I was still pretty young and inexperienced, however, so was my group. I accedentally led them into an ambush resulting me getting shot in shoulder, through-and-through. 1 PH 2)After that, during an operation in Afganistan, I lead my team in to recover intel from a bunker. We got it but on the way out, we were attacked resulting in us missing our chopper. Basically our whole team received the Purple Heart, I personally was shot on in the left arm. We re-established contact and were piced up 2 days later. 3) Lastly, in a firefight in Iraq. one of my men was hit in the middle of a road and I went out with the medic to treat him. I was caught with a bullet right above the right part of my a** and it traveled up by back and richcheted out off my rib, fracturing it. I was rewarded with the cross after the Army reviewed my file and saw my resume and reports and debreifing, etc. That is went they offered me a postion is Delta Force. I left the army soon after because I had gathered enough money to start a regualr life up. I wanted at least part of a civilian life. 7/ I'll do that, but it'll have to wait if you don't mind. Okay, now put all of that in your profile up there. However, you won't really need to put in everything, such as how you got the purple hearts, though you should list where you have been wounded, as that these wounds will likely cause problems for you later on. Also, I was under the impression that you had to serve a set amount of time while serving in the military, and you cannot leave, especially when the country is in a state of war. Oh, and as for the weapons training, I would include that you haven't really been formally trained, but rather that you've just been taught the basics. You never know when you're going to get into a sword fight and you're going to need to know that background info. razz
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 7:41 pm
Name: Brian P. Landry Appearance: He is about 5' 7", 140lbs, 25 years old; Brown long hair usually worn in a ponytail fashion. His main clothes are the SpecOps armor or jumpsuit with a tactical vest housing all of his attachments and magazines. His pants are black cargo pants wihich also hold magazines and the like. He wears a belt holding rings for the grenades and holster for his Px4, and on his pant leg on his thigh is a sheath for his combat knife. He wears a shoulder harness for his beretta 92FS and two ankle holsters for his beretta Tomcats. His build is average, and his eyes are hazel. His skin is tan/olive, and he looks like a Sicilian after a days hard work. Personality: Brian is quiet, although he isn't shy. When he becomes friends with someone, he usually talks to them a lot. His few times of speaking are either witty comments, or military related. He thinks of everyone as humans, which gives him an edge in combat. He doesn't think of them as "People" and so he doesn't let emotion get in the way. He does his job and does it efficiently. Belongings: He carries Beretta made firearms. These include the new Cx4 Storm (with silencer, laser, flashlight, etc.), the Px4 Storm(Flashlight, silencer, laser, etc.), the Rx4 Storm(silencer, laser, flashlight, etc.), One Beretta 92FS fully customized (Adding silencer, laser, flashlight, etc.), and two backup Beretta Tomcats(Silencers, lasers, flashlights, etc.). He carries a black combat knife, and has room for his grenades. Usually on a mission he would take two or three frags, one or two smokes, and three flashbangs. Along with those are two phosphorus grenades, and n a pocket are his two thermite "mines." He has a walkie-talkie attached to his shirt so he could quickly talk to HQ and he has a helmet with special characteristics to show Thermal, Night, Tactical, and Electrical imaging, with the ability to have two visions at once running on the translucent-black visor. In the helmet is a microphone to his squadmates and an option for closed feed or open feed. His manner of missions usually call for closed feed transmissions so noone on the outside can hear. He also carries a backpack which is also black, and carries mags, survival kits, and food and water. Also, in his pockets he caries a pocket-welder to make silent entries. Other: He is a very silent guy. I mean this in two different ways. One is he doesn't talk much. The other is that he can move with no detection, making him ideal for Special Operations units. Any military organization he has worked in has used his skills to infiltrate, sabotage, and kidnap. He doesn't have many emotions which show, and mostly it is joy or anger, and you can tell when he becomes angry at you or something else when his eyes became slightly more open and his face looks extremely stern. History: Brian was born into a regular Italian family from Sicily. He was brought up as a Sicilian and has been exposed to death and guns at an early age. After he left his parents to go and live life, he encountered a mafia in the city. He was inducted into it and was made into a soldier. He learned more about guns while inside and was exposed to much more death. After the mafia was destroyed however, he was on his own, finding things to do. He finally decided to become a freelance hitman. He also decided to become special security for certain high-profile businesses for side money. He performed many contracts, leaving barely any trace of of his ever being there, and the traces he left were dead targets in wird circumstances in which they died. Some he would throw over the edges of buildings, some he would shoot and throw into the mountain range to freeze. Sometimes he impersonated a waiter and poisoned the food given to the target, and then left after taking off the make-up he put on. He always finished the job and did it quietly. Then, he came upon an informant telling about the Black Templars, and he thought his skills could be used as a freelance military elite. RP Sample: Landry climbed the ladder up to the top of the building. The cover of night veiled his movements and he reached the top. Pulling out his zipline, he shot it across to the target building. He hooked onto it and jumped of the edge of the building, sailing through the air silently on to the top of the office building. He unhooked and flipped on his helmet visor's diagnostics.... Power........On. Enhancements........working Vjuke............Working Headphones..........working Diagnostics Over. Full system functional. Landry tapped his helmet and the screen cleared. He turned on Night vision in his right eye and tactical vision in his left. He made his way across the roof to the ventilation shafts and took out his pocket welder. holding up the welder against the frame, he clicked the switch and lit the welder with a lighter, starting the process instantaneously. The Vent slowly melted from its frame and the fence came off ten seconds later. Landry removed the fence and crawled in feet first. He placed the fence on again and welded it back into place to deter any guards who came on the roof. Crawling through the vents, he came upon an office. He brought up the building schematics on his tactical vision and looked where his target's position was....he was right on top of him. The man wasn't there, so he must have had to use the bathroom. Landry knew he wasn't there at the wrong time because he read everything he could on the guy and even found out his daily schedule. He took out his 92FS and attached a silencer to it. Also, he put on a laser pointer. He aimed it out at the desk and waited for the man to come into the office. A few minutes passed and the man came in. He said good night to some one as he closed the office door. The man flicked on the light and Landry night-vision blared, trying to compensate for the light. As the man walked over to his chair, Landry aimed the laser and pointed it directly at the man's head. He followed him as he slowly walked to the chair, and once he stopped to turn it around and sit, Landry pulled the trigger. A click, shell, and puff of smoke were all that came out of the gun. What came out of the man's head was a different story. The bullet went inside and came out the other side, leaving a large hole where it exited. The man fell forward onto his chair and rolled off, leaving blood every he went. The room started to stink as the man's bowels let loose and his wastes came out. Landry holstered his pistol again and crawled back to the vent's entrance. He unwelded the vent and crawled out, placing and welding the fence back onto the vent shaft. He made his way to the zip line and grabbed on. He put his legs up for extra grip and crawled upside down back to the other roof. Once there, he cut the line, leaving a near invisible string against the wall of the office building. He descended the back service ladder into a dark alley and took off his helmet and gloves and weapons, placing them all into a duffel bag and walked down the alley with his knife in his hand, concealed behind his wrist. Once making it to the end of the alley, he peeked out and saw noone walking around, and darted across the opening to another alleyway leading to his car. He continued running silently through the alleyway and made his way to his car on the other side. He unlocked the door and hopped in, driving away to make a roundabout trip to home, heading the opposite direction.
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 7:48 pm
Xenos Mortium Alucard von Dracali Xenos Mortium Alucard von DracaliAs for your appearance, what are "Assault" shirts and pants? What does that mean? Also, phrases like "It’s too late then." are a show of arrogance, especially somewhere where that's not even needed. I would avoid things like that. As for your weapons, how did you come across your OICW? As that it was an experimental weapon, it is likely that only few prototypes were made, and so purchasing one would be an impossibility. Also, what kind of 'gadgets' do you have on you? Go into more detail on that. And it's understandable that you understand CQC, as that you were an Army Ranger, and that you could preform a rarer martial art, but where would you receive training to fight with a katana, and for what reason would you have done so? You see to be a well rounded child, very athletic, highly intelligent, and rich. You're from the OC, plus intelligence. So you're about to go to one of the most prestigous schools in the country, and everything is looking up, and then for no reason whatsoever your parents are killed and all of their wealth disappears, and you are put into substantial debt. Then, despite that you made very good grades and were able to get into Harvard, yet all your scholarship opportunities are now null and void? So the logical conlusion is to join the army? How did you become the squad leader, how did you get those medals, how were you able to just say 'I don't wanna any more' and quit? You leave too much not explained. And as for your RP sample, you can keep that one if you like, but I'd suggest making a new one, and having it be at least twice that long. 1. Assault shirts and pants are shirts and pants with extra padding where needed. They also have Kevlar stiched into them. 2. Then they shall be avoided. 3. While on the Ranger Team, during the first year or so, I signed up for to field testing of the OICW. I made some friends in the process. My comrade was dishonorably discharged for stealing some of the few they had there. They were never recovered I met up with him before the hearing and he told me where they were and to help myself. Normally, I wouldn't but because I was going off the grid anyway, I didn't care. 4. Gadgets - Gas Mask, Tear Gas, trip wires, C4, etc. I guess the appropaite words here is accessories. I couldn't think of one at the time. 5. Parents had the cash to go anywhere they wanted. I suppose they went to somewhere in asia and learned and it was passed onto me by my father. Nothing too fancy basic moves and what not. 6. I still had the scholarships they weren't enough to get me into Harvard or any other school I wanted to go in. Some radical church person wanting to enforce the sex before marriage teaching killed them. I joined the army because I had no where else to go. My parents lost contact with their families. Squad leader, O.K. Well, During one of the operations, my squad leader was relaying information to base, we were doing recon work. We came into contact with heavy weapons fire and he was killed. Kyle was then put in charge because of what the Army saw in training. The medals are complicated. 1) After becoming squad leader I was still pretty young and inexperienced, however, so was my group. I accedentally led them into an ambush resulting me getting shot in shoulder, through-and-through. 1 PH 2)After that, during an operation in Afganistan, I lead my team in to recover intel from a bunker. We got it but on the way out, we were attacked resulting in us missing our chopper. Basically our whole team received the Purple Heart, I personally was shot on in the left arm. We re-established contact and were piced up 2 days later. 3) Lastly, in a firefight in Iraq. one of my men was hit in the middle of a road and I went out with the medic to treat him. I was caught with a bullet right above the right part of my a** and it traveled up by back and richcheted out off my rib, fracturing it. I was rewarded with the cross after the Army reviewed my file and saw my resume and reports and debreifing, etc. That is went they offered me a postion is Delta Force. I left the army soon after because I had gathered enough money to start a regualr life up. I wanted at least part of a civilian life. 7/ I'll do that, but it'll have to wait if you don't mind. Okay, now put all of that in your profile up there. However, you won't really need to put in everything, such as how you got the purple hearts, though you should list where you have been wounded, as that these wounds will likely cause problems for you later on. Also, I was under the impression that you had to serve a set amount of time while serving in the military, and you cannot leave, especially when the country is in a state of war. Oh, and as for the weapons training, I would include that you haven't really been formally trained, but rather that you've just been taught the basics. You never know when you're going to get into a sword fight and you're going to need to know that background info. razz OK. I will. Yes, you can sign up for a 5 year deal. And we aren't really in a state of war anymore. Just upholding the peace. Also the Rangers have moved on. It;s up to the Infantry to hold it now. Therefore, I can leave. I'll change that.
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 5:32 am
Name-Drake Collins
Appearance- Drake looks like your everyday individual. Since he tries to keep a low Profile most of the time. He usually wears a black Romani shirt, and freyed blue jeans. He only wears sneakers, so you would never see him with Leather boots, or dress shoes of any sort. His Black/Silver Camo he wears mostly on very large Operations, and he is rarely seen in this clothing.
Physical Characteristics- Drake is 5'11 with Dark Blue Eyes. His hair is long and of a dark brown color, but it is not black. He is of an average Build,though he is strong, he is not very 'Muscular'. Drake due to his height weighs 195 pounds.
Personality- Drake is very Loyal, and Trustworthy. He is not cocky or conceided. But he does hate getting told hes not good enough for anything,since he is very outgoing, and very Optimistic towards his own future. Tactics are used in alot of his behaviors on the field, so he makes a plan before he takes any actions. Drake obeys all rules set for him, and does not step out of line. All fights between members he tends to try and break them up, since it is bad Sportsmanship to fight between one another.
When he isn't working, Drake is a riot. He tries to make people laugh every which way he can, and tries not to start pointless arguments. Out of his job he is very laid back, and relaxed.
Belongings-
Weapons- Drake carries his FN Five-SeveN, because it is un-noticable, and is very small. Not a very powerful weapon, but it is good if he wants it to be concealed. When not using his Five-Seven , He chooses his custom Desert Eagle, because of its power. For his Assault Rifles, Drake usually carries his M4A1 Carbine, for its accuracy.This weapon was given to him by a Sergeant at his Military Training Camp, and is scarred from battle. It has three bullets hole marks on it, which makes it special to him. One is on the Butt of the gun, one right under the barrel, and another just above the trigger, but he still thnks it works like a charm. Other than Guns, he has one other small item. Drake has a pen in the back of his pocket, which decoys as a knife.
Other Belongings- Drake has one dog tag, which is always hanging from the side of his right pocket, with his nickname engraved on it. On his person he always carries a steel lighter, and a box of 'Marlboro' Cigarettes.
Other- He has very good accuracy with a Long-Ranged Weapon,But he lacks in Close Quarter Combat.
History- Drake grew up in Brooklyn, New York, and was living his life to the fullest as he was a kid. He was living with his Father, since the early death of his mother. His father was a Military expert, and was highly trained in all fields of combat. Though his father had never really been into action. Drake was advised to not join the Army by his father because he thought it was to dangerous, but something about it intrigued him. Once he hit the age of 18, he was off to a Military training camp in Nevada about 200 miles north of Las Vegas. When he started out, he was the worst Rifleman there, but he progressed, and became one of the best. Drake lacked in the Close Quarter Combat part of the training, but he Advanced, in all of the other portions. After the years passed, he went about the different ranks. After four years of training, Drake was out of the Military Training. Once out he was now officially on the waiting list to be put into battle. After the Military, he regularly shifted to other Special Force Organizations, other than the Military. For about a year or two Drake was working Undecover for the U.S Government, with a Special Forces unit, to help gather Intel on a Terrorist Cel. Once he was finished with the Operation, he was finished with the Special Forces. Since then he has been in and out of Military Training meetings for new Recruits,but hasn't gone into Combat since.
Roleplay Sample- Drake had just awoke in his hotel room. His eyes trailed to the clock on the wall. "3:25 Am?, Man I went to sleep to early." The night before Drake had been busy on a special 'business trip', so he had fallen asleep early. It was to late for him to go back to sleep, he wasn't tired anymore. So he sat up on his bed. His pants were still on and his shirt was missing, it must have been on the floor somewhere. A Gold cross lay around his neck, He wasn't Christian or anything, he just liked the way it looked. Drake outstretched his arms over his head letting out a slight yawn. His arms dropped, and he feeled around on the nightstand for his cell phone. Once he found it, he flipped it open since it would be his only source of light. He flipped the phone upside down holding the screen towards the floor, trying to locate his shirt. After several minutes he found it along with his shoes, in the bathroom. The light on his phone went off, so he shut the screen, with that he flipped the light switch in the bathroom, and looked in the mirror. Drake put his shirt on and slipped on his shoes, which were already tied, but large enough to were he didn't have to do anything to strenuous to place them on(Lazyness XD). He reached for his tooth brush, but was all out of 'Crest' "Damnit" Drake said as he laughed. The soles of his sneakers brushed up lightly against the carpet, as he made hi wasy back to the night stand. His eyes scanned the table for his Five SeveN, but he coldnt find it, he opened the top drawer, and there it was just laying there. Drake took it out and checked the clip, it was loaded, he placed it on his belt halfway inside and behind his pants, and made sure his shirt was covering it. For the time being he had to keep a low profile, so his Five-SeveN was all he had. Which was really all he needed. With that, he grabbed his hotel key, and placed it in his pocket, along with his phone. Drake walked to the wooden door, and opened it, he peeked his head out, and walked out the door, swiftly and quietly.
As he walked into the filthy germ infested hallway, he picked up his pants, which slightly dragged on the floor. The hall way was full of garbage, and a few bums, but he didn't care,nothing would stop him from getting breakfast. he quickly jogged down the steps, and into the Lobby, which was only slightly cleaner than the hallway. The door was halfway open due to another man who just eited, Drake quickly went through the door before it shut. He decided to go up th black for a little something to eat. As he approached the dinner, he saw a man walk in. The mans hand seemed to be inside a brown bag, and he was wearing a dark hoody. It was still dark outside, so he couldn't really get to good of a look at the guy. Drake peered his head around the corner to see the man remove his hand from the bag, and point it towards the waitress. She quickly ran over to the cash register, and started to open the bin. Getting into the place was going to be harder than he thought since the door had one of those bells on it, that when you open it, it rings. The waitress saw Drake outside but tried not to show that she was focusing on me. he nodded to her and placed his index finger over his mouth, and kicked the door open. It shot up fast, and the man turned around and looked straight at him. His eyes were a dark brown, and now the man was pointed the gun at Drake. The waitress from behind the counter quickly jumped on the man, wrapping her arms around his neck. He started to fire shots, one after another. She covered his eyes with one hand, but he still kept shooting blindly. Drake jumped to the side, than dashed for the mans arm. With that he grabbed his arm, and pointed the gun towards the ceiling. Shots were fried once again, through the plastered ceiling, and some debrie landed on the floor. Using his arm he jabbed his elbow into the mans stomach, and he fell forward, and the girl let go of him. Drake kneed the man in the nose, as he bent over, and, he dropped the gun. The blood from the mans nose driped onto the floor, as he hit the ground hard. "Got any rope?" Drake asked, as the woman ran into the back to retrieve something. About a minute later she came back with some tie wrap, but it was good enough for now. He grabbed the mans arms and tied his arms to the bar, right under the counter. Drake kicke dthe gun into the middle of the floor, away from him. The police quickly arrived in the front, and Drake saw them. He didn't want to get into anymore Confrontations today, so he ran out the back and onto the street. "Guess I'll go back to the hotel, and order something...." He shook his head, as he let out a slight laugh. He turned down the street passing some police cars, on his way back to the hotel.
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 3:05 pm
Edited profile...deciding to go back to training. Hope it works. My personality is serious always. It's just when not on the job he can be friendly from time to time. Efficiency and productivity are things that are high on his list. So yes, a**l retentive. I'm not sure exactly what I should add to history. I started when he was young and slowly went up...still unsure of what you want me to do there. Thanks for the compliment. People can have their assumptions...some may be right, some wrong.
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 8:33 pm
6Pack1
Well, about your personality, you're a quiet guy who has no trouble killing people. That's very well rounded. Explain more. Oh, and you spelled your name wrong.
And let's see, you carry two assault rifles, four pistols, a combat knife, ten grenades, two mines, food and water, survival kits (which aren't explained as to what they contain), tons of extra ammo (you need five different kinds of magazines), and a pocket welder (which is not exactly stealthy)? Don't you think that's a little bit excessive? Do you really need to carry six guns on you at all times? Walkie Talkie fine, closed feed microphone fine, visor fine, but what the hell is up with the different imaging’s? What are tactical and electrical imaging? Night vision goggles are quite bulky, even more so with thermal imaging. Having them both within your helmet? An impossibility.
As I said with Me=Me's original RP sample, you say that you are an amazing infiltrator, but how? Where did you learn how to become so good at it? How is it possible to "move with no detection"? Does this mean that he can walk right past people, where they'd obviously see him, but he cannot be detected, so they ignore him? And you seem to be in a near-sociopathic state, which I do not believe is something you understand. regardless, that would be something important to add to your personality, as that it would be all encompassing of it.
Your history is pretty much, exposed to death, joins mafia, exposed to more death, becomes freelance hitman, causes death, employed by high-end reputable companies despite having no 'official' background or credentials, causes more death. Then you go on to explain how you killed people for most of your history and then have a weak reason for why you have come to the Black Templars. I would advise rewrite it and actually explain the cause and effect of everything that happened. Your character is young and does a lot of things, so you could at least write how and why he did everything, rather than just list it. Also, as that you haven't really joined the Black Templars yet, I would do as everyone so far has done and just leave that part out.
And as for your RP sample, it is, for the most part, fine. However, if you're crawing through vents in a building, it's unlikely that you'll be able to fit into one unless it's a main vent, in which case, it's unlikely to be passing over someone's office. Seeing as you're in a vent, wouldn't there be either hot or cold air flowing through it, making it either very hot of very cold in there? Going through a vent is not the most stealthy way either, as that you would cause a great deal of sound when crawling through it. Vents are comprised of very thin metals held up by support bars every so often, keep that in mind. Keep in mind as well that if you were to enter a ventilation system from the room of a building that there is a considerable drop, generally about ten feet, and so you couldn't just start crawling, you'd have to jump down and then somehow reposition yourself as to go from a vertical to a horizontal position. Also, as for your computer screen visor helmet thing, that's not something workable. This guild was edging a little, a little, on science fiction, but I'm taking it away from that. Besides, if you were to have it, it would cost dozens of thousands of dollars, something that you would not be able to afford. Furthermore, a minor thing, why do you wait untill you're about to shoot him to put on the silencer and the laser pointer? And if you're using a laser pointer, don't you think that he'd see it? Oh, and why do you use the zip line? Wouldn't that be more visible than if you were to just climb up the side of the building? Keep in mind that zip line is not small, as that it's designed to hold the weight of the 'zipper' and would be seen by anyone with a window, not to mention you.
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 8:54 pm
Name: Vince Longfeather
Appearance: Vince is very streamlined in his build. Standing at 6'2 but only weighing at 223 pounds. His limbs are rather long and he appears emaciated with a rather sunken face and very pronounced high cheek bones. He has very short bronze hair that bleaches to a more golden color during the summer season, and sharp green eyes that always seem to be looking beyond or through what he’s facing.
Whenever he goes out on a mission he wears a night camouflage special ops breathable immersion suit that covers everything but the feet, hands, and face. Along with that he wears his old combat boots, thin black gloves and a mask. When not on duty he wears what ever is on hand that’s comfortable to him. Usually a plain shirt and long pants, though again with his boots.
Personality: Patience is his most highly held virtues. It is seconded only to his strange sense of honor and pride. Vince is very reactive and empathic so will change his normal reaction often based on who he is addressing or the way they’re acting. He is rather polite and will apologize if he bumps into someone or makes a mistake of some kind, but tends to really only ever seek company with those who in his eyes are honorable or worthy individuals. Often he can be seen praying and making a strange gesture over his heart with two hands. He is very closed about his faith except to those who have truly and deeply earned his trust. One thing that he has divulged is his wish to go to ‘paradise’ when he dies, believing that this can only be accomplished through battle.
Even off the battlefield he has adopted a sort of long rolling step from moving with the intent of not being seen and being quiet for so long. Despite his ability to connect with people so easily he tends be alone and not talk much. Preferring to keep to a smaller circle with few to none. As well as being superstitious, he is also very spiritual and knows how to read tarot cards.
Belongings: His main weapon is an M107 .50 caliber special application scoped rifle. He also carries a 7.62 second generation SOCOM close-quarter battle rifle. And last, two black tempered long knives with cloth wrap handles.
Vince is almost never seen without his black combat boots, ragged and patched multiple times, each lace has duct tape holding it together. His spec ops body suit along with the gloves and mask are also his. The special three layers of the suit allows him to comfortably cross most extreme climates and conditions. One layer cools, the other is a heat trapper, while the outside protects from moisture and can have kevlar attached to a few places from it’s capability to have sections easily replaced.
Also a hand sized metal rectangle with a great white dragon on a black background with a pentacle above it’s head. In a small pouch along with the plate of metal he has a pack of worn tarot cards.
Other: He strives to be a true expert in the art of the perfect shot. The use of firearms is where his abilities lie. While he is reasonably capable with his knives, he mostly uses them as tools or for silent take downs, whether thrown, or stabbed into a vital area.
History: Vince grew up in northern Minnesota along the border and very close to Red lake. His family lived far up into the forest so very young he was taught how to hunt and survive on his own should the worst happen. His father was a former army soldier, but even though he had gained medals that would shame a general all of his doings were classified. And his mother was a field medic. When they went up to their house they eventually were adopted as members of an Ojibwe tribe, thus earning the name Longfeather when his father shot a raven from two miles away while it was above the center of where an ancient ceremony was taking place.
Vince was home-schooled until he earned a high-school diploma at sixteen. While he wasn’t a boy genius by any means, he was still capable if he cared enough to apply himself. Which wasn’t all that often. With a bit of help from his father he faked his age in order to get into the army. He hasn’t seen his family since. After a few last favors called in by his father, Vince was able to be admitted to the covert unit after he completed boot camp and advanced weapons training. The missions were deadly and grueling, pushing him to his limits and forcing him to become better or die.
During some of the endless hours waiting, or marching, or staked out with just himself and his rifle he often thought of things. Of the nature of the world and why he fought so hard for a cause that was rapidly becoming vain and self-destructive? Endless hours alone will eventually transform most anyone into a philosopher and thinker. It certainly did for Vince, at least from his perspective. Like his father, he gained numerous medals and awards. The more he got, the less they meant to him. Eventually he discreetly presumed MIA and joined a new lucrative military group he had heard whispered among the other spec ops members. The Black Templars.
RP Sample: “I wonder who you are, officer?” Vince spoke to himself. He often did this as it helped him to sort out his thoughts. The trigger of his M107 rested easily against his right finger and the smoothness of it could be felt as he had taken off his gloves for this particular shot. The massive, flat-toped boulder he was laying on was warm from baking in the sun, and the long scrub grass on top of it was comfortable. Vince could wait here for days and not notice. In fact he had.
For the past four he had watched and waited, first to spot his prey, then to size up his opportunities and make ready. After waiting the four days to memorize the routine of the other he had at last shifted his aim by a few increments to aim at the final large blast doors in the courtyard of the compound spread out in the bowl depression in the land. Now, on the fifth day, covered in grass and a savannah camo covering, he loaded his only depleted uranium shell into his rifle.
Vince was just another chunk of overgrown dark stone among a field of pieces just like him. “What is your story I wonder?” He continued again. “Why have you earned this bullet? Would you be someone I would like, or hate? What of your family, or friends?” How many had fallen to his shots? How many stories had gone left unfinished or untold because of him. His thoughts were clouded this way for a long while until at last the sun was about to go down and his target arrived.
It was in a heavy APC that deposited him so close to the beginning of the courtyard. Clearly a high ranking officer based on his attire and access to a seemingly high security and secluded bunker. “Come on, you’re almost there.” Vince gently soothed. It all came down to this final moment. His target came into sight, saluted, then the back half of his head was blown to bloody chunks and fragments. “NO! I MISSED!” While he completed his objective of the elimination of the target, it had not been the way he had planned it. Missing his mark by five full inches.
Inwardly beating himself to a bloody pulp he slithered down the back of the rock and made his way to the evac point.
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