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Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 4:58 pm
That Time of Year
It’s that time of year again When the world appears perfect
Lights glisten with new fallen snow The breath is suddenly visible
Yet the lonely heart Becomes invisible
Everyone looks happy Surrounded by loved ones
Yet the lonely heart Is left to long for a lovers close embrace
She remembers What it felt like
To be Safe and secure
But it is this time When she yearns to feel This way again
To be held by a man Who cares for her And for whom she cares
She felt bliss once She had it ripped away
Now she watches All the smiling faces
She pretends that she is The girl held by the guy
Now is the hardest time For her to be alone
She is left to ask One question of the night “Will somebody find me?”
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 2:31 pm
Fireyforce That Time of YearNow is the hardest time For her to be alone aliveShe is left to ask One question of the night “Will somebody find me?” there! Now it rhymes 3nodding It's nice.
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 8:07 pm
eh I don't like to make my poems rhyme, and the word alone was there for a reason. Thanks though xp
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 9:28 pm
Another poem, I just wrote it last night:
Confused Hearts
I lie here at night Unable to sleep While the world around me Continues to turn
My mind travels To a man who Is half a world away
I know you said You just wanted to be friends But all semester you've been saying things That make me believe we're something more
I need you to come home So we can sort this out So we know where we stand So my heart won't keep me up at night
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Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 3:45 pm
Fireyforce eh I don't like to make my poems rhyme, and the word alone was there for a reason. Thanks though xp biggrin I'm the same with my poems... I think I will post some next time I have them out.
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 12:14 pm
good to know i'm not the only one who doesn't write rhyming poems
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DifferentInYourEyes Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 6:25 pm
I barely write rhyming poems, check mine out
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 1:25 pm
i have been reading every ones poams but i have a quastion do they allway have to be about love ?
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 6:59 am
Ameute Fireyforce That Time of YearNow is the hardest time For her to be alone aliveShe is left to ask One question of the night “Will somebody find me?” there! Now it rhymes 3nodding It's nice.What on earth in this poem does "alive" rhyme with?
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:02 am
spanxtheweasel i have been reading every ones poams but i have a quastion do they allway have to be about love ? Love's a very strong and complicated emotion, so it's easy to write about. Any images laden with emotion will do. I wrote a poem about a dead bird once. I forget what emotion lay behind it, but it wasn't love.
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 5:28 pm
I don't know why there are a lot of poems about love. Personally a lot of my poems are about emotional times that i have gone through. Emotional times meaning love, pain, happyness, loss. The ones I've posted are around both love and pain. I should post a new one at some point.
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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 7:37 pm
Working Past the Pain
I’m trying to find myself For so long I tried to be What everyone wanted
The perfect student The perfect friend The perfect daughter The perfect lover
Then my world crashed around me I had been emotionally abused But never knew it
I built a wall around my heart I hid all emotion Soon I became cold as steel Never again would a tear betray me
I thought I had dealt with My pain by suppressing it Just tried to forget By hiding behind my religion
You managed to shake my stone wall And some emotions leaked through Apparently I had been mistaken I rebuilt my shields, but they weren’t nearly as strong
Yet for some reason You still get through My barriers don’t work with you Regardless of what I try
One day I’ll reveal my past I think you’d understand it best But first I have to grasp What I’ve been hiding behind my emotional wall
I cannot just allow Two years of pain and guilt To flow from my system I’ve relied on them for too long
Just hold me tight And realize what you have accomplished You started to break through my shields But I’ll fight you
Be patient with me We’ve both been through hell and back But my wounds apparently haven’t closed
Thank you for listening Thank you for being my friend.
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