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Did you like my Poem?
  Yes but it was so sad.
  No because it was to sad. T_T
  No because I never got it?
  it was ok but I really feel bad for the guy. :3nod:
  I hope that it will never happen to me.
  That poor Man
  That poor man, I wish I was there to give him an hug.
  I hope that he will found the girl girl and they will love each other.
  I hope that he could found it in him to love again. :3nod:
  He was a great person that need someone to love and get love back and return.
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Batmen

PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:50 pm


It a poem that I made up myself. Most of my life I made happy love poems and will show them to my ELA teacher to get marks and to get him to read them and see what I spell wrong and what I did right but there is a lot of sad things happened in this world so I try to mad a sad poem about a Man that could take a lot of pain and he will keep his feeling inside of him and through his hold life, the Pain that he goes through he never cried once and when he found a girl that he love he could let one of his feeling go, his feeling to love. He goes nuts over this girl and he tell her that he love her and later he found out from her, that she was going out with an other guy and that she was sorry, she could not take his kindness any more. Will list talking about the poem and here the poem itself, feel free to add Comment to this Topic and if you like it ior don't like it because it to sad please say so by posting here..I know it will take a lot out of you but afte you do it, you will feel good about yourself and you will get some free gold too. 3nodding Will here the poem:

A Single Man

A single of Drop of blood with no tears show the world that you can take the pain,
A cut that comes from the elbow and move down your arm getting bigger as it goes, and not showing a single tear.
A heart full of love that beat as fast as the wind that blows throught your hair, could be stop dead in a second...
A Man will never be the same. He may walk back on the same old path that goes towards the woods.
A same Single person will not show it feeling because all his feeling is inside of his body trying to get out but as this man stay in the woods,As the pain goes down his arm that was hurt, as his heart will start again. He will never let a tear out.  
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 3:22 am


I love the bitter truth to it. It's incredibly sad when it seems that sort of thing is inevitable. Very unique.

king_jack1


Kittine
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 9:53 am


It's very sad poem.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 10:20 pm


I really liked this peom. cry It was so sad and so honest about how human nature. Your very good at this. 3nodding I hope you keep writing. ...Iris

Iris Snow


The Game is here!

PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:14 pm


Iris Snow
I really liked this peom. cry It was so sad and so honest about how human nature. Your very good at this. 3nodding I hope you keep writing. ...Iris


he made a new one I believe. I well tell him to come here.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:23 pm


The Game is here!
Iris Snow
I really liked this peom. cry It was so sad and so honest about how human nature. Your very good at this. 3nodding I hope you keep writing. ...Iris


he made a new one I believe. I well tell him to come here.


Yes that ring Game I did make a new one. A nice and happy one.

Not so sad but very happy. ((Not Gay! I hate when people say if you are very happy then you are gay. I say that the people that said that don't know what they are talking baout. Lol)) Any way the new poem is called:

My True Love

Batmen

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