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Eatmyshortswithyummypie

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:00 pm


This is just some of my work that I'm not too embarrassed to post.

Please read and review. I would really appreciate it.

I would like both support and criticism. It is up to you which to use.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:03 pm


Emo Poem

I fall unto the cold cement
Blood dripping from my once smooth wrists
The turmoil inside squeezes my heart
I lie here, the cold seeping into my bones
I have never felt pain so great
Unlike those before me, I use no common item
To cause this damage to myself I use one blade, so sharp
It has sat by my bedside all these years, never to be used
But now it's sheath is gone
It's length covered with my blood
I picture you before me
Looking down at me in disgust
Just like when I told you the secret in my soul
The blade is raised one last time
Then plunged into my heart  

Eatmyshortswithyummypie


Eatmyshortswithyummypie

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:04 pm


(From grade 6)

I watch as thousands of snowflakes fall from the sky
Their infinite beauty piercing my eyes
They fall so softly
Yet none can see
How softly they fall onto a tree
I watch as they melt into the leaves
With the profound beauty one can only see
When they have the love of another human being  
PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:06 pm


Bed of Nails

My head hits the soft comfort of my bed and I keep wishing it was a bed of nails
Sharp tips piercing my skull
Shoved forcibly into my brain
Blood splattering on the walls and dripping onto the floor
Then I'd stand one last time
Jump into the air and land with such force
That the nails would drive up through my legs
All the way to my knees
I'd bite back a scream
Causing the copper tasting crimson to flood my mouth
Then with my last moments of life
I would cut into my flesh
My final message for you
Three simple words I've never managed to speak
And those three words are
'I love you'  

Eatmyshortswithyummypie


sirrashigal

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 8:14 pm


Eatmyshortswithyummypie
Bed of Nails

My head hits the soft comfort of my bed and I keep wishing it was a bed of nails
Sharp tips piercing my skull
Shoved forcibly into my brain
Blood splattering on the walls and dripping onto the floor
Then I'd stand one last time
Jump into the air and land with such force
That the nails would drive up through my legs
All the way to my knees
I'd bite back a scream
Causing the copper tasting crimson to flood my mouth
Then with my last moments of life
I would cut into my flesh
My final message for you
Three simple words I've never managed to speak
And those three words are
'I love you'
nice. most people are thinking/ feeling it and your jsut the one to say it congrats mind if i steal it if i give you credit?
PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 3:24 pm


your Emo poem is preatty good but, you have should of used onto, instead of unto, just sounds better. It's interesting, kinda reminds me of a f**ked up romeo and juliet...lol with something else thrown in...


have to go but the others were good

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Kon Thai Ka

PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 11:49 am


Hello! blaugh
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