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beyond absolute

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 2:22 pm


I'm bored.
I want to rate tekteks.
So if you give me one, I will. :]

For those of you who know me, I was one of those
AT, match-happy peoples. Before the whole banning thing.

Plus I look like a hillbilly on purpose right now. = =

BTW, if you don't give a crap about matching, that's fine.
For some that works. Mind you, some.


Oh, and Edgar is free to join me in bashing--err, rating-- at any time. xP

So post. D:<
PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 2:23 pm


Oh, and if someone wants to,
they can rate this.

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Shades will NOT look like that if you put them on an actual avatar.

beyond absolute


Katana~Takura
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 3:16 pm


lol. How about rating my current avi?
PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 3:25 pm


ooh, rate mine pleasies

Lazuri-Hikari
Vice Captain


beyond absolute

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 5:26 pm


Katana~Takura
lol. How about rating my current avi?

I have to say, you’ve improved a lot. ^^;; Before…Well, yeah.
There's not enough yellow up at the top.
Legwarmers are a silver pocket-watch shade of blue,
not an angelic shade.
Needs more bright blue around the middle.


Alright, here's the ''helpful'' part.
Change the complex band to yellow, add decorative daisy.
I guess the leg warmer thing will have to do, though, but you could add hte pocketwatch = =;; I almost suggested Winged Anklets, but then again...
Right.
Magician's wand should be in the other hand.
If the layering didn't change, you sohuld also be able to wear black gloves under the white ones you have.

There's just too much black at the top and not enough at the bottom, I guess.
How about, black shoes, yellow pimpin cane?

Here's a random version of your avatar, with SOME of the suggestions.
Not too different.
The wand's not a different color of blue, what're you talking about? > >

So try a few different things out on tektek. I would help more but I'm lazy.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 5:32 pm


Whoa I typed a lot more than I thought. o-o

Whatever, neh.

Lazuri-Hikari-

ooh, rate mine pleasies


> <;;
Ehehe...

It matches, finally, sort of...

I don't like sitting avatars, however, and so I'll only help you a little. (Haha.)

First...sitting on momo is BADDDDD. D:<
Brown goes with nothing on your avatar, so mebbe you can copy my old avatar's brown items and match it. C:
Chya. So... You know how on some avatars, the default/bra top avatars works? Yours doesn't. Lykk, srsly. This one needs some clothes.
And...you've been using the same item choices as like months and months ago. ROMANI GLASSES ALMOST NEVER LOOK GOOD ON FEMALE AVATARS.

The whiskers or whatever the hell they are seem to make your head look smaller. Or maybe that's just your avatar. Either way, they're not worth it.

You need leg warmers or, uh, winged anklets. Too much concentration of black on the lower half. Kiki's pretty much unmatched.

= =

beyond absolute


beyond absolute

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 5:37 pm


Now someone rate my 5 minute-ish Tektek up there. dramallama
PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 6:15 pm


Me being Kiwi and not an AT-ing Kiwi, I give your 5-minute TekTek a o9//1o.
I don't know why, I just do.
Personally, I don't really like it.
The skirt seems too... hmmm... I can't find a word for it.
Basically, I just don't think it goes.
OH! The skirt just seems like all dusty-ish.
I don't know what else to say, really. xD
Though I do like your interesting combination of colors. :3

Kiwi`sama
Crew


Katana~Takura
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:05 pm


Almighty Tampon Vender
Katana~Takura
lol. How about rating my current avi?

I have to say, you’ve improved a lot. ^^;; Before…Well, yeah.
There's not enough yellow up at the top.
Legwarmers are a silver pocket-watch shade of blue,
not an angelic shade.
Needs more bright blue around the middle.


Alright, here's the ''helpful'' part.
Change the complex band to yellow, add decorative daisy.
I guess the leg warmer thing will have to do, though, but you could add hte pocketwatch = =;; I almost suggested Winged Anklets, but then again...
Right.
Magician's wand should be in the other hand.
If the layering didn't change, you sohuld also be able to wear black gloves under the white ones you have.

There's just too much black at the top and not enough at the bottom, I guess.
How about, black shoes, yellow pimpin cane?

Here's a random version of your avatar, with SOME of the suggestions.
Not too different.
The wand's not a different color of blue, what're you talking about? > >

So try a few different things out on tektek. I would help more but I'm lazy.

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oh yeah...about the whole "me getting better" part...this avi is heavenly's handy work xd

I luvvles you both (heavenly for the original one and Tsaii for the constructive criticism)
PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:38 pm


Rate my avi please? ninja

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Edgar The Fanciful
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 8:30 pm


OMG LAWL I'M ALLOWED TO MAKE FUN OF RATE PEOPLE'S AVATARS. :3
PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:00 pm


Katana~Takura
lol. How about rating my current avi?


OMGLAWLIRATEJOO.

xD

Anyway. ninja

The blue's are mismatchedd. o: And really the skirt is a giant clump, while the headband is so little that it is unblanced. you should get a larger shirt to cover the skirt, and maybe try to add some more blue in the center, Daisy's breeze gloves should do fine. I agree with Tsaii about having too much black on the top, and too little on the bottom. I think you should either get a larger hat, or change your hairstyle to lessen the black, preferably the first. Then like Tsaii suggested, Black Sandals, plus Yellow socks, or Black shoes with a yellow cane. And you need some yellow at the top, not too much to unbalance, but just a bit. The Decorative Daisy or Complex Band should work fine. Personally, I would just remove the pale blue from the avatar because they are all mismatched and the leg warmers look strange layered over the skirt. You could then get some short white pants to get some more in there. THere's a bunch of stuff you could add, so I'm going to make a little suggestion tektek for you, like Tsaii.

You could do something like this. I'm too lazy to continue right now. o:

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Edgar The Fanciful
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Katana~Takura
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 10:10 pm


ehh...why not? I was just questing for the angelic pendant when I decided that it was futile and that it would take forever...so I have like 14.6k to work with here 3nodding

Edgar's tektek still is keeping in mind a lot of things tsaii said so I think I shall go with dat one blaugh
PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 12:01 pm


Tektek's too slow for me and Edgar's better than me now, I haven't
bothered with doing this stuff for months, I stopped going to the AT since August. = =

And I can't be mean to Lexentttt. D:
You do it, Jona--Edgar.

beyond absolute


beyond absolute

PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 12:02 pm


Kiwi`sama
Me being Kiwi and not an AT-ing Kiwi, I give your 5-minute TekTek a o9//1o.
I don't know why, I just do.
Personally, I don't really like it.
The skirt seems too... hmmm... I can't find a word for it.
Basically, I just don't think it goes.
OH! The skirt just seems like all dusty-ish.
I don't know what else to say, really. xD
Though I do like your interesting combination of colors. :3

Thanks. x3
Whee.
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