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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:09 pm
Life Support
You said "Hello" for the first time here. I was so immature. I can barely remember that day. It's all just a blur.
Now it's 3 years later, And you're nowhere to be found. Now I'm crying on my special day, And you aren't around.
I won't be able take this much longer. It's just to much to bare. You just left without a single word Like you didn't even care.
I miss you so, Dear friend of mine. I can't just let you go. I need you by my side.
I never saw you, But you were always here. You were like my life support. I need you, my dear.
As I Lay In My Coffin<--old. needs editing...
As I lay in bed, And say good-night I await the day That I shant be awakened As I sit up Late into the night I can only wonder Why must I cry? Why do I even wish I would die? How could I think that you loved me? How could I think that you cared? Why can you not see, That when I'm with you I get scared? I wish that you would take the time Just to get to know me. But you would never think of me, As anything but a friend. I sit up late at night While I'm trying not to fight This feeling deep inside. It's something that I can't hide. While I think and dream It only seems To be getting worse As I lay in my coffin And die
Come And See<-- writen when i was 7.my first song.
Jump out of bed Put my feet on the floor Seems a little like I have not done that before Put on a smile It's a beautiful day Get in a big balloon And just float away
Come with me And you will see. What we can be together baby Come with me And you will see What we can be together forever. Shake it up And never stop. We're gonna climb Til we touch the top.
Like a butterfly Fluttering around. We're never ever Gonna touch the ground
Faded Lies
Life is but a lie that someone has placed in your mind. It sometimes holds a memory of someone left behind. In this battle between reality and fiction, nothing can be seen but what there is in front of your eyes. You may not see it at first glance, but if you give it just one chance, you will see it eventually, and this is how it will appear to me: look closely into their eyes, and you will see those faded lies...
Mystery Girl<-- wrote this for a little script i wrote for school.
Mystery girl From another world Nobody knows how much she's worth Nobody cares But everyone stares Nobody knows the girl inside All she wants to say is good-bye,so long I am going,going,gone I can see that I'm not wanted anymore So I'm packin' up And I'm out the door
You Try<-- needs editing...
Chorus: You Try To wipe your eyes So nobody can see The tears you've cried People ask you how you're doing And you say that you're okay But you're not Cuz inside you're dying Inside you're crying Inside you're trying To hide your fears Hide the tears you've cried
You turn away from the light And walk into the darkness of the night You hide from everybody around you So no one can see your face See your disgrace
Can you feel me? Can you hear my voice? Hear me screaming Inside your head As you lie in bed Every word I said Ringing Throughout your head Do you see me? See my empty tears They are no longer Filled with my fears
Chorus x2
Kill me End my pain Dry my tears You will never see me again Heal my heart Make it whole once more Tell me that you love you love me And that you will never leave
Chorus x2
Be hear for me When I cry my eyes out When I spill my heart out Tell me that you will be here Forever Never leave my side Don't let me be swept away By the tide See the tears I've cried It seems as though I can't hide My love for you No matter how much I try
Please give me some constructive criticism. I have more poems and songs that I may put up later, but they need major editing before I do...
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Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 1:51 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:44 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 5:11 pm
I like the last two lines the best of life support. I could do with a bit more on why this person was your life support. What did they do before this to be the life support?
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 8:04 am
he was just my best friend...
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