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[.~lilblualien~.]

PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:09 pm


Life Support

You said "Hello" for the first time here.
I was so immature.
I can barely remember that day.
It's all just a blur.

Now it's 3 years later,
And you're nowhere to be found.
Now I'm crying on my special day,
And you aren't around.

I won't be able take this much longer.
It's just to much to bare.
You just left without a single word
Like you didn't even care.

I miss you so,
Dear friend of mine.
I can't just let you go.
I need you by my side.

I never saw you,
But you were always here.
You were like my life support.
I need you, my dear.


As I Lay In My Coffin<--old. needs editing...

As I lay in bed,
And say good-night
I await the day
That I shant be awakened
As I sit up
Late into the night
I can only wonder
Why must I cry?
Why do I even wish I would die?
How could I think that you loved me?
How could I think that you cared?
Why can you not see,
That when I'm with you I get scared?
I wish that you would take the time
Just to get to know me.
But you would never think of me,
As anything but a friend.
I sit up late at night
While I'm trying not to fight
This feeling deep inside.
It's something that I can't hide.
While I think and dream
It only seems
To be getting worse
As I lay in my coffin
And die


Come And See<-- writen when i was 7.my first song.

Jump out of bed
Put my feet on the floor
Seems a little like I have not done that before
Put on a smile
It's a beautiful day
Get in a big balloon
And just float away

Come with me
And you will see.
What we can be together baby
Come with me
And you will see
What we can be together forever.
Shake it up
And never stop.
We're gonna climb
Til we touch the top.

Like a butterfly
Fluttering around.
We're never ever
Gonna touch the ground


Faded Lies

Life is but a lie that someone has placed in your mind.
It sometimes holds a memory of someone left behind.
In this battle between reality and fiction,
nothing can be seen but what there is in front of your eyes.
You may not see it at first glance,
but if you give it just one chance,
you will see it eventually,
and this is how it will appear to me:
look closely into their eyes,
and you will see those faded lies...


Mystery Girl<-- wrote this for a little script i wrote for school.

Mystery girl
From another world
Nobody knows how much she's worth
Nobody cares
But everyone stares
Nobody knows the girl inside
All she wants to say is good-bye,so long
I am going,going,gone
I can see that I'm not wanted anymore
So I'm packin' up
And I'm out the door


You Try<-- needs editing...

Chorus:
You Try
To wipe your eyes
So nobody can see
The tears you've cried
People ask you how you're doing
And you say that you're okay
But you're not
Cuz inside you're dying
Inside you're crying
Inside you're trying
To hide your fears
Hide the tears you've cried

You turn away from the light
And walk into the darkness of the night
You hide from everybody around you
So no one can see your face
See your disgrace

Can you feel me?
Can you hear my voice?
Hear me screaming
Inside your head
As you lie in bed
Every word I said
Ringing
Throughout your head
Do you see me?
See my empty tears
They are no longer
Filled with my fears

Chorus x2

Kill me
End my pain
Dry my tears
You will never see me again
Heal my heart
Make it whole once more
Tell me that you love you love me
And that you will never leave

Chorus x2

Be hear for me
When I cry my eyes out
When I spill my heart out
Tell me that you will be here
Forever
Never leave my side
Don't let me be swept away
By the tide
See the tears I've cried
It seems as though I can't hide
My love for you
No matter how much I try


Please give me some constructive criticism. I have more poems and songs that I may put up later, but they need major editing before I do...
PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 1:51 pm


anything???

[.~lilblualien~.]


[.~lilblualien~.]

PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:44 pm


PLEASE?!?!?!?!
PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 5:11 pm


I like the last two lines the best of life support. I could do with a bit more on why this person was your life support. What did they do before this to be the life support?

Henneth Annun
Captain


[.~lilblualien~.]

PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 8:04 am


he was just my best friend...
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