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LearningtoBreath63
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 1:41 pm


How can these hands
That do so much good
Do all the bad
That he never would
How can our spirit grow
In a mind full of hate
There is no redemption
For the soul who waits

Til it's all said and done
I don't want to be the one...

...Who has to fight this battle
All by myself
Frozen in rejection
Fighting for my health

How can this mind
With such great abilities
Fall to the hand
Of the one that makes us bleed
And all prisoners that can be set free
Are decided
To a life or misery

Til it's all said and done
I won't be the only one...

To fight this battle
Bleeding to my death
Frozen in time again
With nobody left

If this battle never ended
What would happen to my soul
Will I mend the scars
That my body can not hold

To fight this battle
I won't be the only one
Frozen hearts can be undone
Through the strength of the son
PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:10 am


I am guessing this is metphroic. What is it symbolizing?

cherrilie__x
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LearningtoBreath63
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 9:38 am


Es-kun
I am guessing this is metphroic. What is it symbolizing?
It's basically saying humans have the ability to do so much good but why do we use it for evil and the line "Through the Strength of the Son" is saying through the strength of God (Jesus) we can undo the sin and bad we have caused.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 1:41 pm


I agree totally. It's sort of like what Paul said in one of his many letters (I can't remember which one). It was something about how he does things he doesn't want to do and doesn't do the things he does want to to do.

metocloud
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LearningtoBreath63
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 3:35 pm


metocloud
I agree totally. It's sort of like what Paul said in one of his many letters (I can't remember which one). It was something about how he does things he doesn't want to do and doesn't do the things he does want to to do.
Except for in mine it's talking about doing good while still doing evil. Mine is about both.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 4:53 pm


I realized that after I thought of it, but it still reminded me of it so I wrote it.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:31 am


I've got- second hand experience with that kind of thing >.>
PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:08 pm


Second hand experience? Never heard of that expression. (amazing, I really don't know everything.)

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 6:12 pm


-le gasp-

OMG APOCALYPSE
PostPosted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 3:08 pm


I know.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 6:01 pm


RPPPP~

I have softball practice tomorrow =3
PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 1:52 pm


That would explain your absence...I've been waiting to find something like this.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 2:59 pm


hehe... -is still depressed- WHAT KIND OF SICK, HEARTLESS PERSON WOULD GET AN APOLOGY AND NOT CARE!?
PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:43 pm


umm...a sick heartless person?

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 6:03 pm


v.v arg
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