Please rate these poems. I would like to know how others think about it.
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This night
Trains passing by
The sun standing high
The night is beginning to fall
Stars coming to me
Trains still passing by
Then there is a silence
The last on for tonight
Now is is just me
With stars watching closely
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After summer
Winter comes near, while leaves are falling,
After turning yellow, orange, red or brown.
Everywhere it can be seen, exept indoors.
Only outside you can hear the wind,
Going through the trees,
Feel the rain on your skin,
And the autumn breeze through your hair.
From a window you only see the gray sky,
Hear the raindrops shattering loud on the glass,
With inbetween only a minute of sun.
It doesn't only have a negative side,
The kind that makes you down.
Just smile when it rains and as the sun breaks through sing a happy song.
Don't stay inside and be depressed,
Get out and celebrate the fall.
