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Disease of the Flesh

PostPosted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 12:31 pm




Please rate these poems. I would like to know how others think about it.

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This night

Trains passing by
The sun standing high

The night is beginning to fall
Stars coming to me
Trains still passing by

Then there is a silence
The last on for tonight
Now is is just me
With stars watching closely


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After summer

Winter comes near, while leaves are falling,
After turning yellow, orange, red or brown.
Everywhere it can be seen, exept indoors.
Only outside you can hear the wind,
Going through the trees,
Feel the rain on your skin,
And the autumn breeze through your hair.

From a window you only see the gray sky,
Hear the raindrops shattering loud on the glass,
With inbetween only a minute of sun.

It doesn't only have a negative side,
The kind that makes you down.
Just smile when it rains and as the sun breaks through sing a happy song.

Don't stay inside and be depressed,
Get out and celebrate the fall.


 
PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 12:29 am


w0w i like it!

ur good blaugh 3nodding heart

mess_with_me.f.o.b


Disease of the Flesh

PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 6:33 am


Newest poem:

Me: The puppet

I am a patchwork clown,
a doll with a little bit of human.
People always think I'm funny,
but what I do has no reason to me,
like I'm controlled by a puppeteer,
a thought that makes me fear.
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