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A song I wrote((Opinions please))

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Hanalulu man

PostPosted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 6:01 pm


opinions please?
The miracle of death
A bloody effigy
Eyes stitched shut still see
The bloody traction lines of despair that will always be

Say a prayer for me
6 by 6 hail Mary’s
Staple shut me mouth and then send me your false sympathy

I wanna leave it all behind, before they place my on this ******** land mine

Chorus:
Even you the sides
Slit slowly out eyes
The miracle of death
The miracle of desperation
Fight myself with no sides
Meaning trapped between
The miracle of death
The miracle of hesitation

Fallen around me
What’s lost will always be
Staple shut me mouth and then send me your false sympathy
Please say a prayer for me
I’m only half alive you see
Embalm my corpse and send me 6 feet underground

I wanna leave it all behind, before they place my on this ******** land mine


Chor: x2
PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:34 pm


i like it. very hot. xd

[.~lilblualien~.]


Ciora

PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 7:32 pm


It sounds so very.. Christian.

*wrinkles her nose*
PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:55 pm


I like it. ^-^

1 Broken.Soul

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