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Jdness
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 5:29 pm


ok so here's the next one of my little writtings...hope you all like it...tell me what you think...

"Here in this realm,
Where my true powers lies.
With no limits or bounds,
I cannot be held.

In this state of death,
I give you life!
To be who you wish
And go where you will.

But alass, with the morn comes my curse!
And with the sun you die again,
And remember nothing,
Only a trace of something beyond your grasp.
With an unheard voice which calls for the night
To bring the moon,
So that you may live again
In my world of dreams!"


sorry no pic to go with this one...
PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 5:43 pm


Wow, i think this is a contender for my other favorite one of your writings.
Awesome!
I like this very much. cool

Shad0w_Frost
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Jdness
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 5:45 pm


which one is the other one you like? the one with the pic? thanks...it definitaly feels good when people appraciate my work
PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 5:53 pm


Yeah, i was talking about the 1 with the pic ,but i like all of them so far.

Shad0w_Frost
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EloraEnchanted
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 12:20 am


Yeah I think I like this one the best! I am not sure why, but it just feels solid. You dont have to try to imagine anything, You can see it.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 9:59 am


heck yeah i really like this one as well most definitaly good stuff and keep them coming

akuma_kumori


Savanah7
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 11:06 pm


tehehehe I actually liked the one you sent me lalalalala in my mail ^_^ *hugs* But of course I luuuuuuuv this one too... You are truely talented ^^
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