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 Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 5:27 pm
sadness
all over
its eating me up
i cant talk
to depressed
lost a good friend
darkness
pulling me away
in to my own quiet world again
so sad cant talk
i think
i have to
call you some
other time besides
today
but
I.M me
i might call
but i will
be sad
cant go to bed
have no other feelings
besides
sadness
losing the best
friend
a person
that
teched
me all the stuff
i know today
a person i
could trust
has made my life
sad
so plz
try
to get me out
GET ME OUT OF MY WORLD
i want you
darkness covering me
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:35 pm
a little scattred...but it's okay.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:44 pm
Yeah, pretty good. 3nodding It could flow a little more, but the emotion is good and acurate. Trust me, I know what it's like...
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