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 Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 10:27 pm
In my dreams...
I'm something, angelic, demonic
Nothing and everything inbetween
I'm all in black with a dragon to kick
He lays on my head, his claws tend to stick
My blade that kills me
Wings on my heals
But as I fly, why can't my soul repeal?
And yet the hardest part is done
And the birds that fall fall without no one
Trees wilt into the ground, but I tell you
I'm still standing, and the world don't need me
So fill up a glass and drink to the homeless
Cause the world's gaining life from murdering me
[So go to sleep, please, the house is just burning
Those who fought have fallen out of fear
They never earned it, just kept up hope
But who was that man that gave us their show?
And those who fought gained from the reaped and sowed
Where's my sword?]
Take a brother, come sit down
Theres an army where one was found
Your wages mean nothing
Just count the sparrows, the sparrows
What numbers? We're insane!
Now they've got no place to run
Save their home town Soddom
To let the sand take their sorrows
(And heads)
Chorus
And though their hearts are so hurt
And their heads never worked
The surgeon who is dead helps more than the live
The sparrows lick the dirt
And the ravens eat the fruit of the hurt
And people have no more means...
Than to know the continuation
And the Heaven's aggrovation
To turn the angel's anger over
To shake hands with the Jehovah
The dignity of our Savior, saved by those who died
Living for his return, because He is Alive!
Chorus
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 2:15 pm
I..I loved that. It was amazing. eek
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 1:42 pm
Thanks! It's... not my best, I think, but the support's apriciated!
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:14 pm
don't kid yourself, it's really good.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 6:04 pm
Yeah, it was worded interestingly o.O
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:30 pm
yes, it was interestingly worded.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:44 pm
you just switched the adjective and the noun around and made a better sentence than me...I am so offended
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 5:48 pm
That I did. Sorry about that. It's my instinct.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:06 am
It's cool, my grammar is le crap anyways
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:36 pm
It's not a grammer thing....it's a style thing.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 5:45 pm
okay then, my style is le crap >>
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 3:00 pm
it just needs a little work
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 7:26 am
hehe...I bought this book called Woe Is I and it's the "grammarphobe's guide to better English in plain English" xD
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 4:11 pm
Ooo...sounds like a good read.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 5:28 pm
IT WAS
I mean, all my friends called me nerd (like I didnt already know that) for reading it but I lubbed it >.>
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