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 Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 6:03 pm
Quote: One time in a world far always from earth, on a planet called Gaia in a town called Barton. There was a small Café that was worked by friends. It was running well but one day something happened the owner of the Café disappeared with his girlfriend and no one noticed what had happened until one man did.
That one man’s name was Larimix, he was sitting at one of the computers checking on the inventory when he looked up. “Hm I haven’t seen Modest in awhile,” he then got up and headed for behind the counter and headed in through a door to where 4 offices where. He walked down to the last one and went to go turn the door handle when he noticed a note. He pulled it off the door and read it.
“Dear Friends,
I have been in a bind and won’t be here for awhile. Hep got sick and I’m taking care of her. She also got grounded some how and might not come back. Alex you and Larimix are in charge until I get back.
Your friend,
Modest. Emo”
Larimix looked around the hall way and headed out into the main part of the café. He came up to Wolf who was making hot chocolate for himself.
“Hey Wolf read this,” Larimix said handing it too him as he came up too him.
Wolf took the paper, and read over it real quick. He had almost dropped his cup when he was reading it but sat it on the counter top. “Never saw this coming,” Wolf said handing the paper back.
Then Rider came into the Café panting trying to grasp air. “Guy’s,” She said still trying to breath. “Rj .... He got in a car crash.” Ok we are starting over. The frist person to post will have to do the next Chapter. We do only One A Day So it'll be better. No one can do two stories in a row. You have to have 500 words or more and make good to where if you wrote it for school you where aiming for a 100. Microsoft Word helps.
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 2:04 pm
Thank you commander. I will start work on chapter two, again I thank you.
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 2:22 pm
Your welcome.
And yeah the last thread got to crazy.
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 2:37 pm
Chapter two.
Wolf and Larimix looked at each other simultaneously and then to Rider. Wolf then asked where RJ was and if he was hurt. Rider then looked to her left and put her head down, again asking Wolf asked the girl where RJ was and if he was hurt. Rider told them it wasn’t anything too serious but RJ was in the hospital. Larimix then asked about the other driver. Rider told the two that the other driver was fine. Larimix sat down on a chair with his hands going through his hair, head down. After a second He asked how long ago the accident was. They found it to be just about an hour. “We should visit him” Wolf said in a sad voice. “I will stay here and tell Alex what happened when he gets here. Wolf, can you drive?” Larimix asked handing his keys to Wolf. He agreed and the two left for the hospital. Shortly after they left Alex came in the back way. He yelled out. “What it is all” walking in to the front of the store he saw Larimix on a chair crying. “What’s up Lar?” Larimix looked up at Alex and told him what happened to RJ. Alex sat down on a chair, now looking like Larimix was when he first came in. “I feel terrible now.” Alex stated. “Well I know it’s nothing too bad.” Larimix then went and turned on one of the hanging TV’s and flipped to a local news show. It was on a commercial. After the commercials where over it told some of the stories, nothing about the accident made the top news, but it was the first story. The announcer then started to say what happened. It happened just an hour ago. A car crash that could have been easily avoided if a child had just been at school. A kid at the age of thirteen was skipping school and making trouble. He ran into the street for reasons unknown, but we do know that he had earlier made graffiti a block away from the accident. Officials say that he is being questioned and he has no injuries. As for the two in the accident one driver is suffering a broken arm, the other is walking away with only two scratches.” Larimix then switched off the TV as the stories switched. See Alex nothing too bad happened.
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:23 pm
i wanna do the next part may i 3nodding and tell everyone tere part has to go with the story some parts were with People not even from the guild in one and some are off a little did mine and i cant post it tomorrow so here it is and its goooodd..
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:44 pm
ONCE A DAY PEOPLE. scream
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 12:14 am
I waited till it said 17 the date. You posted on the sixteenth. but no offence I agree with Commander on that one. Also Kya wanted to be entered in later in the story. Plus Rider and Commander went to visit Rj. And the Cafe is empty exept for Alex and Larimix, unless the others where in the back, they where not introduced yet.
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 8:19 am
dont be soo upset its gone it was late and i didnt want to be the last one writing it would make it had to follow along with everyone esle.. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 12:04 pm
larimix I waited till it said 17 the date. You posted on the sixteenth. but no offence I agree with Commander on that one. Also Kya wanted to be entered in later in the story. Plus Rider and Commander went to visit Rj. And the Cafe is empty exept for Alex and Larimix, unless the others where in the back, they where not introduced yet. I'm in the cafe.
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 8:35 pm
I made you though.
“We should visit him” Wolf said in a sad voice. “I will stay here and tell Alex what happened when he gets here. Wolf, can you drive?” Larimix asked handing his keys to Wolf. He agreed and the two left for the hospital.
See? =p It was you and Rider who left.
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 3:55 am
well how was i suppose to know it was me i though no one even left so i donno u confused me....
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 8:45 am
so we only post once a day sweatdrop thats gona be a killer for me sweatdrop
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smoothiebuns Vice Captain
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smoothiebuns Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 10:20 am
Alex shocked at what he heard, ‘Broken arm, and scratches.’ Alex couldn’t help but worry for his dear friend. “Where’s everyone?” he looked around watching the desolate Café. Larimix tried placing a smile on his lips, “Commander and Rider are heading to the Barton Hospital as we speak.” Alex nodded, “That’s good to hear.” “Where‘s the one who caused this tragedy? ” Alex stated this in a cold manner. “What are you planning Alex?” said Larimix puzzled at his question. “I just…” he said as he stood “Want to know who did this, is all.” Larimix just said “Barton hospital with Rj…” Alex smiled, “Good…lets pay him a visit.
Alex held his keys in front of Larimix, “You coming or staying behind?” he said turning his back on larimix heading towards the door. Larimix began to think, ‘should I, or shouldn’t I’ was what ran through his head. “I’ll-I’ll stay here, just incase anyone else shows up. Alex chuckled as he heard his answer, “Not a surprise…someone has to man the fort while we’re gone..” he nodded, but before he headed out the door he turned his head back to view his friend, “Wish me luck..” he said with a laughter. Larimix puzzled at his remark couldn’t help but think of what Alex’s actions would be towards all this.
As Alex stepped into his car he couldn’t help but close his eyes and visualize Rj’s body laying in the hospital. “Rj…” is all Alex said as he started his car and darted off in the direction of the hospital, speeding like usual wanting to see his friend safe and well cared for. Larimix heard Alex’s car and the sound of tires screeching through the city, “We don’t need another person in an accident Alex…” Larimix said out loud shaking his head starting step up the café for customers. He knew her would soon get word of Rj’s condition from his friends.
The car moving through traffic at an incredible speed, all Alex thought of was Rj and the kid who caused all this. Alex soon saw the words that brightened his heart, ‘Barton Hospital’. Being in the same place Rj and the culprit were housed he ran into the lobby. He wore a smile, “Hello miss.” he said to the receptionist, flirting his way to find information from her, he managed to get a room number. As they left the janitorial closet , 422 was embedded into his mind. The women cleaned up well and got back to doing her job, as they left each others companies she turned back and winked at him. Alex just smiled and winked back, then went in search of this very room. 442.
Larimix was back at the Café pacing back and forth, then jumped at the sound of the phone. “Hello?” was all that he said. The voice spoke back, “I’m here…” Alex said, Larimix felt relieved to hear back from one of his friends, “I’m going to pay someone a visit…” “Who?” Larimix said, what was said next made Larimix’s heart sink. “I’m sorry…” then the sound of the phone dial hit Larimix’s ear. ‘I’m sorry.’ Putting the phone down, Larimix sat down to ponder those words, what could Alex be thinking, “I hope its not serious…” larimix sighed.
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