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These are two sonnets, stuff I've never tried before!

Sonnet I: Moon, Why Art Thou So Blue?

O' moon, why art thou so blue this evening?
An unrequited love perhaps tonight?
Does the bard now refuse you whilst he sings?
Are men not inspired at but one sight
Of your beauty and divine grace although
You are the essence of love and of lust?
Why is it that you are so full of woe?
Are men the object of your now lost trust?
Cheer up o' celestial love goddess
Thy doleful and weary spirit divine
Hath sadden all men, now full of distress
Smile, and let your love come down and shine
For tears will spill if so sad you do stay,
Never 'fore have men wished for light and day!


Sonnet II: My Life, a Soliloquy

This love I have never spoke of before
A moment fleeting, it has passed me by
Life is a soliloquy, evermore
With a heavy heart and a heavy sigh
Death was but an alluring thought 'til now
A guilt ridden last chance escape method
A way for me to skip the why and how
To end all pain from a wound that has bled
The sadness from my heart and from my soul
I have shared my thoughts and feelings alone
Surrounded by people, not in the whole
The flame from my life's candle has been blown
Life for me has been a soliloquy
In this darkness I am finally free

... It's a typo, supposed to be 'now'

Now I must go fix that.

A soliloquy is a theatre term. It is when a character makes a speech revealing his or her inner thoughts and feelings, it is done wither alone or unaware of the other characters being present.

Since you like Shakespeare I will you that as an example, in Romeo And Juliet during the balcony scene when Juliet says, "Romeo Romeo, Wherefore art thou Romeo?" That whole speech is a soliloquy.

I'm always willing to be a Maestro! I've got a few more wrote, and I'll post them later.

Well people are naturally going to comment on their own work more, hoping to get constructive criticisms and ego boosting compliments.