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Molten Tigrex

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 11:35 pm


[ The Freak ]
“Most people go through life dreading they'll have a traumatic experience. Freaks were born with their trauma.
They've already passed their test in life. They're aristocrats.”
-- Diane Arbus


~~~

Character Name:
Zachary Ogden

Title:
The Draconic Beastman

Appearance:
STAGE 1: In most respects, Zach appears human – he’s got the correct number of limbs, and so forth. His messy, medium-length brown hair and brown eyes are nothing unusual. He’s about 6’0”, and his build is stocky. His skin is entirely scaly, similar in texture and appearance to an alligator’s hide, but skin-colored. This scaly skin is shed yearly, much like a reptile. He lacks sweat glands entirely, using his tear ducts instead. His eyelids are extremely thin, looking semitransparent even when closed. There are scars on his arms and legs from work as a chimney sweep, though he takes to wearing the most covering clothes he can to keep people from looking at his deformities.

STAGE 2: In addition to these natural deformities, he will take to filing his teeth and nails to points, and have had his tongue split into a fork. Some nights he’ll use washable dyes, either regular or some sort of glow-in-the-dark sort, to enhance the visibility of his “scales” and add to the act.

STAGE 3: ???

Personality:
Uneducated, crude, but has the sense not to be too frank with people. He’s still grappling with insecurities and fears. Free of his parents' beatings and having lived on the streets long enough, he revels in belittling others behind their backs and even spreading rumors to cure his own self-consciousness. Unable to actually confront people on issues, he tries to maintain a two-faced facade. He has a very strong superstition of magic and other forces he deems as 'unholy'. His temper is on the short side. He hates violence (at least, being on the receiving end), and can be easily managed with a couple of well-worded threats of such when he gets out of hand.

World and History:

World A

The Industrial Revolution in England was a time of fast technological progress. A need for plenty of hands in factories drove half of England's population to London. It was there, amidst the cholera and crowding, that an unlucky married couple gave birth to a child who at first seemed normal, but after several years it became apparent that he had a skin condition, which made him look more like an animal than a child at first glance. The boy had an extremely serious case of Ichthyosis vulgaris, a skin condition that caused excesss skin to build up in a scale pattern. It was particularly serious for him, causing him to be forever itchy and an eyesore to any who looked at him. There were no medical breakthroughs to help him, and he was stuck as he was without hope.

For years his parents raised them as best they could, stuck in the dingy one room they called home. There was no room for disagreement with his parents' strict ways, or there was a beating involved. It made him quiet about dissent, unwilling to voice his issues straight to peoples' faces. As for reading and writing, he didn't learn much of either, and only got as far as being able to read and write his own name the whole time. The education his parents gave him was more along the lines of being a god-fearing citizen of the nation, and how to work the same job that his dad worked at for when he turned 11.

Going outside? Nonsense! It wasn't until his father suffered an accident that prevented him from working for a while and their weak trickle of money grew even weaker that they decided that, freak or no, their 9-year-old child would have to contribute to the family or survive on the streets. The parents had grown used to his strange appearance, but the rest of the world had not yet had a glimpse.

He chose the streets.

If he'd thought he was poorly off in that dingy room, this was far worse. Many orphaned children roamed the streets, and he was just one of many, though an unsightly one. Sleeping on doorsteps, eating whatever a couple of pence could buy. Most of the time he was out on his own, trying to seek work as a chimney sweep thanks to his small size. Chimney sweeps didn't have to be looked at much, either, he'd learned quickly enough. Being covered in soot kept his disturbing features hidden as best he could manage, though it only served to make his condition painfully worse.

He survived for about two years seeking the painful work, but the pay was so scarce and the work so unsteady that he had to turn his attention back to the siren song of the factories. It was marginally better, but he didn't have to go crawling from house to house caked with soot and pleading for work. He still lived on the streets despite its effects on his health, but he had work, though he still got his share of strange looks from his fellow workers. As was expected, he developed a permanent cold that sent him into a coughing fit every so often. But life went on uneventfully and free, and for every day that he was alive he couldn't help but wonder how many he had left.

At the age of 15, he was tall but somewhat emaciated and with plenty of scars on his hands and legs. His condition had grown even worse, leaving him looking like a leathery skin-colored lizard in the shape of a human. He spotted a colorful flyer on his way out of the factory and snatched it. Unable to read, he asked a man on the street to read it to him. A circus, looking for work! He'd always wanted to see a circus after hearing a story that an old man in the factory used to tell about the lion-tamers and magicians he'd once seen. It sounded fascinating just to be in the audience. Perhaps, if the circus planned to travel far away, it would take him with, to someplace better. There had to be a place where no one would look at him as though he were a creature more than a person. Maybe this was his ticket to better things...
 
PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 11:36 pm


[ The Sideshow Act ]
“The attraction of the virtuoso for the public is very like that of the circus for the crowd.
There is always the hope that something dangerous will happen.”
-- Claude Debussy


~~~

Describe their talent/skill/act:
In all actuality he's got very little in the way of skills. It's more his appearance, acting, and the fact that the audience views him as less than human that makes it all come together.

Zachary is mainly paraded around up close in the sideshow as a half-human, half-reptilian monster, though in actuality it’s just some unlucky genetics. Wearing nothing but some pants that have seen much better days, he scrambles around and makes sudden leaps toward the audience, though he never gets too close. It is implied that he’s savage, and he’s rather good at leading people on about that. It doesn’t take much more than wandering around on all fours and snarling to convince people something isn’t right. There’s a specially made cage and set of chains that are used that he appears to break free from for the effect and the scare. First the chains, then the cage, and if that weren’t enough there’s a lovely demonstration of how to bite a chicken’s head off. His sideshow act changes every so often to incorporate things such as flaming hoops and foolhardy audience volunteers.

Much more whimsical costuming (fake but extravagant looking horns, wings, tail, etc) and some lessons in fire-breathing may be employed later on to turn him from a sideshow-attraction lizard man into a human dragon who can hold his own in the big tent.


Flatsale Prompt Response

It was dark, at first. The only light visible came from the dull glow of tribal patterns etched in fluorescent paint all over Zach’s body, and the eye-like markings over each of his own. Nestled within the heavy cage, he couldn’t help but squirm just a little bit. Some shadowy figure was wheeling the entire thing out into the stage area of the sideshow tent. Normally he went for at least a casual conversation before he performed, but this was the big night, the day which all his preparations had been leading up to. If he messed this up, he was ruined. All he could do was peer into the murmuring darkness and prepare himself as best he could. It wasn’t long before the nameless helper had taken off into the darkness to return backstage, leaving him alone before an eager audience.

“Ladies and gentlemen,” boomed the voice of an assistant from within the shadowy confines of the tent. The chatter died down immediately, so that only the howl of the nighttime wind could be heard in the intervening silence. “You have seen many fascinating people at our fine Cirque. But there is one you have yet to have met. We cannot formally introduce you to him. However, I think you’ll be enjoying your distance.”

There was a pause, and in that pause Zach rattled the enormous chains around his wrists. A growl rumbled from his throat, one that he hoped was convincing in its utter lack of humanity. The assistant’s voice returned, right on cue as the growl died down. “We present to you now, a fearsome beast, the most terrifying reptile of them all…”

All the lights went on immediately, almost blinding him. His thin eyelids could never handle the shock, so he’d incorporated the surprise into his act. With a furious snarl, he shielded his eyes with an arm. There’d be no way to see the people anyhow, he knew, so he forgot for the moment they existed and settled on the first of his little tricks. After his eyes had adjusted ever so slightly, he pulled himself into a crouch on his knuckles and knees, rattling the chains that were attached to the sides of his constricting cage. They didn’t budge, at first. With a bellow, he tried again, straining against his pre-planned bonds as though they were impossible to escape from. He rose shakily to his feet, bent over as though he’d never walked with a straight back before in his life, and quickly shoved his head out from between the bars, looking all around the room at that magnificent colorful blur of people who would never know him as anything more than a humanoid creature. He pulled away and reared back his head, grimacing to show off those impeccably sharpened teeth. There was a collective gasp. Perfect.

“Now don’t worry folks, he’s not going to get through –“ Right on cue, he gave a tug that pulled the chains in just the right direction, punctuating it with a bestial howl of triumph. With loud snaps the chains were free, though the manacles were still around his wrists and trailing a couple of solid links. He grappled with two of the bars on the front of the cage, wrestling them apart easily. All part of the act. He just had to look like an animal and no one would figure out that he was just as intelligent as anyone else. Grunting and growling, he pushed out of the iron trap and landed heavily on all fours on the hay-strewn dirt floor of the tent. The assistant’s voice had an almost sadistic calm. “Why, I do believe he got through this time.”

He made a beeline for the audience, rearing up and preparing to pounce. There was a whipcrack from the assistant behind him, the sound of which was his cue to turn around and investigate. From that point it became a quick succession of tricks. There was a burning hoop through which he was forced, singing a toe in the process. A chicken was shooed onto the stage and he made his leap for it. Amidst squeals of shock and encouraging chants, he wrestled the unfortunate fowl into his grip and neatly bit off its head. The taste of the blood wasn’t as nauseating as it should have been, but a month of practice and at least a dozen dead chickens had improved his decapitating skills. Feathers were everywhere, and blood too, real blood. There was no settling for stage blood if you wanted to be the best.

When at last the tricks were exhausted and he had been left in the center of the stage pacing back and forth on his knuckles and making a variety of obscene noises, three beefy men who normally moved equipment rushed onstage to drag him back into the cage and off. All the while he made it look as though nearly, just nearly, he could have broken free of even all of them.

There was applause, certainly, but they didn’t give it to him. What would a lizard do with their applause? It was only when the sideshow’s ringmaster, the assistant, appeared once again to announce the next of the sideshows that they would make any noise. He held his breath backstage, waiting, hoping.

And not a moment too soon the tent was full of it, the sweet sound of success. Applause.


Molten Tigrex

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Molten Tigrex

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 11:38 pm


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 2:52 pm


[ Ichthyosis vulgaris ]
The Reality Behind The Illusion


(( NOTE: I do not advise looking for pictures of people with this skin condition. They are readily available but still very odd and some are simply not for people who can't handle the disturbing. ))


Ichthyosis is the term for severe, persistent problems with dry skin that almost always start in childhood or infancy. Ichthyosis can be genetic (inherited) or can develop later in life. In a large majority of people with the disease, the cause is related to one or more genetic mutations. Ichthyosis is characterised by persistently dry, thickened, rough, fish scale skin. There are at least 20 varieties of ichthyosis, including inherited and acquired forms. Under normal circumstances, the body continuously renews its skin surface, building new skin cells and allowing older cells to be shed from the surface.
Ichthyosis disrupts this balance either because too many replacement skin cells are produced or because the new skin cells do not separate well from the skin surface when it is their time to drop off. The result is that skin cells accumulate into thick flakes that adhere to the body and can resemble fish scales.

Depending on the type of gene abnormality that causes ichthyosis, the skin can show different patterns of flaking. In most cases of ichthyosis vulgaris, for example, skin will flake over the majority of the body, but not on the inside surfaces of joints, in the groin area or on the face. Symptoms of all genetic types of ichthyosis are either noticeable at birth or appear during childhood. Symptoms may include: Severe dryness of the skin with thickening and flaking, which may be appear only in limited areas or may involve almost the entire skin surface. Mild itching of the skin. Body odor, because the spaces under and between skin flakes can harbor collections of bacteria or fungus. Wax buildup in the ears, causing hearing difficulties. Symptoms are usually worse in winter months and in dry climates, because warmth and humidity improve thesymptoms. More than half of people who have ichthyosis vulgaris also have allergic problems, such as allergic nasal congestion, asthma or eczema.

Inherited forms of ichthyosis occur as a result of a genetic mutation. The mutated gene is passed on from one generation to the next. However, within a family there may only be one person affected. This can happen if the gene is recessively inherited (you have inherited two recessive genes, one from each parent), or you are the founder of a spontaneously mutated gene. The mutated gene causes an abnormality in the normal lifecycle of skin. Whilst in most people, the growth, dying and shedding of skin happens unnoticed, people with ichthyosis reproduce new skin cells at a rate faster than they can shed it, or reproduce at a normal rate but the rate of shedding is too slow. Either way there is a build up of dry scaly skin.

Ichthyosis vulgaris, accounts for 95% of all ichthyosis cases. Inheritance is autosomal dominant i.e. it is passed from a parent to about half their children. Signs and symptoms of ichthyosis vulgaris usually become apparent within the first year of life. Ichthyosis vulgaris is one of the most common of the inherited skin disorders. It may begin in early childhood, before a child is 4 years old. In most cases one parent and one-half of the children will be affected. It usually disappears during adulthood, but may recur when elderly. The other main forms of inherited ichthyosis include lamellar ichthyosis, epidermolytic hyperkeratosis, and X-linked ichthyosis.

Ichthyosis and ichthyosis vulgaris are treated with lotions or ointments to soften the skin and soothe the itching. Special gels called keratolytics, which include salicylic acid, lactic acid, or urea, help to remove the dry scales on the surface of the skin. The gel also contains an agent to moisturize the skin underneath. Your doctor may recommend applying this medication, then covering the affected skin with a waterproof dressing to help the gel penetrate. It is important to treat cracks in the skin immediately with a topical antibiotic to prevent infection. Ointments and lotions containing vitamin A derivatives called retinoids may also help promote new skin growth in patients with ichthyosis.

Molten Tigrex

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 1:05 pm


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 5:38 am


I honestly can't think of much to critique here. Zachary looks like a great, well thought out character and I love your little concept art.

His backstory is very fitting for a member of the freak show. You've obviously done your research.

Nice work! Good luck!

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