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Opinions on the new storyline
It's diamond! (Change nothing)
75%
 75%  [ 9 ]
It's alright, but missing something (Post ideas)
25%
 25%  [ 3 ]
I hate it! Never release it! (*Banned by Seffi*)
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Total Votes : 12


K 19
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 2:16 pm


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A Star Wars alternate-universe role-play plotline: first conceived by Sephiroth_2000, and edited by K 19

Coruscant: a vast, multi-leveled city enveloping an entire planet. It is the capital of the civilized world, the pinnacle of culture, and the setting of our story. Populous and busy, it has served as the center of galactic business for as long as civilization has existed. These generations of power and enterprise have developed the body politic into something dark and sinister.
The Corporation came into power an indeterminate number of years ago. Funded by the Coruscanti government, the said corporation quickly overtook and monopolized the economy. Larger warehouses began to appear, and a darker stain of smog began to pour out of once clean-burning smokestacks. The sky, once clear enough to see the stars, became polluted by the new and unnatural smog. The smell of capital progress hung over everything.
More than just ecological changes occurred. The Government laid off millions of workers, eliminating the Middle Class and effectively creating a colossal rift between the elite upper class and the enormous lower class. Heavy tariffs were imposed, and eventually all offworld business ended. Transportation became socialized, and personal vehicles were eliminated. The only space-travel is used for economic transportation purposes, and, again, is run by the government. People are able to get from place to place by either walking or using the government’s less-than-luxurious transports.
Poverty reigned over billions. Constant inspections by the Elite Patrols began a new reign of fear. Innocent citizens were shot on the street corner in mass demonstrations, children would disappear in the middle of the night, and it wasn’t uncommon for a suspicious family’s house to be murderously vandalized. The Government began to enforce a strict curfew; being outside past sunset without the proper pass resulted in death before sunrise.
In the middle of the crime and chaos, The Corporation began a series of reforms. Medicine suddenly became miracle-workers capable of curing the most menial and elusive bacteria. Immunizations began the process of eliminating the most debilitating viruses. A new elixir known as bacta is introduced by an elite team of scientific doctors. Food is created and processed with such care and knowledge that malnutrition ends. New forms and styles of music increase productivity and intellectual capacity while decreasing stress. Those who can’t afford these thaumaturgies aren’t given access to them. One phenomenon after another is pumped out, tauntingly appearing in only upper-class houses.

Unbeknownst to the people of Coruscant, The Corporation’s malignant ways are barely visible. Underground, in bastion-style warehouses are rows upon rows of sleeping Force children. They are all young; they never seem to age while locked and immersed in tubes. They are in a state of suspended meditation, and they are being manipulated by The Corporation in order to create all sorts of benefits for society. They seem to generate a curious amount of energy, which is stored away by The Corporation for an unknown use.
These children of the Force were not born in the warehouses, nor were they “created.” In the early days of The Corporation, its chief executive officers located select Force Users, stemming from Upper Class backgrounds, known as the “Dark Jedi” and offered money in exchange for their services. The Dark Jedi swept the streets of Coruscant, gathered every Force-sensitive child and slaughtered every older Force-sensitive citizen they could find. They returned their bounty to the heads of The Corporation who, in turn, developed their current system. Impressed by the Dark Jedi, The Corporation offered them riches, luxury, and power. The Dark Jedi, impressed in turn by something within The Corporation, accepted. Now, they are The Corporation's most feared "peacekeeping" force.


Hidden deep within the depths Coruscant's slums, a band of militant rebels, oppossed to The Corporation's opression of the impoverished and the overall inbalance of society, rally their limited numbers in an attempt to bring The Corporation to restore equility. Armed with out-dated weaponary and only and handful of skilled warriors, they often find themselves being closed watched by The Corporation, who hopes to quell their uprising. However, beyond the ideals of both groups, a more sinister plan is unfolding....


This is the draft storyline that we hope to impliment. We are aware that the idea of an "alternate reality" is somewhat risky, but it aims to reduce the number of players who know the entire history of Star Wars like the back of their hand and using it in the Roleplay. Some parts of the divised story have been intentionally left out so that, again, players aren't using OOC knowledge in the Roleplay.

Names are still needed for "The Corporation" and for "The Rebel" group, along with feedback on what you think.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 2:18 pm


Explaination of Things


This is a list of various confusions or questions that we feel need to be explained. It will be updated as users post, to stop repeat questions.

Your Hot Mum
Will there be massive, totally awesome, space battles in this Roleplay?!

No. Infact, there really shouldn't be any. The situation of the RP is that the entire planet is on civilian lockdown, perminately. Only Military and Trading vessels ever leave the planet. Due to this, personal ships would not exist.


Your Balding Dad
What about massive ground battles with hundreds of troops flying into a sea of shots?

Again, no. There is going to be a severe restriction on NPC characters, to the point where there are almost none.


Your Baby Sister
Can I be a "Sith" in the Roleplay?

No. Use of the term "Sith" is strictly forbidden, more so than we have ever done before. Why, you ask? Simple, because we say so.


Your Hardcore Brother
Won't there be a mass amount of Jedi players, making the "Rebel" side overly powerful?

This is one flaw we are currently trying to work out. Given the situation of the majority of "Force Sensitive" people within the story, there should be a very limited number of "Jedi." We hope to encourage players on the "Rebel" side to be Non-Jedi characters.


Your Creepy Aunt
Can I use my character from the current Roleplay?

No. It's an "alternate reality." Your character, or any releations to them, would not exist.


Your Rich Uncle
What kind of ranking system is going to be used to distinguish character skill?

Again, another little bump in the road we hit. It will be simple for characters on "The Corporation's" side, but much harder for those on the side of "The Rebels".


The Cousin You Kissed Once When You Were Drunk
Can my character be born from some planet other than "Coruscant?

No. All characters must be born on Coruscant, due to the extremely limited movement of people. Alien races will be available (except Mandalorian and Sith) because races would have been on the planet centuries before "The Corporation" became such a massive politcal influence.


Your Dead Granny's Spirit
Can the character I use in the current RP jump dimensions and take part in the new one?

No. Just no.

Sephiroth_2000
Vice Captain


Sephiroth_2000
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 3:01 pm


Reserved incase we need it.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 5:15 pm


Thoughts? Questions? Concerns? Ideas?

You know, if you kids don't give us input, we're just going to wing it however we please. >D We might not mind that (makes for less work), but the RP might not be as enjoyable if you don't like what's going on.

If you're too bashful to post it in a thread where everyone can see, PM K 19 or Sephiroth_2000. We're hardcore intense like that. <3

K 19
Vice Captain


Ksrugi

Shadowy Prophet

PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 5:44 pm


Quote:
Impressed by the Dark Jedi, The Corporation offered them riches, luxury, and power. The Dark Jedi, impressed in turn by something within The Corporation, accepted. Now, they are The Corporation's most feared "peacekeeping" force.


I do hope we get to find out what exactly impressed them to tie themselves down to the service of the Corporation. Something small, but I'm already hooked on the story.

I love the story, it's the latter episodes of the Star Wars movies except on a small scale and that's cool. There's a lot of room to play around, there's also a lot of potential for creative and really interesting characters to be made.

I could see this plot growing and branching out. Kudos on the plot, it's simply top notch.

Also, if anything, I'd like to become a Dark Jedi for the Corporation. xd
PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 6:01 pm


Ksrugi
Also, if anything, I'd like to become a Dark Jedi for the Corporation. xd


As if any of your earlier appeals weren't an indication. ;3 You'll have to take a look at the application once it comes out.

K 19
Vice Captain


Ksrugi

Shadowy Prophet

PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 6:18 pm




That's fair. You and Seffi deserve something after working on the plot.

I've got it!

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 7:57 pm


I see huge character development potential. As well more if the character is force-sensative.

Tiger of the Fire


Mr. AmsteL
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 8:05 am


yeap, now to convince people to go for it so we don't all die in poverty and loneliness again crying
PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 12:46 pm


So we will have to create new characters for this roleplay? What will happen to the original ones?

Kalcos


Mr. AmsteL
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 12:55 pm


don't worry, we'll wave them goodbye when we insinerate them

wait, does this mean that, after 3 years, I need to get rid of maniac? crying and alron, my good pal for over 1,5 year? And.... BERTUS?
PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 12:59 pm


xd
In effect, yes, Maniac. Our long lived characters will finally come to rest.

Perhaps, and this is only a suggestion, we could consider in the future releasing another story back in-line with the one we have now, perhaps in the Side-RP subforum.

Sephiroth_2000
Vice Captain


Trixstir

PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 1:00 pm


Nice job like everything I have seen keep up the great work. YAY! Can't wait.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 1:20 pm


Sephiroth_2000
xd
In effect, yes, Maniac. Our long lived characters will finally come to rest.

Perhaps, and this is only a suggestion, we could consider in the future releasing another story back in-line with the one we have now, perhaps in the Side-RP subforum.


ok, I just killed maniac and alron... again lol

Mr. AmsteL
Vice Captain


Sephiroth_2000
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 1:26 pm


Seffi is going to jump dimensions and PWN in the new Rp! eek


No kiddies, I'm only joking. You aren't allowed to do that *Updates Q&A* whee
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