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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 5:02 pm
Okay, this is the beginning of a piece I just started to spout off in bed one night. It's just been sitting here in one my notebooks (I have about ten notebooks. Some of my school notebooks for my actually subjects hold two or three story ideas themselves) for a long time (about a year or so), so I decided I might as well pick it up again. “Okay, now. If you would please tell us a bit about yourself, then start right in,” the kindly-looking woman intoned. She had the air of one who repeated a litany over and over and is beginning to tire of it.
“My name is Elara Sayn Sipi. I am thirteen years old. I live in Calligary, Maine. I am going into eighth grade at Calligary Private Middle School. My interests include writing, reading, cross country, and just hanging out with my best friend, Alexela Harris. We’re complete opposites, except for our passions for running, so you’d think we wouldn’t get along, but we do. We’re best friends, did I tell you yet? I suppose I did. I’ll continue now, and in a hopefully less annoying manner.
“I do well in all my subjects: mathematics, social studies, science, and the like. I’m particularly adept in my English and Culture classes. My Culture teacher, Ms. Lafayette, says she’s never seen such a success story friendship as Alexela’s and mine. I’m not sure how I feel about being called a “success story.” After all, Lex and I are just two normal girls who are friends. Being A+ students in Culture classes isn’t what pulls us to one another. It’s just this mutual bond. Like a thread of the galaxy’s gravitational force frayed off and has wrapped itself around us.
“Anyway, about my classes. I take all the usual ones. I’m not particular to Math… or science. Sure, I like all the experiments and games we do, but sometime it gets boring, or I just disagree with the information. I like my language classes; Sign Language, German, English, and, of course, my favorite: Spanish. I pick up languages quite easily. It’s what makes me so good in Culture… well, at least, that’s one reason.
“Some people think that just because I’m good at school that I love it. That that’s all there is to me. However, that’s for a different part of this speech.
“I have a good family. It isn’t perfect, but no family really is, is it? You look past all those photogenic, preppy little faces of the average “perfect” American family, and you get a lot of empty lives and broken hearts. Not that other families don’t have those too, they’re just not so good at hiding every little hurt and bristle.
“Take my family, for instance. My dad’s okay. Every once in a while he has a few drinks, and he’s never been a good driver (he told me once it took him three tries to get his license), but he’d never hurt anyone, not even when he gets mad at me and my brother.
“My older brother’s a little spacey. I don’t think he knows a lot about what’s going on in the world. But he’s a great brother. Other girls at school who have older brothers complain about how bossy or immature or embarrassing their brothers are. I don’t. My big bro’s always been kind to me. Oh, sure, we’ve had our spats, but it’s never escalated to anything really serious. Overall, I’ve always been glad he was my brother, though I admit sometimes I’ve disowned him and sworn he was adopted. He’s graduating this year. At the very top of his class. Valedictorian. I’ll definitely miss him when he’s away at college, but that doesn’t start for a while so I’ve got time to spend with him before he leaves.
“Then, of course, there’s my mom. I could tell you so much about her that I could write an entire novel on her, but I’ll just give you a shortened version. My mom is… well… she’s just not into the whole “being-a-mom” thing. Never really was. That’s all I’d like to say on the subject right now, thank-you.
“I don’t really believe in hate. I know what you’re going to say to that, now. ‘How can you just not believe in hate?’ Well, the answer is… not easy to explain. It’s not really that I don’t believe that hate exists, it’s just that… I don’t believe in the need for having it; that you could go your entire life without needing to feel it. Sure, you might feel a little offended at times, but you could go without hate. I know I’ve gone with it.
“From the beginning this probably made no sense to you, did it? I know it wouldn’t to me if I were you, and I was seeing what you’re seeing while listening to this. Because I’m not thirteen.
“I’m not thirteen, and I’m not going into the eighth grade. If I was, I wouldn’t be telling you this, now would I? I wouldn’t be allowed. If I was thirteen –thirteen years old, going into the eighth grade, oblivious to the horrors of the world– this would be my speech to you. But I’m not anymore. And it’s all because of what happened four years ago. The summer after my thirteenth birthday, after my seventh year of school. The day my life changed… forever.
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 7:38 pm
Ooh, very intrigueing. I like how you've set this up. I want to see the next installment. In my reading I saw one spelling mistake:
"“My older brother’s a little spacey. I don’t think he know a lot about what’s going on in the world."
Add an 's' to 'know'.
Otherwise, very good.
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:26 am
Oh, thanks.
I'm working on the next part, and you can expect it sometime later today, before 4:00 EST.
Unfortunately, it'll be a while before you meet my favorite character, Hale. I've already written a lot of the area where she comes in. She's just awesome (don't worry, she's no Mary Sue.)
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 12:02 pm
Pomp and Circumstance rang throughout the auditorium. Though loud enough to hear even out in the hallways, none of it seemed to reach Elara’s ears. It just slipped on by as though she had donned earmuffs.
This auditorium looked exactly like the others. It had slight differences though –the stripes of school colors were mixed with the changeable class color stripes, the school motto was plastered only once in the whole room instead of multiple times, and the picture of the first class to ever graduate here adorning each of the four walls. This auditorium, like all the others, had a specific purpose. It was the graduation hall. Every year, after being dusted and decorated by a senior committee, the graduating class paraded down the aisle, said their speeches, received their diplomas, and walked back up the aisle, somehow changed for life.
This wasn’t the first graduation Elara had attended where she got to sit in the reserved family section. This was, however, the first time she was fully aware of what was going on. Last time, she had slept through most of it. However, she’d had an excuse. Born in April, she’d only been about two months old at the time of her mother’s graduation. She didn’t remember any of it, even the parts she’d been awake for.
She did, however, know how pretty here mother had been. Elara had a picture of her in her cap and gown, clutching her diploma in one hand, the same arm wrapped around a small boy; her other arm cradled a baby girl.
Halfway down the side of the auditorium, Elara paused. She was keeping to the shadowed areas of the pillars, crepping down to her seat while staying out of sight. Watching 273 teenaged adults walk one by one down the aisle was not her idea of fun (no wonder she’d fallen asleep before!). Therefore, she had a plan. Galcing around to make sure no one was watching, she gestured towards the back, beckoning a deeper shadow then the one she was hiding in forward.
The shadow figure moved toward her. It was moiving in ridiculously slow motion, whipping around pillars and waving interlocked arms as though it were James Bond. Rolling her eyes (a tollarence for a flair for the dramatic had never been an attribute of hers), Elara gestured furiously at it to hurry up. When its pace didn’t quicken, Elara groaned inwardly and turned back to the graduation. The procession was almost over. Her brother was in her seat.
Something grabbed her from behind, placing hand hands over her mouth, stifling a scream that came out as a loud squeak. Luckily, the repetative music drowned it out.
“Gotcha!” giggled a voice in a loud whisper. It was female, and one she knew as well as her own.
“Lex!” she moaned, turning around sharply. “We’re supposed to be quiet!”
Alexela Harris, a.k.a. Lex, just giggled again, hazel eyes flashing wickedly in the dark shadows, then slid her thumb and pointer finger across her lips and though pulling a zipper. Elara glared at her best friend, then grabbed her hand and dragged her toward the front of the auditorium.
Elara hesitated at the edge of the aisle. How on earth would they get past all these people? Glancing at Lex –after all, she was the brains of what she called “Operation Aisle Skipper”– she raised her eyebrows questioningly.
Lex leaned close and whispered in her ear, “Just do exactly as do. Motion for motion.” Not giving her time to argue or ask questions, she took off across the front row. Seeing no other choice, Elara obeyed her orders.
Halfway across, she saw what Lex had done. A graduate could reserve as many seats as they thought family members would come. Nearly the entire first row was comprised of Alexela’s numerous relatives. She must have gotten some arrangement with her graduating cousin to seat them this way. For not the first time in their eight years of friendship, Elara was impressed with the skills and planning of her best friend. She always seemed to underestimate her.
Arriving at the opposite end of the row, the girls found two empty seats awaiting them. Once again Alexela pulled through. They had the best view in the hall, one that gave them a clear view of the podium and speaker without blocking the class seated behind it.
The last senior climbed the stairs and took his place with his classmates. As the people gathered their settled in their own seats, Elara prepared to be bored. The speeches here were not exactly of the fast-paced style she preferred. Usually they were long-winded and dull, as you couldn’t even get into this school, let alone graduate, if you were not an intelligent person and loved to use long words that half the population didn’t know –or even care– about.
Sure enough, not even half-way through the president’s welcome she had heard more complicated words then she’d hoped to have heard in her whole life. What do they teach in this high school? she wondered, dazedly, only half-listening. They don’t think those words are actually used in everyday conversation, do they? Bored as she was, she managed to shake herself from her reverie to listen when her brother stepped up to the podium.
“Hello, and thank you again for coming here tonight,” he began. Elara breathed a sigh of relief. Her brother, at least, didn’t believe in boring people out of their minds with excess syllables and redundancies. “As it says in the program, my name is Kevin Sipi, and I am this year's valedictorian.”
Elara put on her best attentative face and tried to look supportive. Kevin was terrible at public speaking, yet insisted on doing so anyway. She didn’t understand why he wanted to go into the performing arts when he hated it so badly, but that was Kevin for you. He wouldn’t let her help him write his speech (after all, it would hurt his pride to have a kid five years younger do something like that for him, because he was supposed to be the one at the top of his class, not her), so much of what he wrote was thanks to all of his teachers, his family, his friends, and all the other people in his life who had helped him get so far.
Elara hadn’t expected to be mentioned beyond that. Just because they got along better than most people didn’t mean he liked her or anything. So when she heard her name passed from his lips again, her supportive look turned to one of confusion.
“I think I’ve learned my greatest lesson from my sister, Elara. They say a good friendship is the best thing you can have in this life. I look at my little sister and her friends and I know it’s true. When you and I think back on our high school, middle school, and elementary school experiences, the ones that will stand out the most won’t be that great lesson on commas or the philosophy behind evolution. They will be the moments spent with our friends. I know I will take this lesson with me wherever I may go from here. I hope you will too. Thank you.”
Elara clapped hard, surprised and touched by her brother’s eloquent words. He’d learned a lesson from her? This was one of those things you had to hear firsthand. Lex nudged her and muttered, “Aw! Well, ain’t that sweet!” Elara just stuck her tongue out at her. Let her mock, she thought. She had just be publically praised by someone whose opinion mattered.
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 12:09 pm
A little longer this time.
I'll go back and give it a thorough editing comb-over later. I have to go to take a shower now before practice, then I have practice.
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 6:37 pm
Really, the graduation only sounds unimportant, but everything I type has a purpose, and will come into the plot at another point. ninja
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 2:44 pm
I wrote stuff at school, but you know, I'm lazy to type it right now. neutral
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:20 pm
Reese_Roper I wrote stuff at school, but you know, I'm lazy to type it right now. neutral Sounds like me. neutral
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:30 pm
Okay, I finished the next section. I'll type it and post it, then go beat myself up.
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:46 pm
Quote: “Thanks, little sis,” her replied, hugging her thigh. Makes it sound like he's a midget. xd
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 1:57 pm
Finally –all too soon, in Elara’s uninterested mind– the graduation was over, and the now non-students filed out. The moment everyone stood to watch the recession, she and Alexela fled to the back and exited via the side door. They had no more desire to watch the graduates leave then they’d had to watch them come in.
Elara was glad it was such a warm summer night. A slight breeze mad her dress billow around her legs, a feeling that might have frozen her had it been cooler outside. She’d protested the wearing of a dress, even one she’d picket out herself on one of the few shopping trips she was forced to go. She’d griped and complained until Kevin pointed out that they didn’t call his outfit a cap and gown for nothing. Elara consented to wearing the dress.
It took a long time for Kevin to exit the auditorium. The girls waited in silent anticipation. When he broke away from the throng and came over to them, Elara took the chance to run up and throw her arms around him in a hug.
“Good job, big bro,” she murmured into his ear.
“Thanks, little sis,” her replied, hugging her tight. She was quite tall for her age, so that dispite their five year difference in age, she could nearly look him in the eye without tilting her head.
He released her. “Why don’t you two run along? The lot of us are having an after-grad party in the dance hall, so I’ll be home later. And Dad’s gone somewhere –he left right after I walked by– so there’s no point in waiting for him. Not that that will do any good to stop the lecture awaiting you for being late!” He laughed, waving them off, then turned back to his friends.
Elara just stood shaking her head, watching him go. Same ol’ Kevin, she though, fun before feelings and responsibilties. Never-mind he’s supposed to come home and watch me tonight. He knows I'll try and make him talk to me about his life after school.
“E-lara!” Alexela groaned, tugging on her arm. “Can we please go? I don’t know about you, but this is quite boring me!”
“Fine, dah-lin’,” she drawled in an exaggerated southern accent. “How evah yo’r mos’ humble servan’ can help her mistress.”
“Good,” she replied, oblivious to the sarcasm in her friend’s voice. “Homeward, pet!”
As they walked, Lex chattered on about her newest plan, Operation Book Sweep, in which she watned to read all the books on their combined shelves. She wanted to be a spy for the FBI (“I’m Bond, Jane Bond,” she’d joke) when she grew up, so she always came up with these “operations” to be completed, which they almost always were, as she claim she had to learn to take initiative and finish what she started. Lex was a great believer in not giving up and giving your all, which of course made all the teachers adore her, as well as many of their classmates when they saw she would help them out and not leave them when the going got tough.
When Lex talked, she had a hard time being still. Even now, when they were walking, she was skipping and twirling. It was moments like these when Elara was struck by the beauty of her friend. Lex was thin, but not sickly; short, but not unnaturally so. She had pixie cut black hair –which she claimed was the only hair a spy should have, as it was easy to hide under a hat and highly inconspicuous. Her hazel eyes were always twinkling, never losing an ounce of mischief. Elara always was telling her she should become a model or least an actress. Lex rebuffed this, saying she wanted to blend in, not stand out. Of course, with her looks, she failed miserably, but Elara had never had the heart to tell her that.
It was now pitch-black out, with no stars to be seen. The only light came from the streetlamps posted every ten yards or so and the sparsely placed houses along the road. Every once in a while a car would zip by, making her glad for her own bright yellow dress and Lex’s electric lime green one (which made her look ravishing, but would have done nothing but made her look like a limesicle dipped in mud). It was so impossible to not sight them when the headlights hit that people swerved at least twently yards before they really needed to. Soon the girls lost all fear of being hit.
“You know,” Lex suddenly thought aloud after a few moments of walking in silence, “I wonder what the probability of getting hit by a car is. I mean, it doesn’t take that much to get out of way. You see the car coming, you move. Easy as pie. What is the statiscal probability, and how many people are actually hit by cars on accident? I bet that they are aren’t nearly as high as the teachers would have us belive. Oh, the wonders of my life!”
“You’d have to ask Beatrice,” Elara replied sensibly. She wasn’t surprised by this sudden outburst of thought; they happened regularly. “She’s probably got the numbers memorized, and if not she’ll know where to find them.”
Beatrice was the smartest girl in their grade. She was only eleven, but she’d skipped a couple grades. She could technically skip another and have no problems, but her mother wanted her to be with kids at least semi-close to her age. Most of the kids called her and the other super whiz kids the “uber brains,” and she was their queen. Beatrice was known as a geek to most, but she was widely respected and liked by all. The girls themselves considered –and Beatrice agreed– her to be the third the their twosome. In fact, the three were having an end-of-the-school-year slumber party together tomorrow night.
Again they saw the reflection of lights on the pavement and heard the roar of an engine. Lex, who stood closest to the road, pushed farther onto the sidewalk out of habit, forcing Elara to do the same.
Out of the curiosity that only she understood (though Elara guessed it had something to do with spies being observant and memorizing details), Alexela turned around to see if she could identify the driver.
“Ah, don’t bother, Lex. You can’t see past those blaring headlights, anyway,” Elara reminded her absentmindedly, knowing that Lex would do exactly as Lex pleased anyway. “Besides, it’ll go right by us in a se–”
Lex gave a bloodcurdling shriek. Elara’s world went black.
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 1:58 pm
gonk
I didn't want to do it, but I had to! I just hurt my second and third favorite characters. cry
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 4:27 pm
Elara was drowning in darkness. It clung to her, seeping into her pores. No matter how hard she fought it refused to release her. She could hear voices all around her, and she cried out to them. They did not respond. She called louder and louder, threw her all of her will against her unseen bonds, butto no avail. She sank deeper and deeper until she had nothing else left to fight with.
She was frightened –oh, how she frightened! She longed for some sensation to replace this one of fear. She could not see, could not feel, could not taste anything but the inky blackness. The voices that come to her ears were scared, worried, weeping, and not in the least comforting. Once she was sure she heard quite clearly, “I think it’s time to let her go.”
“NO!” she screamed. She thrashed in the dark, crying and begging them to help her, to save her. “I’m right here! Just please come get me!” But her cries fell on deaf ears. She remained in the dark.
The worst times were the periods of silence. Those were the moments when she lost the most control. With no one to speak, either to her, about her, or about anything at all, she was convinced she was dead. Trapped in the embalming prison of her mind, she felt herself going losing her grip on the real world, whatever that was, whereever it had gone to. She began to talk, even sing, to herself in a longing for company.
----------“Now I lay me down to sleep, ----------I pray to God, my mind to keep. ----------That my sanity stays all through the night, ----------Else wake depraved at morning’s light.”
She found herself saying this over and over. Out loud, silently, she couldn’t tell anymore. She just wished it would end. Next time they said, “Really, it’s best to just let her go,” she didn’t fight, didn’t cry. She just waited; waited to hear the answer that did not come.
For she thought she saw a light. Just a small, pinprick of color, almost invisible, but it was there. At first she didn’t know what it was; something different, something she was sure she’d never see again.
Then she dove, flew straight for the light. The darkness fought her, trying to keep its hold on her, but this time it was fighting a losing battle. After so long of a time of just giving up and waiting for the end, she had more strength then she’d thought she could possess. She ripped her way through the inky blackness, which had for so long been an impenitrible goo, yet now seemed like billowing curtains, which she blew her way through.
The light came closer and closer. Her captor was not defeated yet. He pounded her skull, her arms, her legs, her chest. After all this time of feeling nothing, she now felt everything it threw at her. But she pushed on. She was almost there. Then she was falling, falling, falling…
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 4:29 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 4:40 pm
She was there, back on the street. Everything was how she’d left it. She looked around, and found herself to be standing under a streetlamp. To her left was a car, beat up beyond recognition. No one was in it. Blood was splattered everywhere, yet she herself was fine. Gazing up at the sky, no stars shone.
“I’ve been waiting for you.”
Elara swung around sharply. There, where no one had been before, was a young woman. She sat on top of the smashed car, her hands in her lap, a serene smile on her lips. A flowing white gown reached down to her feet, which were bare.
“Me?” Elara asked nervously. “Why would you be waiting for me? What I to do with you? Who are you?”
“When the time comes, all your questions will be answered,” she replied. Then she dismounted easily from her perch on the vehicle.
Though her gown should have been stained from the deep red blood on the car, no mark befouled her dress. Her sleek black hair cascaded over her shoulders and down to her waist. Her eyes seemed to see nothing, yet they felt like they saw all. She came and put a reassuring hand on Elara’s shoulder. Elara was oddly unafraid of this mystical girl, and that itself scared her. Elara was entranced, and though she tried, she was unable to speak.
“When the moment comes that you must choose, choose wisely, and think upon your choice before taking action. But hesitate at your peril, for one who does not make quick decisions is one that will destroy that which is precious. Think well, choose well.
“But most of all, remember love. Your love for life, hope, peace, and even love itself. Remember me, and your love for me. Remember I will always be here to guide you, through all that is thrown at you. Even when you think you are alone. If you call for me, I will come. That is my promise to you, Elara. You are not alone.”
The woman’s voice was fading. The woman herself was fading, and fading fast. “No!” Elara cried, released from her awe. “Come back! Don’t leave me! Please, just tell me who you are!”
“When the time comes,” replied the voice, now only a whisper, “all your questions will be answered.
“I will return.”
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