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******Eternally Immune******

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xdemonicallyxyours13x

PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 9:04 am


******Eternally Immune******


We have fallen,
so far below.
We have forgotten to breathe,
with seconds left till our hearts implode.

In this bloodstained love,
I found what I've searched for all along.
you came down from above,
and took my hand in your own.

Now our lives are fading,
a result of something never meant to be.
I'm dieing for your love,
and sinking from this height that my heart has finally reached.

These stabbings to the neck,
never felt better.
Drive your fangs deeper,
please make me feel alive.

Living in hell is worth it,
while I'm burning for all eternity with you...
This eternal bleeding has no regrets,
as long as you are here bleeding too.

As we lie in this bed of thorns,
we will leave our sufferings behind us soon.
As you hold me in your arms,
to these pains I am immune.

We speak our last words,
our love grows with every second past.
Our fates combine, and become as one,
as our last ounces of life drip slowly away,
we know that our eternity together has only just begun.

Asphixiated by our bonds,
our spirits finally fuse, as we've wished for so long...
Alone, we could never stand the pain,
the wholeness of our beings, completely washed away.

We share our pain, and feel no more.
Nothing but love,
emotions will soar.
No amount of torment,
can take my heart away.
You can't shatter this reality,
this time you are here to stay.

Should you ever be torn away,
I'll hold you till the final day...
The day this whole existence reaches its end,
but somehow, I know we'll be together again.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 8:45 am


Very well written and I really love this, even though I'm not a fan of this kind of poetry. Very nice.

Shadow`s Enigma

Apocalyptic Warrior


xdemonicallyxyours13x

PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 5:49 pm


thanx i am happy you enjoied this
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