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 Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 1:43 am
hi i just want to make a story contest. this compertition ends on feburary 29, no one entered in it last month so it is now extended. i will try to have a new story comp every month or so, so every one on the guild can have ago with diferent pictures. the rules are simple..... 1. I will post a picture and you have to write a story about it. 2. Everyone will vote on your story, not just me. 3. person with the most votes wins. either vote in the poll or vote out of ten on a post. you can do both. you cant vote for your own story, sorry but it is unfair. 4. Costs 200g to enter. send trade to evil_fuzzle2! Here is how to enter: title: username: post your enteries here. the picture for the first story compertition is.....  Past Winners:  
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 1:46 am
here is my story.
Username: Uni_girl
Title: The Keyblade Guardians
They were knighted as the Guardians of the Keyblade. They went on missions by the very king himself. Sora now traveled around the worlds with Kairi and Riku, instead of Donald and Goofy. They were needed at the palace. But soon after the guardians of the Keyblade left the world was engulfed in darkness. Sora, Kairi and Riku could not believe their eyes. The world that kept all the other worlds in piece had disappeared! They flew the gummi ship to Hallow Bastian also known as radiant Garden. They landed just out side of Merlin’s house. They entered Aerith, Merlin, Yuffie and Cid were inside. They looked at the three arrivals. Yuffie said,” we heard this loud noise. Leon and Cloud went out to check. Do you know what happened?”
Sora nodded his head,” yes, I know what happened. There is a new dark power in the worlds. They put Disney Castle into Darkness!”
Aerith gasped,” but you put the heartless and nobodies back into kingdom hearts!”
Kairi answered,” well nobodies mustn’t be so easy to kill off now.”
Yuffie said,’ you better find Leon and tell him what happened! Hurry our world could be next!”
Sora, Rikku and Kairi ran out of the house and went off to the market place. There they found Leon and cloud staring at the sky. Riku said,” Leon Disney Castle got captured in the darkness!”
Leon turned around and saw the three people,” did the king get out?”
Sora looked sad and said,” we don’t know if anyone got off safe.”
Cloud said,” well you should know better than thinking that the king is dead.” He turned around and faced everyone. Then added,” Because this is from the king.”
He held up a purple envelope with the king’s symbol on it. Cloud gave it to Sora. They gathered around him as he read the letter:
***Dear Sora, Kairi and Riku,
By the time you get this letter my world has probably been destroyed by the darkness. I was able to save Donald, Goofy, Daisy and Minnie, but sadly I could not save anyone else. We have been sent to different worlds. Try and find everyone and take them to Traverse Town. There is a new fear in the worlds we must destroy it before it destroys us! For now farewell, we will meet when the time is right.
From King Mickey.***
Sora lifted up his head and said,” time for a new adventure. Ready?”
Sora looks at Kairi and Riku. They nod and go off to the gummi ship. What is the new threat now or will they never know?
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 12:10 am
does the story have to be a kingdom hearts one? or can i make sora completely different?
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 4:28 am
Title: Knights Of the Keyblades (KoK)
Username: Koyrotama
A shadow casts in the direction of the front gate. Sora, one of the three, has stood there at the side of the gate. Waiting for the return of Riku, "Riku.. your so lucky." Sora stares at the shadow. "Sometimes i wish i could see what made you choose Darkness over Light." He began to walk inside the castle, as Kairi was searching through the Kings papers. "Kairi. What are you doing?" She stops and looks at one of the scrolls. Sora walked up and noticed that Kairi had fear in eyes, "This scroll." she said, as she was trembling. "Sora did you see it?" He looked confused "See what?" As Sora looked at the scroll, he saw; 'Heartless remaining: Countless.' His pupil shrank, "This can't be right, we already defeated every heartless." Sora looked back at Kairi. She said "That's not competely true..." As her voice trailed off, Sora went back down to the Gates of Disney Castle.
"Riku," Sora said, he sat down at the stairs were the shadows were once were. Then crossed his arms and thought. "Your lucky... you don't have any rules to follow. And even though you rely on Darkness, Your one of Knights," He sighed "Heh, guess this means we have to fight again."
Kairi ran out the gates, "Come on, Sora. Lets go find Riku." Sora stood up, "but what about the castle, if it was left unguarded the Heartless could take their advantage." Kairi looked back, "don't worry about that. Donald and Goofy are already inside the castle protecting the side gates."
Continued?
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 2:41 am
pwittygurl does the story have to be a kingdom hearts one? or can i make sora completely different? it has to be about the picture. so it does have to be kh and have it related to the pic like the clothes and stuff.
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:44 pm
Knights Of the keyblades, i give it 9 and a half out of 10 (9 1/2 -10). it is an aswume use of the picture. it brings it to life. it is so kool! but it could have been a little bit longer, but that does not matter biggrin
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:16 am
Thanks, i still think your one is better though.
9.7/10
Because you included a new world with the situation they have there. And that's what usually happens on KH's.
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 9:40 pm
i recon koyrotama wins! i vot 9.5 out of ten!
(Ash what happend to adam 2day?)
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 1:41 am
Lisa is in the house i recon koyrotama wins! (Ash what happend to adam 2day?) ((by uni_girl vote out of ten! oh and please remove my typing when you have fixed yor vote, thank you and come again.))hey lisa, he went home sick this morning because he wasn't feeling well. just a 24 hour bug. hes better now 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 12:40 pm
i vote for Koyrotama's story. it is really good! 9.9/10 biggrin
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 11:37 pm
Koyrotama wins!!!!!!
uni_girl = 4
Koyrotama = 6
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 4:46 pm
Title: The Island of Candy
username: Uni_girl
One day Luffy and his crew sailed to a weird island in the grand line. It was made of food. The mountains were ice-cream, the trees were candy canes with peppermint leaves, the water was chocolate and there was so much more that I could not say what else there was. Luffy full of hunger told his crew,” an island of food! (He drools) we have to go there!”
Sanji crosses his arms and says,” It might rot Nami’s beautiful teeth and your brain even more.”
Luffy didn’t hear Sanji so he yelled,” let go!”
Ussop said,” yea lets have some fun. I bet the navy has never been here. Plus look at all that chocolate.”
Chopped just sits there drooling his head off. Zolo who was in side the cabin came out and saw the island he stood shocked and yelled,” what the! That island is made of food!”
Luffy crawls up to Nami and begs,” please o, please can we go to the Island?”
Ussop and Chopper join in,” pretty please Nami?”
Nami thinks for a second and says,” Sure we deserve a treat.” She walks off in to the cabin while Luffy, Ussop and Chopper all cheer. Inside the cabin Vivi was sitting down looking at the maps that Nami had drawn. Vivi turned around and saw Nami, she smiled then said,’ you are a very good drawer Nami.”
Nami waves her hand,” it was nothing. I am glade you joined our crew, Alabaster is all sand and more sand, but here on the ocean there is the sea and sea then, more sea.”
Soon they land on the island. Vivi and Nami come out of the cabin and see that every thing was huge. Luffy jumped up and down holding his straw hat in place on his head. He jumps off the boat and runs up to one of the candy cane trees. The crew follows him. Luffy breaks the candy cane tree with a punch. He starts filling his mouth with parts of candy cane. Ussop and Chopper eat lots too. Nami and Vivi go over to the river of chocolate; they scoop up one hand full each and drink it. Zolo snuck over to a rock which on this island was a marshmallow. He eyes everyone then quickly starts eating the marshmallow, it was hit favourite sweet. Sanji goes over to the peppermint leaves and tastes one,” mmmmmm…it is good.”
Soon every one had eaten there load. It was sunset and everyone was getting sleepy. They slept on the island that night. Then when morning came Sanji was the first to wake up. He rubbed his eyes then looked at Luffy. Sanji yelled," aaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!! Luffy’s a kid!”
Everyone woke up and screamed, all the crew was kids. Luffy said,” how did it happen?”
Zolo looked at his hand, it was small and his three swords were smaller too. Zolo says,” it must have been the food we ate.”
Ami said in panic,” how do we change back, I want to be pretty again!”
Sanji slides over to Nami and Vivi,” but you are pretty, you set my heart on fire.”
Nami punches Sanji and says,” we better finds a cure. Chopper do you now what the cure is?”
Chopper looks at the ground and says,” I don’t know the cure.”
Nami screams at him,” your ment to be the doctor!”
Luffy stands up gets in between Chopper and Nami and says,” hey it is not his fault. It’s the islands fault!”
But as soon as her finished speaking the wind blows his hat off his head. Everyone looks at the hat. Luffy tries to stretch for it but because he is not as old as her was his arms were long enough and the hat blew towards the ice-cream mountains. Luffy and the straw hat crew chase after the hat. It blows down a hole in to a secret cave. Luffy and the crew do not se the hole and fall down it. Then landed on hard ground. Ussop looks around and says,” this is not food, it is actual land.”
Everyone looks around to see where the hat went over in the corner was the hat. Luffy got up and wiped the dirt off his shorts and went to pick up the hat. But just before his fingers touched the hat the rocks lifted up and turned into a shape of a girl. She was about 14. her hair was long and her clothes were brown like the rocks. Luffy’s hat lay on her head. She picked it up and gave it to the stunned Luffy,” here this must be yours.”
Luffy grabbed that hat off her hand pushed it on to his head, it was a bit big but that did not matter because he had it back. Zolo held out one of his swords at the girl and said,’ what is your name and what are you!?”
The girl said softly,” I am and Oread or a cave nymph. My name is Elizabeth; I too came to this island like you. I was a pirate until I fell down this hole and died. Now my soul is trapped in his cave. My crew ate the food on the island and turned in to children. They went looking for me then they saw my body in this cave. They climbed down and saw my soul. I know the cure so I lead them to it. They left my body here and ran off to steal from other islands. They abandoned me here.”
Vivi and Nami were crying,” that is sooooooooo sad. Waaaaaaaahhhhhhh!”
Elizabeth said,” I will tae you to the cure if you bury my body for me.”
Luffy nods and says,” where is you body?”
Elizabeth points to a passage way, the body lay there. Luffy dug a hole and place the body init. Then he pushed the dirt back on top. Elizabeth thanked Luffy and then began to lead them to the cure. The cure was a flower. Its stem was a blue lolly snake and the petals were green icing. Sanji picked the flower and cut it up. He gave a piece to each crew member. They all turned back to the way they were. They followed another passage. It leads right to the ship. All of them climbed on to the ship but Elizabeth could not leave the cave, Luffy and the crew all wave good bye and shout back,” thank you Elizabeth.”
Elizabeth smiled and waved good bye. Her form evaporated and she turned into butterflies. Then they disappeared too, her spirit was free. Nami set a course for the next island. What adventure awaited them now?
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 3:06 am
user name: Lisa garnet carnation
hedding: ~!FIGHT FOR YOUR DREAM…
even if it means turning into a kid!~
Once upon a time there were six children and a dear. They all have one thing in common and that is…they all want to go to the grand line. But one day as they were heading over there they met a great swards man, Zolo stayed behind to fight while the rest of the straw hat crew sailed onwards to the grand line. Also on there way the met a fantastic chef so of cores you guessed right Sangy stay behind to have a cook off, so the rest sailed onward along with a big bag of food already cooked. Then they met a man that was a big…BIG …BIG liar who claimed to be the best pirate in the world, Ussop wanted to stay behind to see which one of them can lie the most without wrecking themselves, the crew could not stay and watch so they said good bye and sailed on. Then they met crocerdial so Vivi and Nami stayed to fight him, once again the rest of them which is only Luffy and Chopper they ceeped sailing on. Then Luffy accidentally ate some berries so chopper fixed him up…but in the morning Luffy found out he was a CHILLED!!! That morning they met up with every one, everyone was a chilled except for Chopper. “CHOPPER YOU MUST HAVE DONE THIS TO ME!!!” Nami shouted at chopper, “MAKE ME BEAUTIFUL AGAIN!!!” chopper was scared be he got the courage to say “but it was not me…a…and it must only be temporary, I read about it, it lasts for 1 week.” Sangy says to Nami “you are always as beautiful as one million roses.” He says as he chews his lolly pop, “and the same goes for you Vivi!” his eyes turn to hearts, Nami hits him over the head so he shuts up. “Let’s get going then…AHOYHOY!” Luffy smiles as he says this. They get on there ship and continue sailing. They get to the grand line and they turn into them selves again. “Finally, it took long enough.” Zolo says to himself. He looks around to make sure so one is looking as he takes one of Sangy’s lolly pops and eats it.
**********1 week latter**********
“WERE HERE, WERE ACTUALLY AT THE GRAND LINE!!!” Luffy shouts happily. They all keep going in search of there dreams like Luffy’s is to be king of the pirates, Nami’s is to map out the hole world, Zolo’s is to be the greatest swards man ever, Choppers is to be a great doctor, Sangy's wants to see the great blue and Ussop’s well his is to have an adventure.
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:54 am
i have checked th votes and for the first time in this compertion we have a draw!
Lisa garnet carnation: 3
Uni_girl: 3
both win! new contest starts soon
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:03 pm
i like Lisa garnet carnations one!
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