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 Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:00 pm
The title is self explanatory... But a few rules...
You can use whatever language in poetry... I understand some words express feeling better than others.
Nothing sexual!!!
Blood and such is alright, just nothing to severe... Some of us hate throwing up...
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 2:41 pm
No one's posted in here! I have to write stuff. @w@
These were done last year for creative writing II.
The underlined portion isn't the name of the poem.
It's what type of poem it is.
Triolet
I feel them surrounding me so late at night
Hiding in shadows and biding their time
As I walk cautious circles, so full of fright
I feel them surrounding me so late at night
Growing more afraid at the thought of a bite
Something rustles leaves of trees in their prime
I feel them surrounding me so late at night
Hiding in shadows and biding their time
Rictameter
Dreaming
Enter new worlds
Created just for you
Let lose images of your mind
Wander through your amazing worlds; explore
What has your mind created now?
Providing escape from
Horrible truths
Dreaming
Double Etheree
Dark;
Hiding
Whatever
Creatures choose to
Take shelter in its
Ever growing shadows.
Who knows what those may be? I
Certainly do not, but my mind
Begins to wander without any
Urging of mine. It goes off, creating
Many strange and wonderful places that
I wish I myself could run off to.
So many possibilities
To explore and consider;
I will never manage
To think of them all.
As time passes
Picture beasts
In the
Dark.
Mirrored Refrain
Enter a world of fantasy
Where dragons rule the sky
And demons claim the land
As they set their goals so high.
In this world of wonder
Centaurs lend a helping hand
And no one blinks an eye
At an only elfin band.
While visiting this world
You’ll see what wonders lie
Between vast domains of sand
And clouds painted with dye.
And in this world fantastic,
Where reality seems banned
And fairies and gargoyles fly,
No one is ever damned.
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Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:23 am
Um.. here's some poetry of mine Starting with the oldest.. and these date back to about 4-5 years ago... i'm not exactly sure when. Notice the dramatic changes in mood from poem to poem.. assuming of course you read them all.
Enjoy?
What do I see?
I look around, what do I see?
People standing over me
expecting me to be the best
putting me up to their test.
They stop and stare
It isn't fair
The way they mock
The way they talk.
What they want the perfect person
the perfect child.
Not rough, but mild
They don't believe
What i can and can't acheive
Caught up in their pride
they push me aside
They never stop to think of me
What i have to say
It doesn't matter,
They'll never see the real me.
To them I don't exist
I am invisible
I see Everything
and when i look back
I feel like I was never there.
Past, Present, Future
I’m walking down a road
I see my Past
How I was always alone
Discriminated,
Hurt,
Torn apart
Then I see my present
How I’m alone
Lost in the world
Trying to find someone who cares
Then I see my future,
I see myself walking down
a long, dark road
Trying to find somewhere where I belong
but I never do, I just see me..............
.................Alone .
Alone
Everywhere I go
Everywhere I turn
There's never anyone standing beside me
No friends
No family
just me
alone
afraid
invisible.
Words....People
Faith.............
...........Loyalty
Comfort...........
...........Love
Each word with it’s own meaning
Just as unique as each of us
and yet they are the same
never changing, but we change
We grow, we adapt
words don’t
their meanings change over time
but so does our purpose in life
Like the words, we are the same
and still different at the same time
like the words
defining life in this world and who we are
we must define the world and who we are
We are who we make ourselves
just like the world we live in is what we make it
so why not make it the best to be
we use words to describe this world and the people in it
why not let the world describe itself
Like the words, we are the same
though we may believe different things
we may enjoy different things
we may have a different outlook on life than someone else
this is what sets us apart
why not accept the differences
and remember what’s the same
We all live in the same place
we should get along
no one should be afraid of showing
who they really are
But things like that shouldn’t matter
We are all the same
even though we appear different
appearances don’t matter
inside your heart and head is what really matters
Faith.............
...........Loyalty
Comfort...........
...........Love
Each word with it’s own meaning
just as unique as each of us
and yet they are the same
never changing, but we change....
Broken Friendship
Have you ever had some friends
you thought were true to you
but then one day
they went away
and left you to yourself.
Everyday they came and went
to say "hi" and "bye" to you.
and then again they went away
and left you all alone.
One minute they're your friend
and then the next you don't exist
they have their friends
and you have none.
The friends you had
make you feel so small
and when you need those friends the most
they're never around
to make you smile and make you laugh
They've shut you out
you don't belong
you don't exist
your a pigment buried deep in their imaginations.
Have You Ever (Revised 2006 version)
Have you ever told the truth
and no one would believe you?
Have you ever told a lie
and had it taken as truth?
Have you ever said something
you wish you'd never said?
Have you ever done something
that you now regret?
Have you ever wished
that you could just forget?
Have you ever made a promise
you knew you couldn't keep?
have you ever changed yourself
so you could just fit in?
have you ever hurt someone
just to prove a point?
have you ever done something
simply out of spite?
have you ever wished
everything would turn out right?
Have you ever made fun of someone
just so you would look cool?
have you ever turned your back on a friend
so you could keep your social status?
Have you ever ignored someone
who desperetly needed your help?
Have you ever felt
like you simply don't belong?
Have you ever wished
you could right all your wrongs?
Have you ever lost someone
you couldn't live without?
have you ever loved someone with all your heart
but were to shy to tell them?
have you ever had a goal
you knew you'd never reach?
have you ever trusted someone so much
you'd trust them with your life?
Have you ever wondered what it was like
in someone else's shoes?
Have you ever wished
that your fantasy could be reality?
have you ever given up
on what you truly believe?
have you ever wished
your life would just end?
have you ever loved someone
more than anything in the world?
Have you ever wished
that time would just stop.?
I have and so much more.
Someone Version 1(2006 Revised)
If I tried to tell you
all that was running through my brain
would you stay and listen
or would you walk away
What if what I had to say was important
something that would change our lives forever
would you want to listen then
or would you listen more?
What if I couldn't find the words for
all I have to share.
Would you be patient and wait
untill I found those words
or would you leave and walk away,
and break my fragile heart?
If I told you that I love you
Would I ruin everything we have
Or would I make what we have something more?
So when I say this,
can you figure out what i'm really saying?
Will you be there for me when I need someone to talk to,
someone who cares, someone to love.
What I'm asking you is
Would you be my someone?
Someone Version 2(Revised 2006)
Someone who is sweet and kind
Someone so hard to find
Someone who knows what to say
Someone who takes my breath away
Someone to care for the me inside
The part of my I usually hide
Someone who believes in me
yes all this thing, do you agree?
Someone for me to love
Someone sent from above.
Someone who's an answer to my prayer
Someone whom with my world I'd share.
That someone I have found in you
So listen well
and let me tell:
I love you
yes this is true.
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 2:59 pm
Music chimes,
and my mind won't rhyme;
I'm sitting here,
unable to live.
Such a long day,
blowing slowly away,
under aliases unknown to me.
Soft music, louder,
Harsh music, delicate,
Upside down is this world around,
leaving me smiling after.
Oh, tumbling, tumbling,
step after step.
Someone come catch me,
hold my hand.
God, I must confess,
has turned his head my way.
Tries to pick me up,
but I think has gone away.
Don't know what's wrong,
don't get why I'm sad.
If only I weren't so dejected,
or get so easily mad.
I know I don't seem this way,
at least not a lot,
but who's to say what I'm thinking,
or what I might be not.
For the love of God,
Just someone say,
Something better to lighten my day!
Don't ask what's wrong,
don't pretened to care why,
even if you do,
Just don't even try.
I want to be alone,
to listen to others,
To sit quietly in my missing,
to long, but smile,
and always be thinking.
Lord, how I long
to keep myself from sinking.
Let me smile, man,
I want to be carefree.
Now nothing can hold me back.
Not even thee.
Now that was a rhyme,
I think I must confess,
That the only reason it was there,
was because everything else..
well..
Didn't rhyme!
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