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insanity_is_me

PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 2:26 pm


a poem i wrote that's more like a poetic monolog.i worked hard on it 3nodding

A Love Like Nothing Else

My love for you is like a river,raging and true.It twists and curves,taking us to many places of wonder.It supports much life,and also provides it.Like a river,my love for you is deep and wide.

But more so,my love for you is like a morning star,rising anew each day,staying just as beautiful.It lights up the world and provides energy for all.It is red,crimson,and passionate.Like a morning star,my love for you is shining bright and beautiful.

But even more so,my love for you is like a flower petal,decorating the world.It attracts life and wonder.It is frail,yet it will not be easily blown away.It sticks close ao the rest of the bloom,providing life for it,and the bloom providing life for the petal.Like a flower petal,my love for you is beautiful and soft.

But most of all,my love for you is none of those,it is unique.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 9:51 am


I'm not much of a judge of poetry, but I like it. 3nodding

Lady Sickness
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insanity_is_me

PostPosted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 2:56 pm


yay!thanks.
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