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So, I've got a poem, tell me if it's any good.

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MuffinZ385648

PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:07 pm


And They Loved

And she cried
Until the tears wouldn't come anymore
Sat and drowned out the want of love, of touch, of someone to love, to love her, to hold her.
Mostly to want her.
Lonely, scared, unloved.
Could it end?
Would it end?
Why was this happening to her?
No one could answer her questions.
No one could be there for her.

And he sighed.
Until the air couldn't reach his lungs for another.
Sat and wondered what his life had become.
Where it would go.
He didn't know who to love, didn't know what to do.
Why couldn't he stop thinking?
Why couldn't he sleep?
Thinking, sighing, wondering.
Could it end?
Would it end?
Why couldn't he love?
Why couldn't he stop?
No one could be there for him.

And they sat.
Talked all their troubles away.
And then she asked him to stay.
He answered her questions, she made his mind rest.
They loved, like no one could ever love before.
They both felt like they could soar hight up in the clouds.
No doubt at all.
They loved.

And she smiled, them watching her through the glass.
She had a mom and a dad there to love her, hold her, care.
Always be there.
And she laughed, walking around with her friends.
Not realizing how lucky she really is.
And they loved.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 2:08 pm


I like it...it makes me feel happy 3nodding

AngelicTurtle


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Crew

PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 6:43 pm


i will ahve to read it later. :}
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