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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 9:25 am


ok this starts out as pokemon then goes to inuyasha then goes to yu yu hakusho. it only has one person from the show in it, Kurama, it is because of my friends they started helping me write it not knowing what i was going for. I think it is really good in some parts and i found a place to put Hiei in but your going to have to what awhile before you read but it isn't going to be that that long. It is my first story and maybe tell me ways to make it better. Though in all this story is a bit stupid. Oh and don't mind the I's and Me's, I forgot to change them to aurthor's point of view.

Also you're only going to get to read this chapter unless you want to read the others I have typed up.
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It has been two years since Sakura's journy with ash, misty, may, and pikachu, and boy does she miss them. There has been two things to happen during that time ash and misty broke up, and she have gotten two new neighbors richie and kiyo we are good friends. she told them about her adventures with ash, misty, may, and pikachu. Today they are going to go find them because richie and kiyo wanted to see what it was like to go on adventures with pokemon. They said bye to their families and set off to find ash, misty, may, and pikachu. they found them the next day in littleroot. sakura said

hello everybody.

Everbody turned around and said sakura and ran and huged her.

Ash, misty, and may said who are these two?

So Sakura intoduced everybody.

Then they set off twords odale. When they had just six miles to go it got dark. they decide to go two more miles before setting up camp.

Richie said oh, i'm tired can't we set up camp now?

Ash said no we got another mile to go before we can.

Misty said if you can't take it why did you come?

Sakura said don't be so hard on him he's new at this.

May said but you never complained when you first came along.

she said that's because I walked a lot before then to train for all the walking.

Ash, misty, and may said oh.

Then they set up camp. When they finished doing that sakura went to a nerby pond to get some water to cook some rice. When they fished eating they went straight to bed because it was late. The next morning when everbody got up sakura had already cooked some eggs.

Kiyo and richie said you are a geat cook.

sakura said thank you.

When they finshed eating they went the rest of the way to odale. They met an old friend april.

May said what are you doing out here?

April said after my short journy with ya'll i decided to go on my own journey, and who are these two?

sakura intorduced them and said well better get going to petalburg.

Everyone said goodbye and went on their way. When they got there it was dark. They went and rented a room and rested. Ash asked kiyo to take a walk with him. Kiyo said

well ok.

Then richie asked sakura to take a walk with him. she said

ok.

Ash told kiyo that he liked her even though it has been a few days since they met. Kiyo said

me too.

So now they're offically together.

Richie told sakura the same thing ash told kiyo and she replyed with the same answer as kiyo so now we're offically together too. Then they went back to the room to get the others to get some dinner. When they got back to the room they watched tv. Then they fell asleep with the tv on when it was 1:00 in the morning. The next morning they woke up at 9:00 and ash yawns and says

i can't belive we fell asleep with the tv on.

May said me either.

Kiyo and richie said we do it all the time.

Misty said lets pack up and go eat breakfast.

Sakura said yea then me and ash can go chalenge normen.

During breakfast richi and ash accidently said that richie was going with me and ash was going with kiyo when their the ones who said it was a secreat. This made misty and may very jealous. When we finshed eating we went to the gym to challenge norman. Sakura challenged normn and succeded and so did ash. Then they left for rustboro city. Along the way they met benji.

Benji said hey what's up?

Everybody said do we know you?

Benji said i don't think so.

sakura said hey i'm your cousin how can you not know me?

Benji said oh yea you are my cousin.

Then they hung out a while.

Benji said I have to go to work now.

Then it stared raining and then a vortex opened up and swallowed them whole. When they woke up may said

where are we?

sakura said I don't know.

Then everybody was like what happened to sakura, because little did they know she turened into a half cat demon. Everone was staring at her when she said

why are you staring at me like that.

Kiyo said oh nothing really.

Then she noticed she had a cat tail, retractable claws, fangs, and a sword like stick that glows blue when in use. Soon after people came up. Everone said

who are you?

They said i'm inuyasha, i'm sango, i'm kagome,i'm shippo, i'm miroku, and this is kirara.

Everyone said what do you want?

They said sakura.

Everyone said why?

They said to help us find the jewl shareds and stop naraku.

Ash, misty, may, kiyo, and richie said who is that and what are those.

They said here let us explaine it to you.

So they did so. Then they got the point and joined them on their quest. After awhile of walking another vortex opened up and swallowed them whole. Then thirty minutes after they fell through they woke up.

Shippo said w-where are we?

Everyone else said i don't know.

Inuyasha said uh this is not our world how can we get back we still have a job to do ya know.

Just then a blue light flashed and they where gone.

May said what happened to them?

sakura said I geuss this world doesn't want them, I geuss they don't belong.

Everyone else said but why not?

she said I don't know.

Then they noticed she had every thing she had in the other world, she decided to hide her tail and claws. Not to long after a person came up. Ash said

What are you doing here and what do you want?

The person said I saw a blue flash of light and came to see what it was and I want nothing.

Ash said oh ok.

Richie said well who are you?

The person said my name is kurama.

May said your kinda cute.

Misty & kiyo said yea.

Sakura said kinda, kinda what are you blind he's much more than kinda cute he's hot.

Then she relized what i said and blushed a little.Then Kurama said let me take you to a hotel to get each of you a room. So theywent & got us a room. Kurama said he would come back & show them around town & then they would talk & get to know each other better. Then an hour later he came back & showed us around town & then we went to place to talk to get to know each other better. Kurama said oh I forgot to ask you your names. We said i'm sakura, i'm ash, i'm richie, i'm may, i'm kiyo, & i'm misty. Kurama said well it's nice to meet you all. I said it's nice to meet you too. Then Kurama asked me if he could speak to me alone. So I followed him to a nerby pond. Kurama grabbed your hands & looked me straight in the eyes & told me I was the most beautiful thing he ever saw. And me forgetting that I was already with richie, said to Kurama I know we haven't known each other long but I think I like you & he told you the same, so now Kurama & I were together.(Friend did that part. stupid knows it doesn't work that way.)

We went back all that to find everyone & richie asked me what was going on because he over heard us talking, then you said I'm sorry richie but I like Kurama, & richie was so mad that he almost started a fight with Kurama but he didn't for his own good. All of a sudden we heared misty scream and then ran to see what was going on & kiyo & ash had dissappeared. We searched for hours but could not find them. Till finally we found them making out by the pond!(friend did that too.) I screamed oh my goodness! And kiyo & ash turned all red & jumped up. I said what were ya'll doing out here all day!? And kiyo & ash just looked at each other & grinned. Then kiyo said nothing at all! So the rest & I left them there alone. Then we went back to our rooms, then I invited Kurama into my room & we talked, played cards, & watched tv. At 1:00 I fell asleep & Kurama stayed for a few more minutes then turned everything off then left but note before writing a note.

When I woke up you noticed he was gone & also the note he left. When I finshed reading the note I was thinking wow this my be a date. Then I went to take a bath. When you got out it was almost 1:00 so you decided to go on to the restrant. When I got there Kurama was already there waiting for me. Then we went in & took a seat & ordered a t-bone steak, baked potato, & a salad. While we were eating Kurama told me aabout his past and everything. I was ok with that because I have a tail, and claws and I showed them to him & said I geuss I'm a demon too. Kurama said yea you pretty much are. Then he asked me if I wanted to go to the movies like on a date. I thought you mean this isn't the date then said I'd love to. Kurama said great I'll come get you at 7:00. I said ok 7:00 sounds good to me.

Then we left & Kurama walked me back to my room. When we got there ash, kiyo, richie, misty, & may said were have you two been!? I said none of your bisuness, go back to your own rooms. They said fine we will, then slammed the doors shut. Kurama said well see you at 7:00, bye. I said ok bye. Then I went into my room & sat down the couch & said wow I'm going on a date and it's my first on to. Then I turned on the tv to help pass time. It was 4:00 when I said man the time sure is going by rather slowly, I wish it would hurry up & be 7:00. Then I decided to take a nap to help pass time. Then 3 hours later there came a knock at the door, I woke up & looked at the clock it was 7:00, I quickly turned off the tv and rushed to the door. When I opened the door Kurama said well are you ready? I said yea of course I am.

On the way there Kurama said when you said I was hot did you mean it? I said of course I did I like you a lot. Kurama said I like you a lot too, then took my hand & we held hands the rest of the way there. When we got there we saw THE GRUDGE & held hands through the whole movie. When we got back to the hotel Kurama was about to say bye when I said could you please sleep over tonight please. Kurama said well I geuss it couldn't hurt. I turned on the tv and said here you can watch what you want to. Then the phone rang, Kurama answerd it, it was richie, he said were have ya'll been & why are you over there!? Kurama said we went to the movies & she asked me to stay, ok. Richie said no it's not ok so bye. I said who was that? Kurama said richie. I said oh I guess he was calling to see were we had been. Then we watched tv some more. At 12:00 I fell asleep on his shoulder he then put his arms around me and went to sleep himself.

When I woke up Kurama was still asleep & I didn't want to wake him so I stayed there snuggled up in his arms untill he woke up. When he woke up he said did you sleep well like that? I said yes I sleep fine like this. Kurama said well that's good, do you want to go get some breakfast? I said no I'm not hungery right now. He said ok then what do you want to do? I said I don't know maybe go somewhere. He said want to go walking on a trial in the woods? I said yea sure.

When we walked out ash said what did you to do last night? I said nothing but watch tv. Kiyo said yea I bet. I said look whose talking what did you do a while after we got here? Kiyo & ash was silent. Kurama said forget them & come on. May said were are you going? I said none of you bisuness. Misty said yea it is. I said no it is not so bye. Then we left & went walking on the trail in the woods. When we got to the end of the trail there was a lake with a waterfall & with cherryblossoms all around. I said wow this is beautiful. Kurama said yea but not as beautiful as you. This made me blush, then a little while later I said can we go back now I'm getting kinda hungry. Kurama said ok we can come back later.

When we got to the restrant we had eggs, baccon, & pancakes. After we got full I wanted to go back and walk the trail in the woods. As we were walking Kurama grabbed me, turned me around and then kissed me! After mine & Kurama's long intense kiss, Kurama said sakura I have something to tell you.But behinde some bushes kiyo, ash, misty, may, & richie, were hiding.

As they were listening to mine & Kurama's coversation, richie said HOW DARE HE KISS HER!?! Ash whispered in his ear, don't worry about it. she's with Kurama not you. Kiyo got aggervated with the both of them & told them to shut up before she hurts them. Well all 5 of them started to listen to what Kurama had to say. I asked Kurama after a moment of silence, what do you have to tell me, Kurama? He jumped at the sudden question and said well.... I know we haven't known each other for a very long time, but I feel like we've gotten really close. I said me too. Kurama grabes both of my hands & says I love you sakura. I was speechless.(this whole paragraph and part of the last and the next few, my friend did that)

When richie heard him say that he jumped out from behind the bushes & yelled WHAT?!?! HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE!!?! I jumped back and said how long have you been there!? Then kiyo, ash, misty, & may got up, looking guilty, & ash said the whole time. Richie all of a sudden said who do you think you are trying to take her from me! And sadly Kurama said I didn't mean any of it(wanting richie not to get anything started.) I felt embarrassed & started crying & took off runing, Kurama hollered sakura wait! Then kiyo told him to let me go because he'd hurt me enough.
Then kiyo went to find me! As kiyo ran past tree after tree yelling for me, she stooped dead in her tracks. Kiyo's side had a sdtich in it from all the worry & stress. She sat down in a patch of buttercups. The sun was shining bright & she could her brids chirpimg from afar.

Then she heard light sobbing somewhere behind a few trees. Kiyo caught her breath &got up. She walked around for a few minutes & finally spotted me sitting on a tree stump. It seemed as if the light only shined on me. Kiyo walked over to me & asked, sakura are you ok?? I jumped because I didn't hear her walk up to me, & said I'll be ok. It's just thatI didn't know you would do something like that. Kiyo said I'm sorry. I didn't know richie was going to react like that. I didn't know Kurama was going to tell you that!! I smiled a tear-stained smile & said me either. They both laughed. I said I forgive you kiyo. But what am I supposed to do about the whole Kurama & richie situation? Kiyo said well lets see Kurama just told you that he loved you & what has richie said? I smiled & said yea I know but what do I say to him? Kiyo gave a look of deep thought & said do you love him? I turned about 6 diffrent shades of crimson.

I finally said maybe.... ok.... yea I do. Should I tell him? Kiyo told her do what you feel like doing. I hugged my best friend & said ok I will. But he said he didn't mean any of it, I just rememberd that. He was just saying that, kiyo told her, he doesn't want to have a fight with richie. Oh I said. Maybe me & Kurama should talk. That would be a good idea kiyo said.

After that they walked back to the beautiful place Kurama had taken me. After about an hour of walking & laughing with kiyo I went to find Kurama & kiyo went to find ash. I found Kurama swimming in the lake, kiyo found ash in his hotel room. It was about 8:30 p.m. & it looked darker than what it really was because the fireflies were visable from afar. I took off my shoes & socks off & rolled up my pants legs and put my feet into the cold water & Kurama heard the disruption. He jerked out of the water & looked around. He finally spotted me sitting on a ledge humming to my self. He swam over to me & said what were you humming? I said oh nothing.

He said well what ever you were humming it sounded wonderful. Then we talked about what happened today & other stuff. Then I said i love you to Kurama. Kurama had a look of shock on his face and said really? Really I said. Kurama asked you're not just saying that are you? I replied no. I mean it. I never felt this way about any guy.

Kurama said I never felt this way about any girl. They both smiled & Kurama leaned in for a kiss. but kiyo came running towrads them & stopped because she saw she had came at the wrong time. Kurama saw kiyo & pulled away. Sorry, kiyo said I just thought ya'll would like to know something. What? Kurama & I said in unison. Kiyo said well.......ash perposed to me. What?! Kurama & I said once agin in unison.

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So what you think, I know it is a bit stupid, and needs to be better.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 8:16 pm


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