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Aubrey Nicole

PostPosted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 12:57 pm


Alright, lame title. It's just random, so I don't have to call it "Untitled". Rating is for language. Um, it's AU, which means I can change stuff about the band members, like ages & family & stuff. I think that's about all the explanation it needs.
-&-

“Watch where you’re going, freak!” some a*****e said, ramming hard into my arm, causing my books to fall on the ground. I spun around to see who the ******** was, but whoever it was had fled. I grumbled and dropped to pick up my books. I was the new girl in school for the fifth time in my life (not counting elementary school). My mom never found a boyfriend she liked for very long, which resulted in us moving around a lot to live with some guy or other she’d met online or wherever. So far the current guy wasn’t a complete a*****e – but everyone at my new school was. Just because I was the new girl, just because I happened to be a little chubby, just because I happened to have baggy clothes instead of those lame-a** tight halter tops and skirts that most (okay, pretty much ALL) girls my age wore.

“Hey b***h, why don’t you go back where you came from?” A tall blond guy sneered. I turned and got ready to punch him when someone grabbed my hand. I turned around to see who had stopped me. Another tall guy, this one kind of muscular, with this crazy afro-style hair on his head had grabbed my arm.

“What the ********? Let go!” I shouted, trying to wrench myself out of his grip. The blond guy raised his eyebrows.

“He’s not worth it,” Afro-guy told me softly.

“Shut up Ray, this doesn’t have anything to do with you,” Blond guy said.

“Why don’t you shut the ******** up Brian and go bother someone else?” another voice said, and I turned to see two more guys standing with Ray. One of them had longish black hair and a glare on his face. The other wasn’t much taller than I was with short black hair. What, so now I couldn’t even fight my own fight? I needed guys to back me up?

“Whatever,” Brian said, rolling his eyes. He left, and Ray finally let go of my arm. I adjusted my backpack strap on my shoulder and looked at the three guys that were still standing there.

“I’m Ray,” the guy with the Afro said. His voice was kind of weird – it was too soft to belong to someone so big. He stuck out a hand, like he was expecting me to shake with him or something. I didn’t, and he pulled his hand back.

“I could’ve taken him,” I said. Shorty snorted and then laughed. I glared at him.

“What, just because I’m a girl you think I couldn’t have taken him?” I asked, starting to get angry again.

“That’s not what he meant,” Ray said, glancing at Shorty, “right Frankie?” Shorty – Frankie – shrugged.

“It’s just that, you don’t want to mess with Brian. You might get the best of him now, but then he’ll send his friends after you and you won’t stand a chance,” the dark haired guy said. Whatever, I thought. I really didn’t feel like arguing with them right now.

“Hey, do you have lunch right now?” Ray asked. I thought about lying and saying no, but decided against it, and I nodded.

“Do you want to come with us?” he asked. Well, it’ll be easier than eating alone, I told myself, and so I nodded again. I didn’t even know who these guys were, and I wanted to hate them for not letting me beat the crap out of that Brian kid, but at least they weren’t acting like assholes.

Instead of walking in the direction of the cafeteria, though, the three of them, led by Frankie, walked in the opposite direction, and then out a set of doors in the side of the building. I followed them, a little wary because I really didn’t want to get in trouble on my first day. Once outside, they walked around a corner of the building into a kind of hidden area, away from any windows. Frankie sat down on the grass and folded his legs Indian-style.

“Um, are we allowed to be out here?” I asked as the others sat down as well. They shrugged.

“Who cares?” Ray asked, “Have a seat,” he said. I sighed, but sat down, making sure to keep enough distance, but not too much. I searched through my bad and found the lunch I’d packed – a peanut butter sandwich. I hated peanut butter, but Donald (Mom’s new boyfriend) didn’t buy lunch meat, so peanut butter was the only kind of sandwich I could have for now. I glanced at my mashed sandwich and decided I wasn’t hungry. And that when I was getting home I would borrow Mom’s money and car and buy some real food.

“Mind if I smoke?” The still-unnamed black-haired guy asked, pulling a pack of cigarettes out of his sweatshirt pocket.

“Um, actually yeah, I do,” I answered, wondering why he’d bothered to ask. He shrugged and put the pack away. Wow, maybe these guys weren’t going to be as bad as I thought.

“So, um, what’s your name? How come you moved here? Where are you from?” Frankie asked.

“My name is Nicole, uh, Nikki. We moved here because my mom met this guy or something, and we moved in with him,” I answered.

“Really, who’s the guy?” The still-unnamed black-haired guy wanted to know.

“Donald,” I said, wondering why they wanted to know.

“Does he have a whole bunch of tattoos and s**t?” Frankie asked.

“Yeah, but how did you know that?” I asked. The three of them exchanged looks. Okay, this was getting kind of weird.

“That’s Gerard’s dad,” Frankie answered finally. I was going to guess that Gerard was the name of the black-haired dude.

“What? That doesn’t make any sense. Donald lived alone before we moved in,” I said. But now that I thought about it, Mom did mention something about Donald having kids.

“Well, yeah, Mikey and I only stay with him every other weekend. We mostly live with our mom,” Gerard replied. I nodded. There wasn’t much to say now. It was weird that I’d just met this guy today and he happened to be the son of my mom’s new boyfriend. That was a really weird coincidence.

After another five minutes of awkward conversation, the bell rang and I had to go back inside for class, which I did. I went through the rest of my school day without seeing any of the guys, and without pissing anyone else off. Just barely.

-&-


Um, so? Thoughts?
PostPosted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 2:39 pm


ooo! twist! lol, i like it!

CaptainCheerleaderInsano


blacklitttleheart

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 8:26 am


its cute!! 4laugh

emo emo emo
PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 10:11 am


Thanks. More is coming soon. xd

Aubrey Nicole


Aubrey Nicole

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 11:33 am


I was happy to discover that on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays, I had English first thing in the morning. At least my days at school wouldn’t be so completely horrible. When I found the classroom that English was to be held in, I found a seat near the front of the room and took out my notebook. English was one of the few things I’d ever enjoyed about school. I could really get into a discussion about a book or a writing assignment.

“Hey, you’re in this class?” I heard Ray say. I looked up and he was standing there in an Iron Maiden t-shirt and black jeans that were kind of tight on him. I hated to admit it but he looked kind of hot, with his clothes all tight and then his hair all wild. I couldn’t help but notice that his lips looked like they’d be really soft to kiss.

“Yeah, I guess I am,” I answered him. Ray nodded and sat down in the desk next to me. A few minutes later the teacher walked in and started class. We spent half the class writing an essay, and the second half of class having people read their essays out loud. It was all pretty boring, but it was English class, so I couldn’t really complain.

After English I had Geometry, which was incredibly boring, and after that was History, which was also boring. Brian the a*****e from the day before was in my class, but I don’t think he noticed me – or if he did, he didn’t say anything.

Then it was time for lunch, and I wondered if I should look for the Ray and the others or just try to find a seat in the cafeteria. I looked around at the full tables and realized that this was going to really uncomfortable. It felt like everyone was looking at me. I realized that this was going to be even more awkward than the day before eating with Ray, Gerard and Frank.

“Hey, were you gonna come sit with us or not?” I heard Ray’s voice and turned to see him standing there, looking like my knight in shining armor, coming to rescue me from standing here in the cafeteria like an idiot for the rest of the lunch period.

“Yeah, sorry,” I replied, and walked with him outside where the others were. Frank and Gerard were already sitting on the grass, and Gerard was lighting a cigarette. I sat down and took out my lunch – at least this time I could have a sandwich that I liked.

“So, Mikey and I are supposed to be visiting our dad this weekend,” Gerard told me, after taking a puff on his cigarette. I tried to ignore the smoke coming from it.

“That’s…fantastic,” I answered. I focused on the eating of my sandwich.

“Just thought I’d let you know,” he said. There was a silence. But it wasn’t completely awkward. I guess these guys just weren’t really big talkers or something.

“So, Ray, what usually happens in English? Is it always writing papers or does the teacher actually teach once in a while?” I asked him. Ray shrugged, picking at the grass.

“We just finished reading Oedipus Rex,” he said.

“Oh my gosh! I love Oedipus Rex!” I exclaimed. Ray glanced at me with his eyebrows raised and a look that said ‘are you ******** crazy?’

“You’ve got to be shitting me,” he said. I shook my head, and took a bite of my sandwich.

“You didn’t like it? I thought it was great, all that stuff to think about, you know like knowledge, and everything,” I said, but I could see that Ray clearly wasn’t interested.

“All I got from it was this dude had sex with his mom. Creepy, okay?” he replied. He’d stopped picking at the grass, though, and was looking at me.

“Well that was the prophecy. And the whole idea of the book was, would he still have done it if he’d never been told about the prophecy?” I explained. Ray shrugged.

“I’ll trust you on that. I thought it was a lame book, but whatever,” he said. I decided that it wasn’t worth arguing about, so I kept my mouth shut and finished eating my lunch. When lunch was over I went to class for the rest of the day, and then home. And since it was Friday, Mom and Donald went out to eat, and I stayed home, listening to music and stuff before finally falling asleep.
--

(sorry this one was kinda boring. it'll get more interesting, i swear)
PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 5:45 pm


I woke up on Saturday morning and remembered that Gerard and his brother were supposed to be coming to stay. This was going to be awkward in more ways than one. To start with, I’d only met Gerard a few days ago, and I still didn’t know him very well. And, well, I’d never met his brother before. Well, this was guaranteed to be interesting.
I dressed and showered and did all that fun morning stuff. When I got downstairs for breakfast, Mom was at the counter, making what smelled to be pancakes. There was no sign of Gerard or his brother. Donald was at the table, reading the newspaper, and I realized how domestic this all looked. It was nice, actually. I wondered if Donald and Mom’s relationship would last long.

“I don’t know if I mentioned it, but my sons are going to be staying the weekend,” Donald said when I sat down at the table.

“Yeah, Gerard told me,” I replied. Donald looked a little confused.

“I talked to him at school a few times,” I explained. He nodded. Mom was serving me a plate of pancakes when the knock on the door came. Donald folded his newspaper and went to get it. I got that weird nervous feeling in my stomach but I ignored it and ate my food instead. I heard talking in the hall and a minute or so passed before Donald came back into the room with Gerard and a thin, mousy looking boy with big glasses. Both boys held backpacks in their hands.

“Well, let’s see if we can do this introduction right, eh?” Donald said, “These are my sons, Mikey and Gerard,” he said, “and this is Judith and her daughter, Nicole. Everyone got it?” he looked around. No one had anything to say, so he sat back down. I finished my food and put my plate in the sink.

“Dad, I invited Ray and Frankie to come over later, is that okay?” Gerard said finally. I perked up at Ray’s

“Fine with me,” Donald said, without even looking up. Gerard nodded and he glanced over at me. We had a mini staring contest until Gerard finally looked down at the bag in his hands and then over at Mikey.

“I’m gonna go put my stuff away, okay?” he said to anyone that was listening. No one replied, and he left the room. Mikey followed him. I went into the living room, planning on watching some TV, when there was another knock on the door.


(um..yeah more coming when I finish the next section)

Aubrey Nicole


EMO-Duckie101

PostPosted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 11:15 am


I like it.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 5:00 pm


i love it!

SexyGoggles


Aubrey Nicole

PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 4:45 pm


I kind of forgot about this. Is there anyone reading this? I'd just like to know if I should continue working on it or not.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 10:21 pm


I just finished reading and you definitely got me hooked.
You should seriously post some more. =D

iGremlin


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:51 pm


Hope You Update Soon, I like it
PostPosted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 10:14 pm


Finally! A Ray fic!!!!!!! Tis really good, but why aren't you continuing?

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KilljoyInsanity

PostPosted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 9:22 pm


This guild is always empty now.
Like Punk Vs Emo, people
barely goes on, and when they do
they don't visit here,
the main forum is like totally empty,
and this is practically the only
forum/subforum that's half-thriving.
It's the truth, might as well face it.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:49 am


Goth Shadow
This guild is always empty now.
Like Punk Vs Emo, people
barely goes on, and when they do
they don't visit here,
the main forum is like totally empty,
and this is practically the only
forum/subforum that's half-thriving.
It's the truth, might as well face it.


Yeah seriously. A lot of Gaia Guilds are dying now. People have lives now, I guess... I know I don't. 4laugh

xvanyaa

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KilljoyInsanity

PostPosted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 8:23 pm


haha, same here.
I have nothing to do when my mom's gone
so I sneak.
I really don't have a life, I just
get so absorbed into gaia.
hehe.
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