Firstly, the update. Yes, Phoe was supposed to do it. x_x;; But Phoe IMed me telling me she couldn't do it because she had a massive storm of work this week so she let me do it. XD And yes, I did try to delay it so she could do it, but she said to go ahead.
Second, the shortness! Sorry about the length of the update. I had planned on making it nice and actually finale sized, but at about 8:55, my mother had shouted down to me that I was getting off at 9:00 (Yes, Hikari is only 15 1/2. heart )
I will hopefully be making an epilouge to fill in some plotholes to make things longer, as well as add in some classic SG comedy. I hope you all liked it last night, besides the fact of the quick read.
Third, my time as GM. I apologize for my the flub-ups pointed out by certain people. I rushed on Day 7 and had apparently many blatant flaws in my update. ... very bad flaws. ._.
I'm a bit new to this, and I realize there are a few things I should change about what I do before I even CONSIDER running for the Game X parts. From now on, I will be including less people in the update, leaving it only for those who actually are being killed, jailed, and such. ^_^; I leave too much suspicion when I add other people (ex Veliofi Kabobs). Or maybe when I do it, I eliminate all suspicion from a person? Iunno. I should just cut down on it.
But I will have it in my game X application. That is important to the story. ninja
I thank you all for putting up with me during my time as GM. ^_^;
I'm sure Phoe will put up her two cents later. <<; Since I got 3 days and she got one, I really apologize to her. Give her luff. XD
HirunHikari

Second, the shortness! Sorry about the length of the update. I had planned on making it nice and actually finale sized, but at about 8:55, my mother had shouted down to me that I was getting off at 9:00 (Yes, Hikari is only 15 1/2. heart )
I will hopefully be making an epilouge to fill in some plotholes to make things longer, as well as add in some classic SG comedy. I hope you all liked it last night, besides the fact of the quick read.
Third, my time as GM. I apologize for my the flub-ups pointed out by certain people. I rushed on Day 7 and had apparently many blatant flaws in my update. ... very bad flaws. ._.
I'm a bit new to this, and I realize there are a few things I should change about what I do before I even CONSIDER running for the Game X parts. From now on, I will be including less people in the update, leaving it only for those who actually are being killed, jailed, and such. ^_^; I leave too much suspicion when I add other people (ex Veliofi Kabobs). Or maybe when I do it, I eliminate all suspicion from a person? Iunno. I should just cut down on it.
But I will have it in my game X application. That is important to the story. ninja
I thank you all for putting up with me during my time as GM. ^_^;
I'm sure Phoe will put up her two cents later. <<; Since I got 3 days and she got one, I really apologize to her. Give her luff. XD
HirunHikari

