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Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 8:19 pm

Summary: On Ino’s 16th birthday, she gets a surprise that she will never forget that will change the lives of her and of those around her

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3212023/1/

Once you read it youll understand. Thanks for taking your time to read it

Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 7:32 pm

nice xD great job with the fan fictions

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Demitra Jean

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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 2:11 pm

Wow, other than a few minor gramatical errors that was really REALLY good. Keep up the good work.

Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 4:13 pm

I think that was great, i have only read the first chapter but i thought it was marvelous, ( i noticed that you do have a few errors grammatikly and i think i saw a spelling mistake), but it was good.

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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 8:48 pm

I thank all of you who reviewed. Reviews keep me motivated to keep on writing. The next chapter should be out soon 3nodding

Also, for some reason, grammatical errors happen. I try to fix them, but they keep coming back. Sorry people

Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 10:28 pm

Next chapter is up ninja

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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 11:13 am

mrgreen love it! mrgreen

Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 2:49 pm

I like it!!!

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ashian babe777

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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 4:20 pm

That's really good! surprised What a complicated plot. What gave you this idea? domokun I'm jealous. xD

Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 1:36 pm

ashian babe777

That's really good! surprised What a complicated plot. What gave you this idea? domokun I'm jealous. xD

Well, I tend to notice a lot of things around me that other people don't. Like Ino's pupilless eyes. This was the conversation:

Me: Have you ever realized that Ino's eyes had no pupil? *I just finished reading a fanfic saying she didn't and it was true*
Friend: Huh. Who knew?
Me: Wounder why...
Friend: Maybe shes from teh Hyuuga clan surprised
Me: Thats in interesting idea...I could work with that....

Thats basically the jist of the conversation

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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:14 am

it was so long i didnt even bother reading it

Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 8:43 pm

kakashihatake12345

it was so long i didnt even bother reading it

rolleyes Wow, I have one of the more shorter of the good stories too.

But I accept your review non the less. You're entitled to your own opinion.

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Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 5:05 am

love it

Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 8:51 pm

I love it.i was sad when it ended.><

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SirBaka
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:55 pm

Wow. People still read my old stories? So weird to see stuff I wrote back 3 year ago. rofl

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