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lidless_i

PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 4:07 pm


Everything I want,
You cannot have.

It seems so unfair,
You should be glad.
Who are you to decide your fate?


I only want to be free of the bonds.
How am I to understand what envokes such hate?

You are a fool to think anyone would listen.

Is that supposed to stop me from trying?
What if I think that you are lying?


Your time could be better spent.
Go to the church, at least repent.


But God is dead, his body rotten.
His teachings have been long forgotten.


The needs of the many, or the wants of the few? The choice remains; it's them or you.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 6:31 pm


neeeeeeeat. cool

I like this a lot. *steals to put in archives/book*

By the way, nice sig.

KirbyVictorious


lidless_i

PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 6:56 pm


Thanks
PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 5:57 pm


whyyyyyy does everyone in this guild say that god is dead? I'm a very curious fluffy pink ball.

KirbyVictorious


The Duchess Grey

Astounding Explorer

PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 6:16 pm


I don't believe God's dead. But then again I am a Christian so...

That would be really weird if I thought God was dead. xp
PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 6:37 pm


I used to be christian but the practicises and context of the religion (and a few of the more fanatic of it's followers) turned me away from it, so that's why that line is there. If it offended anyone, no offense but you are overly sensitive.

lidless_i


Gomenroia

PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 8:55 pm


I think the thought that God is Dead is partly from people who don't believe. And the other part is thus: If belief makes a thing real, and you don't believe... it's dead.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 6:57 am


Hey, I don't care. I'm a polytheist most days. I mean, look at my book.

But then, my book has REALLY strong Christian overtones. Like, the chosen are Jesus, there's a second coming, Heaven and hell, etc.


But I'll babble about that osoemwhere else. *ninjas away ninja *

KirbyVictorious


Song of the Pheonix

PostPosted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 7:08 pm


heart I really like this poem. biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 12:01 pm


Thanks

lidless_i


The Duchess Grey

Astounding Explorer

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 5:07 pm


lidless_i
I used to be christian but the practicises and context of the religion (and a few of the more fanatic of it's followers) turned me away from it, so that's why that line is there. If it offended anyone, no offense but you are overly sensitive.



I'm not offended. And I agree, somethings-especially the fanatical weirdos of my religion-do turn a lot of people off. In fact, they really, really bother me too.

I actually hate to label myself a "Christian" because of a lot of that stuff. But anyway, this is off topic so I guess I'll go make myself useful and write something productive.
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