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Arashi_Inazuma_Lightning

PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 6:07 pm


Hello everyone! I'm new here, and so I thought the best way to introduce myself is by sharing some of my works with you! I'd like some constructive criticism, but you may comment if you see fit to smile

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 5:34 pm


I find it difficult to critique cute stuff exploding out of treasure boxes.

You're not afraid of colour, which is good, but let me give this blanket critique for you. A lot of your art is abstract, or very busy. Its hard to criticize that. Maybe try to focus on one thing. You ability really SHINES through when you do that.

I love this pic. Its detailed without going overboard. There is a lot going on, its full of colour, and its non-abstract.

Keep on keeping on.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 08, 2006 11:40 pm


very nice, alot of artists get too much into being a "dark artist" and are afraid of color or they don't want to use some colors cuz they don't like that color i like to seee people who will use all the colors and the random collage style flows very nicely together it doesn't look like cut and paste
PostPosted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 3:52 pm


yeah, the colors do go together nicely, and you have an eye for putting stuff on the drawing, its interesting, but its not just crowded all together. good job! blaugh

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 6:32 pm


You have a great talent for coloring, I think, and your style made me feel quite happy! 3nodding

All of your abstract pictures are very dreamlike and are fun to look at.
Your pictures with people are also good, but you could keep improving on your anatomy. (It's not BAD, it just needs some tweaking.) I would especially look at the neck/shoulders area.

Otherwise, congratulations on being a refreshing and vibrant artist!
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 7:48 pm


I love the random drawings heart and the drawing with the girl called "1 k" is really cool too.

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