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The Missing Pieces(My original poem...)

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 5:59 am


(People say this is one of my best poems, so i thought I'd post it up for you to check out...I have a few others in my journal here on gaia, if you really like my writting...yea..)

The Missing Pieces.
My soul?
I blame god,
For giving me no sympathy
When he carelessly let me into the hands of a whore
and a drug addict.

Kindness?
I blame society,
For teaching me what I have to do
To survive in this world.

Heartbreak?
I blame Family, Peers, and Past lovers,
Because heartbreak comes in more than one form
And so does cruelty.

Darkness?
I blame My stepfather,
For telling me that if I want to live,
All I can do is hide.

Satanic?
I blame the bible,
For showing me that I'm nothing but a whore
For showing me its contridictions.

Love?
I blame him,
For being everything I could ever want
and showing me what its like to feel perfect...



Humanity
Try to destroy your monster,
I dare you.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 5:55 pm


wow that is really great i like it alot

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