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 Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 4:20 am
i wrote this song.it took me a couple of days.
note:the lines that have the "[]" is the chorus
your right here with me
i know your here
even though i cant see you
i can feel your presence
i never thought that could miss someone i never knew
[]when i dream your there
[]your presence is here
[]here in this world
[]i ant to see you
-pause-
[]but i want to see you here
[]and here with me
we'll never forget you
not now,not ever
i can feel your presence
your always here with me
even though i cant see
[]when i dream your there
[]here in this world
[]i want to see you
-pause-
[]but i want to see you here with us
[]and here with me
it didn't need to go this way
you deserve to be here
you deserve to stay
and its not your fault
-pause-
[]when i dream your there
[]your presence is here
[]here in this world
[]i want to see you
[]but i want to see you here with us
[]and here with me
everybody yelling
everybody screaming
it just makes me cry
i know that if you were here
none of this would happen
[]when i dream your there
[]your presence is here
[]here in this world
[]i want to see you
[]but i want to see you here with us
[]and here with me
-repeat x1-
-fading-i want you here
-continue fading- here with us
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 5:20 am
That's pretty cool, I could never write a song, much less one that long. xp
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 7:00 am
It's very nice. You did a good Job.
..May I post one?
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 6:31 pm
I love it.. 3nodding I can relate to it too, well, maybe not the fighting part but the rest yes, I do relate to it 3nodding !! You could be a song writer someday 3nodding !!
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 6:48 am
That's good. I could never write something like that.
ninja pirate
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