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lilboyfresh

PostPosted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 5:26 pm


keep in mind that this is a FAN STORY.........so who cares if im wrong once or twice.......this is only the intro depending on the feed back i might decide to continue it. plz be honest about what you think. Ohyeah and no bull crap about what a spelled wrong...i suck at spelling lol

Background: over 30 years have past since the ending of naruto. All of your favorite charecters are at least in their 40's. Some of the charecters have retired from there shinobi lives, some have settled down and got married...but on to the charecters u really want to hear about Naruto Married and had a kid with Hinata, and has finally become Hokage after a grueling battle he had with konohamoru over 6 years prior to today........as for Sasuke He Started The Uchiha Clan Back Up with a woman he met in the hyuga clan.(srry for all you SasuSaku Fans) Sakura Finally got over Sasuke and Developed her Medical Ninja skills superbly and now is the top ranked medical ninja. Kakashi has founded a New Village. Its a branch of konoha called the Village Hidden iN the Flames. The Village in the Flame is not A town where Civilains Live. Its Konohas Area where there Army of ninjas Reside. Kakashi as its head. And to your surprise shikarmaru is the armys head stratiegist. The Story is 30 years ahead and has the kids of our favorite ninjas as its main charecters.

Important New Charecters:

Dante Uchiha
age: 15
Relatives: Sasuke Uchiha (Father) Kasame Hyuga (Mother)
Rivals: Kari Lee ( Daughter of Rock Lee)
Rank: Genin
Strongest Attack: Byanigan eye
Bio: A prodigy as to be expecter by all Uchihas. He is expected to be Konohas Greastest Fighter when he reaches Adult Hood Combining both the Uchihas Sharingan and the Hyugas Byokugan, Into the ultimate Defense and the Ultimate Offense.

Yondaime Uzamaki the 2nd
age: 14
Relatives: Naruto Uzamaki (Father) Hinata Hyuga (Mother)
Rivals: Dante Uchiha (Sasukes son)
Rank: Genin
strongest Attack: None of yet
Bio: Named After his grand father. The Son of the 6th Hokage, And Grandson of the 4th Yondaime hates the Fact that he lives in the shadow of his Fathers expectation. Envys Dantes Blood line but hates the fact that their Fathers live out thier old Rivalries through Them. He Struggles to be independent of his Father and his Family Legacy.

Kari Lee
age:14
Relatives: Rock lee (father) Mother died while giving birth to Kari
Rivals: Considers Dante to be unworthy of being her Rival
Rank: Genin
Strongest Attack: Konoha Gale Blue whirlwind
Bio: Takes to her Father when it comes to Taijutsu at birth she was a natural Taijutsu user. at age 13 Masterd the first 3 gates. She Inspires for her father to teach her all of the gates but he refuses to do so. Unlike her Father She can use Genjutsu and Ninjutsu. She Combines Ninjutsu with Taijutsu to do amazing feats when it comes to Taijutsu. She is an amazing Shinobi

I dont have time to finish the bio ill do it later. and P.s im looking for someone to do the art work for the charecters that would be much apprieciated
PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:51 pm


This sounds really interesting. I want more!!

Little_Demonz
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lilboyfresh

PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 8:51 am


lilboyfresh
keep in mind that this is a FAN STORY.........so who cares if im wrong once or twice.......this is only the intro depending on the feed back i might decide to continue it. plz be honest about what you think. Ohyeah and no bull crap about what a spelled wrong...i suck at spelling lol

Background: over 30 years have past since the ending of naruto. All of your favorite charecters are at least in their 40's. Some of the charecters have retired from there shinobi lives, some have settled down and got married...but on to the charecters u really want to hear about Naruto Married and had a kid with Hinata, and has finally become Hokage after a grueling battle he had with konohamoru over 6 years prior to today........as for Sasuke He Started The Uchiha Clan Back Up with a woman he met in the hyuga clan.(srry for all you SasuSaku Fans) Sakura Finally got over Sasuke and Developed her Medical Ninja skills superbly and now is the top ranked medical ninja. Kakashi has founded a New Village. Its a branch of konoha called the Village Hidden iN the Flames. The Village in the Flame is not A town where Civilains Live. Its Konohas Area where there Army of ninjas Reside. Kakashi as its head. And to your surprise shikarmaru is the armys head stratiegist. The Story is 30 years ahead and has the kids of our favorite ninjas as its main charecters.

Important New Charecters:

Dante Uchiha
age: 15
Relatives: Sasuke Uchiha (Father) Kasame Hyuga (Mother)
Rivals: Kari Lee ( Daughter of Rock Lee)
Rank: Genin
Strongest Attack: Byanigan eye
Bio: A prodigy as to be expecter by all Uchihas. He is expected to be Konohas Greastest Fighter when he reaches Adult Hood Combining both the Uchihas Sharingan and the Hyugas Byokugan, Into the ultimate Defense and the Ultimate Offense.

Yondaime Uzamaki the 2nd
age: 14
Relatives: Naruto Uzamaki (Father) Hinata Hyuga (Mother)
Rivals: Dante Uchiha (Sasukes son)
Rank: Genin
strongest Attack: None of yet
Bio: Named After his grand father. The Son of the 6th Hokage, And Grandson of the 4th Yondaime hates the Fact that he lives in the shadow of his Fathers expectation. Envys Dantes Blood line but hates the fact that their Fathers live out thier old Rivalries through Them. He Struggles to be independent of his Father and his Family Legacy.

Kari Lee
age:14
Relatives: Rock lee (father) Mother died while giving birth to Kari
Rivals: Considers Dante to be unworthy of being her Rival
Rank: Genin
Strongest Attack: Konoha Gale Blue whirlwind
Bio: Takes to her Father when it comes to Taijutsu at birth she was a natural Taijutsu user. at age 13 Masterd the first 3 gates. She Inspires for her father to teach her all of the gates but he refuses to do so. Unlike her Father She can use Genjutsu and Ninjutsu. She Combines Ninjutsu with Taijutsu to do amazing feats when it comes to Taijutsu. She is an amazing Shinobi

I dont have time to finish the bio ill do it later. and P.s im looking for someone to do the art work for the charecters that would be much apprieciated


Important new Charecters (cont)

Kyo Hyuga
age: 15
Relatives: Neji Hyuga (Father) Ten Ten (Mother)
Rivals: none
Rank: Genin
Strongest Attack: to be revealed later
Bio: he is teased alot since he is the only Hyuga without the ability of the byokugan . He is often told that he is weak by others. He says he has no Talent and the only people he Trust are his Best Friend Yondaime and his Parents. His Dad tells him to work hard and hell become stronger and tells him about one of his best friends who had no talent at all but is one of konohas strongest ninjas.

Rina Okime
age:16
relatives: dont worry bout em
rivals: jin Uchiha
rank: Jounin
Strongest attack: imataion Sharingan (not a blood line)
Bio: Once an orphan, but was takin in by kakashi. Was trained by kakashi and is his student. at age 14 became a jounin. She wanted to have the power of the Sharingan but was not a uchiha so she invented a new jutsu. It is a combination of genjutsu and ninjutsu it is a eye jutsu that is just like the sharingan. It is signifigantly weaker than a real one though and uses up alot of chakra.

Jin Uchiha
age: 16
Relatives: Sasuke Uchiha (Father) Kasame Hyuga (Mother) Dante (brother
Rivals: Rina Okime
Rank: Chunin
Strongest Attack: Byanigan eye
Bio: The Sister of Dante and also is the one who trains him. taught him how to use his byanigan. Even though she is a chunin she has many strengths at a young age she awakend the byanigan eye and used it to copy many jutsu's. She went to watch the chunin exams every year and copied all the jutsus she saw. She is also very smart. She has said that she has found away to copy other Bloodline jutsu's which was thought imposible
PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 2:35 pm


Im srry but it just doesnt make much sense sasuke and naruto will probally have a final battle where they both die in the real naruto. And sasuke and a hyuga gettin together >_< and their kid not having sharigan but having byugigan (cant spell that word) just doesn't make sense.

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EternalXOblivion

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 4:07 pm


more more
PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 9:48 am


BenUikiza
Im srry but it just doesnt make much sense sasuke and naruto will probally have a final battle where they both die in the real naruto. And sasuke and a hyuga gettin together >_< and their kid not having sharigan but having byugigan (cant spell that word) just doesn't make sense.
Thats why its a fan story........im sure everybody if wrote one they would through some of the things they wished happen in Naruto, thats wat makes them intresting. I just put some of the things i thought would be cool in there........but your intitled to ur thoughts xp

lilboyfresh


Silent Toast
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 11:42 am


srry man its just that my friend is makin one of those too and it goes with the naruto flow domokun domokun domokun domokun
PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 11:43 am


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The_brokenboner_ninja


lilboyfresh

PostPosted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 8:36 am


BenUikiza
srry man its just that my friend is makin one of those too and it goes with the naruto flow domokun domokun domokun domokun
OK maybe its because of the intro........i havent started the story....this isnt about naruto its a whole new generation of charecters......... and i know once i sit down and write it ......it will all come together...... i have it all in my head.......its just i didnt want to start it if i didnt get good feed back.....cuz i am a good writer....that i kno......
PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 5:44 pm


Same with my friends but the characters make sense and its a while farther and naruto itsn't around talk2hand talk2hand talk2hand talk2hand srry to ruin your parade its just my friends is much better in my opion.
PS: Your fan story sucks rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl

Silent Toast
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EdwardAlchemistOfDea

PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 11:19 am


i think mine is better but ben its right after naruto becomes the rokudaimme
PostPosted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 3:49 pm


whoa..this is a pretty cool story
naruto's next generation haha...maybe the author will keep writing depending on the next generation rofl wahmbulance
 

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sweet-latte

PostPosted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 9:24 pm


hey this is pretty cool it would be so col if naruto continues with th enext generation...i would so love that! heart heart heart and i love the couples u put together like naru and hina :] heart heart heart heart 4laugh  
PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 5:29 pm


BenUikiza
Im srry but it just doesnt make much sense sasuke and naruto will probally have a final battle where they both die in the real naruto. And sasuke and a hyuga gettin together >_< and their kid not having sharigan but having byugigan (cant spell that word) just doesn't make sense.
aw come on be a little positive come on about the fight one of them die and thats gonna be SASUKE!!!!!!!!!(god i hate that kid)

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 12:46 pm


That sounds so cool. Make more. heart
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