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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 1:20 pm
This has to be the best poem I have ever written. It was for a school assignment, it had to be 16 lines and it had to rhyme. Everyone in my class liked it, I hope you do to. ^_~
Letter and words dance on paper of white
Words filled with love, pain and fright
The words whose purpose is to make you think
Of thier meaning meanings carved in lead and ink
Written so cleaverly and tell
Aching for you to hear what they have to tell
To make you cry and make you laugh
To make you dream of the future and remember you past
Pages and pages of fantasy
Illusions of the creator's dreams
The words and phrases spoken about
Are the products of how the story comes out
Each line fabricates a bigger plot
No word is used for naught
If you take the time to look
You will see the depth of thr story behind the book
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 1:25 pm
Hey Es-Kun, it's really good. But look at the sub-forums. We have a poetry sub-forum. It's called Saints (a really good song/cd by Destroy the Runner.) So I'm going to move this post in there.
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LearningtoBreath63 Captain
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 6:20 pm
Yay! I thought it disappered! XD
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 4:30 am
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 2:41 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 4:20 pm
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 1:49 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 4:24 am
*Starts looking through other posts*...song? I posted a song? *really needs to start keeping better track of her stuff*
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:31 pm
XD yeah...it's in your journal
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Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 6:29 pm
*thinking* Journal...I posted a song there...*memory coming back* Oh, I remember doing that. What it's about is anyone's guess, but I remember posting it...and maybe thinking that it sucked.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 6:43 am
Yeah...you said you thought you didn't write good songs
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 11:44 am
I just don't know how to make them flow. The whole picking out one stanza to be a chorus or even having some sort of reccuring line doesn't work with me.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 5:39 am
ah, I kind of have that problem somtimes, but I always try to make it round it ><
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 7:14 pm
I just give up and make it a poem.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 5:47 pm
hey, same here. Lol
I am writing a new book 3nodding
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