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Inkwell

PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 11:48 pm


ok first to 5, 3-0 KO
no gay votes




C teezys Verse


Teezy. I’m the human version of tidal wave
You set difficulty to Legend but still ain’t on a higher stage

You’re a rookie in my lifestyle. I can say
The only turntable you’ve seen was a microwave

Digests nothing but trash cause you’se a starving artist
But I’m a little too fresh man I’m hardly garbage

Real recognizes likewise in appearance
I guess that’s why seeing you is a surprising experience

Go ahead try to hit me wit unconnecting bars now
Swing wildly friend least I know who you are now

(Take note… What’s about to happen shall shock and amaze)












* Drum roll *

Inkwells verse

You can say I’m dishonest, but my flow is fluent.
And my blade is a promise….so I’m gonna hold you to it
He lies & says he's dope, such a scandalous herb
& he says f** so much, I'm startin to think he's a man of his word
Since his early days, C's been dying to caress guys
Boys to Men aint just a group, it's the timeline from his sex life
ive beat ya before, so stop hypin ya s**t
cos you stalkin me's gettin 'out of hand', unlike ya d**k
callin me a 'monster', ya'll get beat for sure kid
cos you got nothin but 'lie-ability', like cheap insurence
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 6:37 am


lol Inkwells was funny

vote Inkwell

Ermandfa


Raskit

PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 7:03 am


Inkwells was pretty hilarious

But from a-looking-at-the-verse-logically position, Teezy's was more consistent, sometimes Inkwell's lost flow, and the punches didn't come consistenly. I have to hand it to Teezy, for better flow, more consistent punchlines, Inkwell only really had the Boys to Men one.

Teezy
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 8:04 am


Honestly here when I read Teezy's verse when he first posted I wasn't sure how Ink would do against it. Especially that microwave line, thats just ill.

But Teezy's verse in comparison to Inks...well...didn't really add up. Inks had better punches, word play, and he kept more consistant punches. Teezy, you had some filler that didn't give much purpose...kinda weak.

I gotta vote Ink for this battle.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 8:21 am


Inkwell
ok first to 5, 3-0 KO
no gay votes




C teezys Verse


Teezy. I’m the human version of tidal wave
You set difficulty to Legend but still ain’t on a higher stage

You’re a rookie in my lifestyle. I can say
The only turntable you’ve seen was a microwave

Digests nothing but trash cause you’se a starving artist
But I’m a little too fresh man I’m hardly garbage

Real recognizes likewise in appearance
I guess that’s why seeing you is a surprising experience

Go ahead try to hit me wit unconnecting bars now
Swing wildly friend least I know who you are now

(Take note… What’s about to happen shall shock and amaze)












* Drum roll *

Inkwells verse

You can say I’m dishonest, but my flow is fluent.
And my blade is a promise….so I’m gonna hold you to it
He lies & says he's dope, such a scandalous herb
& he says f** so much, I'm startin to think he's a man of his word
Since his early days, C's been dying to caress guys
Boys to Men aint just a group, it's the timeline from his sex life

ive beat ya before, so stop hypin ya s**t
cos you stalkin me's gettin 'out of hand', unlike ya d**k
callin me a 'monster', ya'll get beat for sure kid
cos you got nothin but 'lie-ability', like cheap insurence


o...k... did anybody.. like notice his verse for real? Read the italics backwards... from the bottom up... then read my last bar... yeah.. like I said...
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 9:55 am


Not all bars need to connect, they just have to have a central purpose. If you've listened to actual freestyle battles before, its rare that they keep things inline with what they previously said. I mean, he keeps the whole f** aspect past a couple bars, and his monster line, well, its more along the lines that people should call him one. And that lie-ability line, thats just a great finisher.

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Durrtyboi

PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 10:03 am


YO inkwell killed you teezy just overall better and harder punches and metaphors teezy yours was clean and neat which was good but it seemed like you were just trying to be safe rather than go all out for the win

VOTE: INKWELL
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 11:22 am


Maleficent Chaos
Not all bars need to connect, they just have to have a central purpose. If you've listened to actual freestyle battles before, its rare that they keep things inline with what they previously said. I mean, he keeps the whole f** aspect past a couple bars, and his monster line, well, its more along the lines that people should call him one. And that lie-ability line, thats just a great finisher.
in other words.. your saying he can lie, call me a liar.. and still win.. even when I was spitting the truth???

the f** aspect... he starts off saying I say f** alot... I never say that!

The monster thing.... whose callin him a monster?

and lie ability sums up the only talent that dude got.. A great ability to lie!!! Couldn't have been personal with all those lies he put in.. the only personal thing is him saying C... weird but a loss is a loss yet this on is makin me think more

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 11:30 am


C Teezy


Teezy. I’m the human version of tidal wave
You set difficulty to Legend but still ain’t on a higher stage

You’re a rookie in my lifestyle. I can say
The only turntable you’ve seen was a microwave

Digests nothing but trash cause you’se a starving artist
But I’m a little too fresh man I’m hardly garbage

Real recognizes likewise in appearance
I guess that’s why seeing you is a surprising experience

Go ahead try to hit me wit unconnecting bars now
Swing wildly friend least I know who you are now

(Take note… What’s about to happen shall shock and amaze)


now I told ya what happens next will shock and amaze... let's take a look back..

the whole theme of my verse was that this dude obviously doesn't know what he's doin... straight up rookie(1st and 2nd bar)... he's like Mike Tyson.. and I would be Buster Douglas.. if ya seen that fight.. Tyson just punches wildly.. sure they are hard (5th bar) but they don't connect...

Now.. In a verse against Master of Ceremony in BBD I said that I'm ahead of my time which is something that I've noticed I said a lot... I guess that is because I am... In my verse I told ya basically what Inkwell is gonna do... swing hard and wild... but.. no real connection

What I'm seeing here is disillusionment....

So ya'll saying... that in a real fight the person that swings tha hardest wins that fight? or does tha person that lands tha most blows win?

Real recognizes likewise in apperance
I guess that's why seeing you is a suprising experience...
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 12:00 pm


Teezy I get what you sayin but this aint a real fight its rap battlin and yes to me the harder punches win in rap but in a boxing match the most blows win. but check it in a street fight it dosen't matter how many blows you land cuz they could be weak and not phase the guy one bit but the guy who hits the hardest is the one that will weaken his opponent enabling him to win so you really can't use boxing as an analogy seeing as there are so many different types of fights

Durrtyboi


The Legendary Makairo

PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 12:38 pm


I personally believe the winner of this battle was Inkwell.
Solid flow, clever use of word play, interesting lines and disses. It was overall better, however C Teezy definitely made a strong attempt.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:36 pm


Durrtyboi
Teezy I get what you sayin but this aint a real fight its rap battlin and yes to me the harder punches win in rap but in a boxing match the most blows win. but check it in a street fight it dosen't matter how many blows you land cuz they could be weak and not phase the guy one bit but the guy who hits the hardest is the one that will weaken his opponent enabling him to win so you really can't use boxing as an analogy seeing as there are so many different types of fights
allright one more time.. you are on the right track.. but somewhere u just derailed...
IN A FIGHT you have to make contact... in other words IN A BATTLE it has to relate to the guy standin next to you... or else you could be swingin at nothing... Ink was randomly swinging.. WHO DO YA'LL THINK HE IS VOLDO? anyways.. tha point is.. Ink had punches.. but they didn't hit me rather they could have been for anyone.. I was going directly after him...

In a street fight... you can swing hard but MISS!!! Ink... MISSED!!!

a good bit of his verse is based off me "allegedly" saying f** a lot... which I have never said in a rhyme!.. ever!!! the nerve of you people.. he might as well have said I was George Bush... or Saddam.. or bin Laden.. and ya'll niggas would have ate that GARBAGE up...

I'm ashamed to be the leader of this guild at this point..

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:44 pm


Both raps were good. But Ct's flowed better, but Inks was hella funnier. XD But I must vote for the master of Wordplay........Teezy
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:54 pm


C Teezy
Durrtyboi
Teezy I get what you sayin but this aint a real fight its rap battlin and yes to me the harder punches win in rap but in a boxing match the most blows win. but check it in a street fight it dosen't matter how many blows you land cuz they could be weak and not phase the guy one bit but the guy who hits the hardest is the one that will weaken his opponent enabling him to win so you really can't use boxing as an analogy seeing as there are so many different types of fights
allright one more time.. you are on the right track.. but somewhere u just derailed...
IN A FIGHT you have to make contact... in other words IN A BATTLE it has to relate to the guy standin next to you... or else you could be swingin at nothing... Ink was randomly swinging.. WHO DO YA'LL THINK HE IS VOLDO? anyways.. tha point is.. Ink had punches.. but they didn't hit me rather they could have been for anyone.. I was going directly after him...

In a street fight... you can swing hard but MISS!!! Ink... MISSED!!!

a good bit of his verse is based off me "allegedly" saying f** a lot... which I have never said in a rhyme!.. ever!!! the nerve of you people.. he might as well have said I was George Bush... or Saddam.. or bin Laden.. and ya'll niggas would have ate that GARBAGE up...

I'm ashamed to be the leader of this guild at this point..

Teezy it's like this. I think what everyone is trying to say is you made that rhyme just for him, while on the other hand Inkwell directed hard punches and metaphors at you and he put some stuff in there for the audience(the people who voted). My vote goes to you because I do understand where you are coming from.

VOTE: C TEEZY

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:54 pm


what is it 4-2?
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