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 Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 2:02 pm
yeah so i'm new( sweatdrop )but heres my comic 
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 2:51 pm
No offense, but using proper grammar in your text inside of the comic would make it better. Next, try not to put energy auras around any of your characters UNLESS they are in combat. Also, it is highly unlikely that a girl will jump out of nowhere and have sex with someone unless there is prior romance/she is a whore.
Also, try straightening the lines of the comic by holding on shift while making your lines.
That is my criticism for the day.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 2:53 pm
Raid Aurora No offense, but using proper grammar in your text inside of the comic would make it better. Next, try not to put energy auras around any of your characters UNLESS they are in combat. Also, it is highly unlikely that a girl will jump out of nowhere and have sex with someone unless there is prior romance/she is a whore.
Also, try straightening the lines of the comic by holding on shift while making your lines.
That is my criticism for the day. ok thanks for the advice (i'm very new so tanks alot...)
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:23 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 1:45 pm
Thats funny! I'm new at comics to heres my first one 
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:29 am
lover 20 wtf Thats funny! I'm new at comics to heres my first one thats good just try to put more detail in it.............. eek
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Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 10:17 am
lover 20 wtf Thats funny! I'm new at comics to heres my first one needs to be neater, in text boxes, make sense, and not have a naruto move in it, that's his jutsu, not yours. talk2hand
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 3:20 pm
i liked both of them ^_^, can you guys make more??
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