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Usagi Yukime

PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 12:38 pm


.....lemme explain with a poem....

And the laughter brought silence to which still holds
in the air it rang, in the heart stood still
In the eyes of power, she said no
never to meet evermore, scrappin' the remains

With it came tears that brought misery
and she stood still unwavering
Banishment threatens while quivering
through the murkiness, parody fits

Cold eyes pierce
Ice hearts harden
With every passing moment
Theres an end result.

-Jai


This is dedicated to meh mom
and if fits, Chelsea's step mom

Its a bit confusing, but...
I hope some one can read inbetween the lines
 
PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 1:47 pm


wow... thats serious... so cold and harsh...

i am a poet too... but i could never do anything like that cuz I... I don't know but i guess alot of people feel worse than me so i feel ashamed to say stuff like that when people have it worse off.... your poem jus proves that

Katana~Takura
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Kiwi`sama
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 2:12 pm


Very nice. And yes, our step-mom's/mom [your mom] sucks major a**.

Whenever you catch them in a good mood, they're like, "******** YOU. BE SAD."
Jeez. I was put onto a child abuse case by the school in 6th grade because of my step-mom.
I wasted 3/4 of my summer in a room with a woman going, "And how does that make you feel?"
It's amazing how I am still sane... somewhat. > >;;
PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 3:23 pm


Ja. Except my mom doesn't have the patience to send me to a shrink. She just threatens to kick me out. :3 And she blames me everytime something goes wrong
Now she's threatening my manga. If I don't pass meh piano exam, she's gonna chuck them out.
Xp

Usagi Yukime


Lazuri-Hikari
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 6:47 pm


Wow, that's amazing. That's way better than my poetry. Deep.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 7:38 pm


Psh. Poison her apples. > >;;
JKJK.
My step-mom didn't have the patience either, so my dad sent me there. :'D
Oh. And if you want, I can help you with your piano.
It may be a while since I've played, but I still have skillz.

Kiwi`sama
Crew


Futura Galaxy Vikar

PostPosted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 10:22 am


wow, u must be in a confusing spot, i dont mean it like that... i mean that i just think your poem is saying,
while trying to find happiness among the drakness, there is none although you think there is. There's no love left...wow thats deep
PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 8:44 pm


Lazuri-Hikari
Wow, that's amazing. That's way better than my poetry. Deep.


Nods with lazuri-chan

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