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Phoenixstormclaw
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 9:29 pm


Well, I haven't been getting many reviews on fictionpress, so I'll post it here. I have written 15 chapters thus far, and so I don't overload you all at once, I'll post the segments at random intervals. Please, share your thoughts.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 9:30 pm


*1


The Merrah walked silently through the forest of Kinntar. His weightless boots padded along the fallen leaves and dirt of the forest floor, leaving nary a track behind. A dark green sleeveless tunic covered his lean yet muscular physique, fastened by a slender vine belt around his waist. Attached to this belt, which was almost as green as the Merrah’s skin, was a leather sheath housing a silver dagger. The youth, standing about six feet tall ceased walking, glancing around with his brown, caring eyes.


The branches on the nearby trees seemed to shiver. Fire. Sniffing the crisp air, the Merrah sprinted swiftly to a clearing, his waist length brown ponytail not far behind. The Merrah crouched down among some low bushes to observe four humans around a campfire. After all, the fire isn’t currently posing any threat and humans are intriguing reasoned the young man.


Two of the humans, both appearing to be the same age as Fyryth, had frightened expressions upon their faces and their wrists were bound by coarse, tattered rope. Just metres away, Fyryth caught the sweet aroma of the upset girl who kept looking down at her hands before returning her gaze towards the frightened boy. With strawberry-blond hair and light blue eyes, the girl was attired in padded linen armour; uncommon for a human female. Across her back rested two scabbards which usually housed broadswords, Fyryth mused. As much as Fyryth desired to look upon the beautiful girl, the Merrah tore his eyes away to investigate the other humans.


The human boy, two or three years Fyryth’s junior, had short white hair-the mark of a sorcerer. He sat upon a fallen log, creasing his chestnut coloured robes which flowed downwards, ending at two leather sandals. A red satin sash was tied around the boy’s hips; a little too big for him yet indicating he was of an Order, perhaps the Mages Guild. Fyryth felt an innate form of respect for the young boy, even though they had never met.


Lastly, the young Merrah turned his eyes towards the other two humans. Both were adult men with unkempt beards and unclean bodies, and both were grinning maliciously as they spoke to each other.
“We’ll get a mighty fine ransom for the young girl here, and the boy should fetch us a nice price also,” remarked the one-eyed man in a husky voice. In his right hand was a polished horsehide whip, which slithered in the still air. The force used on the whip caused some smoke from the fire to disband, forming a thin mist, rising high into the air.
“Old Amar better keep to his word though, or he will be getting one of your great whip lashings, eh? I just wish the fool would let me have some fun with the girl though,” barked the other man, who stared lustfully at the bound girl. She groaned in disgust.


Fyryth had heard enough. He strung his longbow and pulled out an arrow from the leather quiver on his back before nocking it into the bow. Drawing the bowstring, Fyryth rose from the bushes, holding the bow in place. “It isn’t decent to kidnap two people, let alone consider raping one of them. Would you like my arrow to teach you a lesson in dignity?” Fyryth glared at the two men who now stood just feet away, faces filled with fear and surprise. The husky voiced man lifted his arm, but before the whip could strike Fyryth with a loud crack, the human plummeted to the ground, an arrow protruding from his throat. Blood splattered from the wound and the remaining man bent down to keep pressure on the injury, though the man was already dead. The stunned, angry man grasped the wooden shaft and pulled it free of the flooded flesh before pointing it daringly at the attacker. “I’ll see you dead for that, boy!” The man charged at Fyryth with the scarlet splinter. Without time to load another arrow, Fyryth ducked and rolled to his right, only for the enraged man to follow and kick him savagely. Just as the beaten Merrah grabbed for his dagger, a shout followed by a thunderous explosion filled the clearing.


The pounding ceased, Fyryth stood up carefully to find the man lying on the ground beside him, smoke and ash steadily ascending from his blackened back.
“I didn’t see that coming.” Fyryth’s mouth had dropped in astonishment.
“I did,” commented the brown robed boy, smiling. “Would you mind untying us?” The smile became a broad grin that stretched from ear to ear.
Nodding, Fyryth drew his silver dagger and handed it to the girl, who cut her ropes swiftly before rubbing her chafed wrists. She returned Fyryth’s dagger and walked over to the campfire, a large wooden chest adjacent to the dancing flames. Opening it, the girl withdrew two steel broadswords, cut the boy’s bonds and sheathed the two weapons.
“Thank you. I am Shaina, Mageblade and daughter of the Fort Commander of nearby Kernirn. This is a dear friend of mine, Nish,” she gestured towards the white haired boy. “He is a sorcerer who resides at the Mages Guild, and is responsible for the death of our second captor.”
“I was waiting for the right time to attack those two, and you provided it. Thanks.” The boy nodded his appreciation.
“My name is Fyryth, Aldar of the Merrah. Glad to be of service to you both. May I escort you two back to Kernirn? I am on my way there to restock my supplies.”
With a nod from Shaina and Nish in reply, Fyryth doused the campfire with a bucket of water before commencing the short journey to Kernirn.

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SmallTwin

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:56 am


Mmm... I want to marry Fyryth now... If there ends up being any romance with him, I bags pretending that that's me! ^^
PostPosted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 3:58 am


That's Shaina, just so you know. ^_^

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 4:31 am


Meh, Leafy has posted, so I might as well put the next chappy up ^_^
*Looks at the chapter* Man, these are really short...



*2


Two hours later, the trio sat inside the Commander’s quarters at the fort town of Kernirn, recounting the event to Shaina’s father, Lord Verdun. According to his newfound friends, Shaina and Nish had been in the forest, talking while picking Guerrna fruit, when the two men seized them by surprise and carried them off to the campsite. They were starved and forced to watch their captors gorge themselves on food. It was a day later that Fyryth found and freed them.
“Father, they kept mentioning Amar, and it seems as though he set them up to this. That old bat would gain much from having you around his little finger with us as hostages.”
Verdun’s face became bewildered. “How dare he do that to me? He’s gone too far this time. That gluttonous swine!” The infuriated father stormed out of his quarters, ordering the immediate arrest of Amar.


“Who is Amar?” Fyryth asked of nobody in particular. Nish began giggling.
“You know, Nish, I get the feeling that you laugh too frequently,” Fyryth observed.
Nish calmed down and inhaled a gulp of air. “Actually, I have a very abnormal condition that causes me to fall down in bursts of laughter at very inappropriate moments. Although it has gotten me into trouble before, I believe that it is beneficial to have a good chuckle every so often-even if I can’t control it.” The sorcerer smiled sheepishly at the disbelieving Aldar.
“Amar is the Mayor of Kernirn, at least, the non-military aspects of Kernirn,” interrupted Shaina through gritted teeth. She clearly disliked the man. “He and my father are supposed to rule over Kernirn together, cooperatively, but they have never agreed upon everything. Amar is a selfish, ruthless man that resorts to unleashing his thugs whenever he doesn’t get his way. He murdered his parents to gain his position, rather than waiting for them to croak.” Nish was now on the cold stone floor, his body writhing in fits of laughter. Shaina hit him. “This isn’t funny, Nish. I don’t see how you can laugh at the ‘accomplishments’ of that b*****d,” Shaina growled emphatically. She then turned on Fyryth, and, realising he had done nothing wrong, stormed out of the room.
“You two definitely have a profound relationship,” Fyryth observed wryly.
Nish nodded before standing up and laughing again. “I can’t disagree with you. She usually needs some time alone after she storms off, so I’ll take you down to the market. You did say you needed supplies.” The boy brushed off the dust from the ground and led Fyryth out of the Commander’s quarters. The two turned left and walked quietly down a spiral staircase built into a defence turret.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 1:21 am


Well, i kind of figured that, but still... *drools*


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SmallTwin

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 1:22 am


Oh yeah, right, should actually review! lol

It's pretty good Phe, but maybe you should make the chappies a lil longer? xp (Coming from Queen of long chapters, right Phe?)
PostPosted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 12:21 am


Damn straight lol. I am the King of short chapters, but looking over what I've written so far, the chapters are of random sizes. Chapter 3 is a tad bigger than 2, to say the least. It'll take a while, but you will see chapters a little longer once you get into the teens. For now, you'll have to stand by on that, and keep reviewing ^_^

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 12:14 am


I'd love comments from people that aren't Leafy as well, so you all know. ^_^


*3


“So, what’s an Aldar do?” Nish asked Fyryth politely. “I’m afraid that I know little of your people.”
“Then I will educate you some,” his friend responded, smiling. “The Merrah are the native people of this land, existing only to fulfil Nature’s divine will. Tree sap runs through our veins instead of blood, and we breathe in what humans breathe out, converting it back into clean oxygen.” Fyryth paused as Nish whistled in amazement.
“If you’ll allow me to continue,” Fyryth remarked, though with humour rather than anger. “Now, where was I? Ah, that’s right. There are two kinds of Merrah, and their life’s training and abilities are determined at their birth.” Fyryth placed his left hand past his right arm, his agile fingers rubbing a birthmark on the back of his shoulder. It was of a tree, an inch wide and an inch tall. Nish whistled again.
“I am an Aldar. I was born with a tree birthmark and as soon as I could walk, I began my training in the way of the land. I can communicate with trees; abiding by Nature’s instructions with the aid of my longbow. As an Aldar, I also have the ability to merge with trees, healing me when I am injured, and allowing me to gain sustenance from water supplies deep below. Unfortunately however, if the tree dies while an Aldar is merged with it, they share their vessel’s fate.”
“If you, as an Aldar, were trained in battle by way of the bow and arrow, why do you have a dagger? I’m afraid I don’t know anything about weapons.” Nish’s face was scrunched up now, perplexed.
Fyryth beamed. “I will get to that in due time. First, I’ll tell you a little bit about the other kind of Merrah; the Torei.” Fyryth and Nish passed the armoury and the young sorcerer’s eyes followed the lines of weapons beyond the open wooden door. The young Aldar cleared his throat, indicating the he wanted Nish’s undivided attention, and Fyryth’s friend obliged.


“The Torei, born with a crescent moon birthmark, are priests of nature. They have the knowledge of the past and future, and are well versed in all prophecies. They excel at illusion and earth magic, carry no weapon but their silver dagger and reside in the Merrah citadels located throughout Merranor.” Fyryth ceased speaking as the duo arrived in a small courtyard. He gazed around at the magnificent rose garden, surprisingly thriving in the autumn climate.


The pair passed through the grand arch gate moments later and walked into the large city, surrounded by limestone fortifications. The walls were two grown oaks high and much denser; complete with north, east, west and south gates.
“Fyryth, I know you are still astounded at the size of Kernirn-even though the other fort cities are just as immense-but you still haven’t told me about your dagger.” Nish pulled on his friend’s arm, longing to hear more that might unravel the mystery of the Merrah.
“If I must,” Fyryth sighed emphatically. “Every Merrah has a silver ceremonial dagger. It is presented at their sixteenth birthday when their initial training has ended. We are then considered adults by our people. I happen to use mine often-when I am crafting and fletching arrows.” The young Merrah was silent for a moment, as if there was something more to the mysterious dagger; something that Fyryth didn’t want Nish to know yet.


Nish, curiosity peaked, was just about to break the silence and question Fyryth more extensively about the dagger, but was interrupted by a tall, frail looking man in purple robes. His extensive white beard was kept in place by a red satin sash, loosely tied about his slim waist.
“Ah, there you are, Nish. You can be quite elusive sometimes, boy.” The man smiled, revealing several gaps in which teeth used to reside. The few that remained were all heavily stained, possibly from drinking too much broth or ale.
Nish bowed deeply to the old man before returning the grin. Magical folk seemed to know the secrets of being happy. “I am sorry to have wasted so much of your precious time, Guildmaster Delanyn. Sir, this is Fyryth.” Nish gestured to his Merrah friend and Delanyn nodded in reply.
“Greetings, Fyryth. It has been long since my eyes have gazed upon any of your noble kind.” The Guildmaster turned towards Nish. “I have an errand for you to run, boy. If you will follow me to my quarters in the guild, I will brief you on your task.” Delanyn gestured for the two youths to follow, and he led them down several streets to an elegant, limestone building, two storeys high. There was a luminescent glow to the foundations of the large structure, and Fyryth could practically smell the magic.


Delanyn waved his hands as they neared the building and the double doors opened swiftly; the building waiting to embrace the Guildmaster in its depths. Fyryth detected pleasant warmth permeating the air as he entered, and noticed several rows of staves, all
in stooks.


The trio walked silently down a deep corridor, up several flights of stairs and into a tower in which Delanyn’s office resided. The circular walls were storiated; ancient symbols, designs and pictographs gleamed from the polished limestone.
“I don’t recall spotting a tower from outside,” Fyryth stated, a quizzical stare aimed at Delanyn.
The Guildmaster grinned yet again. “This is an establishment based upon several centuries of magic, Fyryth. It may look like a two storey structure from outside, but these walls are actually concealing the fact that you are in a building with three towers, twelve storeys-eight of them above ground-and three hidden tunnels leading under the city fortifications and into Kinntar forest. As a Merrah, I expect you to keep this all to yourself as it is of nobody else’s business.” Delanyn seated himself in a very comfortable armchair behind his elm desk and pressed his arthritic hands together, eyes piercing Nish’s. “The errand I wish you to carry out is very simple.” The ageing Guildmaster opened a drawer in his desk, withdrawing a rolled piece of tattered parchment. “This scroll has to be delivered safely to the Mages Guild in south-east Lauristr, and I need you to make sure this happens. The text on this scroll could hold crucial information, information that might cause some of our rivals to prevent you from getting it translated by Gluhn’ak, Guildmaster of Lauristr. It is imperative that this scroll is kept in safe hands, Nish. Will you do it?” A serious expression washed over Delanyn’s smile, indicating the gravity of the situation.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:41 am


...seriously, please take the time to review. Pwease? cry


*4


Shaina lay uneasily upon her four poster bed inside her room, located next to the kitchen on the base level of the Fort. She was somewhat attached to the room, finding it her only sanctuary when she needed to be alone.


A scarlet satin pillow embraced within her arms, Shaina sighed deeply. She had already forgotten the juvenile reason for her becoming ‘upset’ at Nish and concluded that it might be best not to make any attempt at remembering it.
“Are you finished wallowing?” questioned a rough, baritone voice that could only belong to her father. The oak door creaked as he entered. “I have to admit,” he said to his only family as he sat down next to her, “you are as stubborn as your mother. Don’t get me wrong,” he replied defensively at Shaina’s irritated look, “it can be a desirable quality. A virtue, even. I am just trying to tell you that you remind me very much of your late mother, and it gladdens my lonely soul.”
Silence lingered in the room for a good while, until Lord Verdun withdrew something from his pocket.
“This was your mother’s; a present I gave her on our first anniversary. It has stayed in my bedside drawer, gathering dust, for too long now. Its stillness betrays the memory of your mother-it needs to be free once more. Will you consent to wear it?”
Shaina nodded, not needing to know if the item was indeed a beauty or an eyesore; she would gladly wear it for her mother’s sake.
A silver tear streaked down Verdun’s cheek, becoming hopelessly lost in his coarse, scraggly beard.
“Well? Are you going to give me this item or not?” Shaina questioned with a grin.


*5


Looking out her window at the enveloping dusk, Shaina heard someone knocking on her door. Nobody she knew ever knocked. They always barged in.
“That’s not how you enter a room, Fyryth!” Nish remarked as he practically barged the door down. “There isn’t any point in knocking when the door isn’t locked and you can just thump the door open anyway.” Nish smiled at Shaina’s expression, wondering why it appeared as if he had done something wrong.
“I wasn’t aware that humans had no regard for privacy, courtesy or respect,” Fyryth replied dryly. The Merrah briskly entered the room, bowing sincerely to Shaina as he did so. Nish fell to the floor in a fit of laughter.
Shaina inclined her head in appreciation, the silver pendant she now adorned sparkling.
“Where did you get that, Shaina?” Nish queried, now sober from his laughing fit. “It actually suits you!” Nish stood up, gawping at the amulet. “I can now honestly say I have seen everything.” The sorcerer ducked absent-mindedly, a pillow flying angrily past him.
“Now, now, no need for fighting,” Fyryth stated calmly. His brown eyes peered at the silver pendant Shaina wore around her neck. It was of a crescent moon, with a small insignia at the bottom of the exquisite piece. It’s Kaeg’n’s mark. Why does a human own a piece of Merrah history? Fyryth couldn’t conceive an apt explanation.
“Isn’t it beautiful? This was my mother’s; a present from father.” Shaina’s voice implied that the Mageblade adored her new necklace.
I’ll have to investigate this Fyryth concluded. There aren’t many of Kaeg’n’s artefacts left in existence.
Nish’s face lit up brightly. “I almost forgot. Delanyn has handed me a scroll that needs to get to the Guild in Lauristr-without being stolen of course. Fyryth has already expressed his interest in escorting me. Would you be interested in coming along, Shaina? We leave in the morning. Good. Get some sleep!” The bizarre boy left the room hurriedly before getting a reply from Shaina. He was very excited, for he loved to travel.
“I will go see about filling my stomach. Goodnight Shaina,” Fyryth bowed prior to following Nish out the door.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 12:26 am


gonk scream gonk scream gonk scream gonk
SOMEBODY REVIEW! THEN PhePhe CAN BE blaugh blaugh mrgreen

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 9:47 pm


I still luff it Phephe, but am a lil cut to see you want someone besides me to comment.
Am too busy making strange noises to write anymore, but i still luff it lots! heart


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 11:48 pm


xd Woot. Don't be angry...I think we should see other people. xd Nah, I just want other people to review as well, not that I don't love your comments. blaugh
PostPosted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 2:33 am


Posting several more, so take your time, but please, I pray all members of the guild, review? Or even just say hello?

*6


The noon Sun saturated the autumn forest of Kinntar, a tender breeze keeping the fallen leaves animated in the air. Tranquillity permeated the environment, seeping far into the forest floor, and all was serene. That is, until a young sorcerer approached the vicinity, running and screaming exuberantly.
“I am the wind, the wind! Nothing can defy my brute strength!” The boy, around thirteen years of age, spun around, the force of gravity depriving him of orientation. Nish fell to the soil, giggling uncontrollably.

His two companions walked peacefully down the dirt trail, in careless pursuit of their mentally unhinged comrade.
“You know, I did warn you about letting Nish have too much temmerin on his breakfast this morning. That spice is too sweet for his blood,” Shaina observed emphatically. Her intonation implied that she was fully aware that she’d just politely said ‘I told you so’.
Fyryth grimaced. “I have already stated my regret of this issue several times this morning. I am not going to apologise again.” The Merrah bent down and grasped Nish’s left arm, hauling his friend to his feet.
“Well, while we’re travelling together, I am going to insist that I retain the sole responsibility of preparing any and all food. At least while we are away from civilisation. I don’t want another episode such as this.” The poor Mageblade could not even comprehend at this moment that she’d made a fatal mistake. Shaina was the worst cook in all of Kernirn!
Fyryth smiled knowingly. “If the lady insists...”

*7


The light slowly fading into dusk, Nish sat cross-legged atop a sizeable boulder adjacent to the forked pathway. One trail led straight ahead to Mennistr, but that was not the trio’s path. No, the companions’ path was along the other trail, leading southeast. The dirt track would then merge with another trail, directing travellers southwest to Lauristr.
Nish sighed heavily. He had only just now recovered from his bout of sickness, and though the brunt of the temmerin induced fever had dissipated, a slight ringing and confounding headache plagued the young boy’s body.
“I’ll never consume temmerin again in my life!” the boy bellowed exasperatedly, although he was entirely conscious of the likely possibility that he would not stay true to that oath for much longer than a week. “There is one bonus to having this headache however.”
Fyryth peered up at his friend from his position next to Shaina, who was busily working about the small campfire. “Oh? And what would that advantage be?”
“I am too concerned with my throbbing head to worry about the foul taste of Shaina’s stew.” Fyryth sighed, for he foresaw the argument that would now rise up between his two companions. Humans are fickle things.
“If that is how you feel, Nish, I shall poison you the next opportunity I have!”
“As long as you place it in a meal that doesn’t taste like fish guts!” Having been sick from the excessive consumption of temmerin, Nish’s reflexes had weakened considerably. This was evident when Shaina picked up the stew pot from above the fire and emptied its contents over Nish’s head. His skin was still a deep red hours later. In retaliation, Nish halted his screams of pain and focused his magical energies.
“Enough! I refuse to travel with a hacked up red skinned boy and a pile of burnt dust!” Fyryth scowled at Nish, who immediately unclenched his power. The aggravated Merrah jerked Shaina’s arms from the sword hilts on her back. “You two better apologise, or I’ll skewer both of your hides with arrows!” Fyryth rolled his eyes in annoyance. “Humans!”
Inhaling a deep breath, Fyryth walked over to his bedroll. “I am going to sleep. If another argument arises, so help me…” Fyryth wrapped himself in a woollen blanket and turned over, facing away from the campfire and the two bickering humans. Shaina and Nish muttered an informal apology to each other before following suit and retiring to their bedrolls.

*8


“Is it just me, or do you two attract kidnappers?” Fyryth’s attitude was highlighted with boredom. Sitting around a campfire with coarse rope tied about your arms and legs is hardly exciting.
“No, I think it’s you,” Nish replied, giggling at his friend’s observation. That was a moment where Shaina would’ve felt obliged to slap her younger comrade, but like the other two, she was restrained by rope.
“You know,” Shaina began, looking at the trio’s captors, “your captives might insult you a whole lot less if you bound them with comfortable cord. This itches. In fact, next time you pursue us, it might be beneficial to all parties if you decide not to chase us at all.” The Mageblade was in a sour mood, but it was hardly surprising. Very few would react positively to being woken up in the wee hours of the morning by fuming men pointing sharp swords at them.
“Quiet, ya wretched wench! I dun wanna ear a nuva word outa you. As it is, we’re gunna av a li’l fun slicing you an your friends inta pieces! Maybe you’ll cunvinse us ter av a go atchu first!” The brigand who spoke not only had a horrible grasp of language; his body odour indicated that it had been months since he last bathed. If not for the vicious looking blade in the man’s hand, the trio would have completely ignored him.
“Just out of curiosity,” Fyryth stated offhandedly, “would you mind explaining to me why you are pointing weapons at us? It could be seen as an aggressive gesture, you know.”
The smallest of the six brigands responded before the others could knock the wind out of the Merrah. He clearly had intelligence that was greater than the average nutshell. “You have caused our lord, Amar, to be arrested. We are going to carve your spleens out and send them to Lord Verdun in retaliation. Nobody disrespects a Sirrel and gets away with it.” Well, his intelligence wasn’t greater than the average nutshell as he made the mistake of giving dangerous information to a hostage, but at least he could speak properly.
Fyryth’s eyes squinted. “The Sirrel? I’m sure I’ve heard that name before.” But where? Fyryth would have to report this to another Merrah; just in case the word ‘Sirrel’ had some significance.

-
“Ehnuff waitin’. I wanna slice em up now! What ar we waitin’ fer?” The reeking brigand hefted his sword above his head, ready to swing the weapon into Nish’s skull. The other brigands did nothing to stop him. It was a serious moment, so unsurprisingly Nish began giggling hysterically, unable to breathe.

The ground underneath rumbled with the thudding of one thousand hooves. How an entire battalion of cavalry could gallop through the forest of Kinntar so swiftly was the only thought in Fyryth’s mind, and he decided to let this play out. After all, the six brigands were all quaking in their boots, fearing an imminent death.
“Let’s get outa here!” shouted the putrid brigand, and he ran in the opposite direction of thundering horses. The other five bandits followed their associate into the woods.

“It was nice knowing you both,” Nish remarked, fearing that the three would be trampled by hundreds of hooves.
The trio gazed at each other one last time before peering over at a nearby low hill, the general direction of the roaring racket. The suspense was ghastly. The three companions waited for what seemed to be many minutes, and anxiety steadily increased.
Nish sighed in frustration. “Why aren’t we dead yet?” It was then that a lone horse rider galloped over the low ridge, looking fairly pleased with herself.
“Greetings. I noticed that you were surrounded by brigands and decided to chase them off.” The girl, a year or so older than Fyryth and Shaina, was attired in dark leather armour with knee high riding boots. At her side was a scabbard sheltering a sabre and across her back were two attachable pieces that formed a pike.

The rider dismounted her grey gelding and smiled compassionately at those she had just saved. “My name is Leoni.” With ocean blue eyes, Leoni stood tall and proud with a lithe figure. Her brown hair was drawn back into a ponytail, and there were polished brass coils at intervals throughout this ponytail, preventing stray hairs. Leoni drew her sabre and deftly sliced Fyryth’s binds. The Merrah bowed to the girl as she released the other two of their restraints.
“We are grateful to you, Leoni. I am Fyryth, and this is Shaina and Nish,” the Aldar said emphatically, gesturing to his friends when he uttered their names. “We are bound for Lauristr. Nish here must visit the Mages Guild.”
“I am heading that way myself, actually. Mind if I tag along? You’ll only have to put up with me for a day and a half.” Leoni looked about the campfire, as though the trio had already accepted her request. Fyryth shrugged and kicked dirt over the fire, readying to resume the journey to Lauristr.

*9


The rest of the journey was highly uneventful. At least, the journey itself was uneventful. Nish had become possessed with the possibility that the group would fall prey to more brigands, and for the last day of travel, the young and passionate sorcerer jumped through the bushes along the side of the dirt road, foolishly attempting to stay hidden. Shaina informed Nish several times that he was taller than all of the bushes they’d past and that any bandit could easily spot him from a mile away, but the inflexible boy remained adamant about hopping from shrubbery to shrubbery.

“We can be thankful that Nish doesn’t jump around noisily when we stop to rest,” Shaina pointed out joyously when they had stopped for lunch on the last day. Nish was three feet away, holding up two broken twigs for camouflage. Fyryth ignored that remark as he was too busy drooling over the meal Leoni was preparing over a small fire. She was an adept cook, but even a hopeless cook was better than Shaina, so Fyryth considered this a luxury.

The companions devoured the prepared meal and doused the campfire before continuing onwards to Lauristr.

*10


The afternoon Sun shone heavenly overhead, its rays showering upon the enormous village of Lauristr. From the knoll less than a mile to the north, the four companions gawped and stared at the sheer vastness of the townhouses and trading houses, all made with stone and dun coloured thatching. The streets comprised of stone roads, with shallow gutters at the very rim of the streets. There were straight streets, curved streets, and Fyryth claimed he even saw a spiral street.

“How many people live in Lauristr?” Nish asked as the group entered the immense village. He absently counted all the people around him, although there were too many for this method to be effective.
“Last year’s census indicated that Lauristr’s populace is greater than ten thousand,” Leoni replied heartily, smiling briefly when Nish whistled. “The guild chapters are in the mercantile sector, near the northern entrance. I’ll take Nish to the Mages Guild and then rent us some rooms at a reputable inn. It is called ‘The Oak Leaf’. Ask anyone in town and they can direct you to it.”
Shaina nodded. “Fyryth and I will seek a tradehouse to restock our supplies. We are low on foodstuffs.” The four arrived at an intersection of several streets and split ways, becoming two pairs.

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Fyryth and Shaina walked along a wide road heading south-east. It was not long until they sighted a sign hanging above a wooden door to their left, ‘Enihv’s Tradehouse’. The two entered to find a sombre looking man behind a polished wooden counter. The room was lit by candles-which didn’t brighten up the place-and the air was soaked in a musky odour.
“I am Enihv. Can I help you?” the sombre man stated after the pair entered. As his eyes adjusted, Fyryth could make out the bright blue tunic that Enihv wore.
“Greetings, Enihv. I am Shaina, and this is Fyryth. We wish to purchase some provisions.” The Mageblade approached the counter, placing her pack upon it.
Taking out a piece of parchment, Enihv handed it and a charcoal stick to his customer. “I’m afraid we are low on temmerin. However, everything else is fully stocked.”
Shaina scribbled swiftly on the parchment, seemingly content that there was no temmerin to obtain.
Enihv gazed at Fyryth as Shaina scribed the list of provisions she needed, and he smiled. “Are you here on pilgrimage to the Lake of Founders? It is rare to see a Merrah such as yourself travelling with a human. I consider myself a historian when it comes to the Lake of Founders.”
Intrigued, the Merrah questioned about the Lake of Founders.
“Ahh, so you aren’t here on pilgrimage. Well, the Lake of Founders is where the Irn Council was formed by the ancestors of the current Fort Commanders. There are six in total. The Irn Council swore an oath to protect the inhabitants of Merranor. I can give you directions if you’d like. It is just to the east of here.”

Shaina paid Enihv for the goods before the pair walked out of the building and headed eastward to find the Lake of Founders.

*11


Minutes before dusk, Shaina and Fyryth stood about a bulky boulder, a pure silver plaque set into the top of the polished surface. Fyryth cleared his throat and read aloud. “’This plaque commemorates the creation of the Irn Council. The six members of the Council swore fealty to the protection of Merranor’.”
“My ancestor was once here,” Shaina murmured in an astounded manner. “I am the direct descendant of one of those Council members. They each formed their own Fort to guard this land.”
“A noble effort by any standard,” Fyryth nodded respectfully. The Aldar was about to utter something else, but the two were interrupted.
“Look who we have here?” bellowed one of the bandits that had held them captive days earlier. Three other brigands stood behind him, rusty weapons drawn fiercely. It seemed that this was only half of the raiding party, so Fyryth assumed the others had left or were lying in wait.
“Back up against the lake, or my friends here might be inclined to puncture you with arrows.” This brigand was definitely straightforward in his thinking.
“We can take them,” Shaina whispered to her comrade.” Her hands flexed; her fingers poised to reach back and grasp her broadswords. Fyryth shook his head with great subtlety. He looked into her eyes, holding out his left hand. The Aldar smiled slightly when he had Shaina’s palm in his, less than a half-second later. The two stood with their backs facing the magnificent depths of the Lake of Founders, escape routes guarded by brigands. At least, most of the escape routes.
“Do you trust me?” Fyryth asked of Shaina. In response to her immediate nod, Fyryth whispered gently, “Inhale deeply.”

With a resounding splash, Fyryth and Shaina dived beneath the water’s surface, plunging further into the lake. The two paused for a moment, dodging a well thrown javelin. Shaina squeezed Fyryth’s hand, indicating that she was losing her breath. Fyryth turned his body towards her and embraced her with his arms, wrapping her protectively. He then pursed his lips to hers, their two souls melding into one refined entity. This one kiss displayed supple, pent-up emotions that seemed to run as far back as their birth.
Before Shaina could understand it, Fyryth inhaled as she breathed out, and within seconds he returned the air to her as renewed oxygen. The puzzled look on her face disappeared almost as soon as it showed, for she remembered her education. For an entire month a few years back, Shaina had been taught about the peculiarities of the Merrah, and one particular lesson came to mind. “Merrah breathe in what we, humans, breathe out, and turn it back into oxygen; just as the trees do,” her father had dictated one gloomy autumn morning.
Arrows streaked past the embracing couple, inches away from piercing flesh. Fyryth and Shaina, whilst retaining their hold on one another, swam deeper into the lake, arriving at the floor a minute later. Finding some large kelp attached to the lake bottom, Fyryth tied it about his and Shaina’s waist, allowing them to stay weighted without floating to the surface. Keeping watch for more stray projectiles, Shaina and Fyryth continued sharing that one breath of air for what seemed hours.

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Phoenixstormclaw
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 11:21 pm


Rewriting. If you happen to have actually read the chapters posted and something popped into mind that you may have expected but didn't see take place, I'd appreciate ideas to improve Exiled Sin.
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