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 Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 3:47 pm
I will take the critisizm, I just need to know what I have to work on. I have to start drawing my book soon but I want things to look good. Can you help me? What do i need work on? 
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 3:53 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:02 pm
"Nice art, I'm no where near that stage."
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:21 pm
I think it's really good!
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:24 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 5:06 pm
Its really good, Im not sure what bad I hace to say really.
I love the design and detailing of the clothing.
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 5:07 pm
Beatiful! (I think thats how you spell it)
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 10:59 pm
I think it's really nice! The design it awesome too. But I think the hair is a little off, it seems like it's not really on the head. There are some tutorials that can teach you, because I'm not really good at describing things...@_@
And about the sleeves, I know the hands are inside or that the sleeves are long, but sometimes it looks like there are no hands.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 5:01 am
It looks great! I can't really find anything wrong with it.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 5:32 am
Well, with the face and head it's a little distorted. It's probably just the position you tried to draw her in, but I'd still maybe look at it when you're done. Holding it far away from you helps. But what really works is turning the paper over and holding it up to a light. You'll be able to see the distortion and it'll be easier to correct. Other then that it's okay. If you really wanted to you could work on making the hair and clothing more natural and flowing and not so in one place, but it's not anything you need to work on unless you prefer.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 5:36 am
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 6:45 pm
I say the anatomy needs a little work, but other then that, it's alright. ~Angel
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Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 6:09 pm
Some shadows wouldn't hurt...
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:27 am
I don't see anything that should be changed. It looks neat to me. Nice work smile
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 12:05 am
I love the detail you have on the clothing. It Looks wonderful.
I have to agree that the dress looks a bit stiff though. Like it's made of cardboard or something and just doesn't really seem to flow. Also, for some reason the right side of her hair looks slightly flat to me. Other then that I can't see anything wrong with it.
You're a great artist. Keep up the good work.
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