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Bloodwrit:Ch.1(Story preview)
I write alot and I`ve been working on this one for a while now. I hope you like it. It`s not done yet, but you can PM me if you want to give an opinion.( So far in writing, I`m to chapter 18. )
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Ch.1 Anger and Sorrow
(Note:in this story Halle is pronounced Hail))
It was cold, but that?s not why Halle shivered. The air stood stiff as she hid in a corner where the old drinking fountain had been to avoid being seen. Everyone was gone , she was the only one left, and they were after her. Any other day would have been normal, but she had to date the new guy. It ended the week after she`d met him and Scii had gotten too close for comfort. Everything she knew was lost..

The pangs of adrenaline rushing through her veins were already unbearable as she held her breath and kept silent, hoping in some small way that it would all be just a dream. The sound of footsteps nearby wasn`t making it any easier. Tension built with each sound until his shadow down the hall came into view and began to turn towards her.

Another hall to her right was close enough that she could make it without being heard. It`s walls were covered in blood from the other lives they`d ended and gave off a stench that would knock anyone for a loop. She counted on the chair next to Mr.Tallman`s door. There was a vent two feet above it that she had used once or twice before when she needed something for a class project and the door was locked. Rumor had it that you could`ve accessed anywhere in the school by using it.

Halle took a sigh of relief, at least safe for a time as she climbed in and replaced the cover. The vent swerved around until she came to the gym. She turned back quickly realizing that someone was in there. The next and last stop was in front of the gym door where she was sure it would be safe.

The thud she`d made as she hit the ground betrayed her. "Hey..." She turned around in shock, finding her pursuer from before: One of her ex`s buddies. She couldn`t move. Her eyes widened in fright and she breathed heavy as he pushed her through the metal door.
Two men looked over from the opposite side of the gym as he pushed her over to them. Her ex seemed to be leading the pack. We`ve got one more. Didn`t you want this one? He coaxed her closer until she stood only inches from him. Scii came forward to examine her. His stare only made her blood run colder as he circled her, sniffing her neck, grinned with satisfaction and whispered in her ear," Halle. Halle. Halle. It`s ok." He hesitated, circling her once more," So much trouble you are!" She whimpered as he stood behind her, petting her, and put his hands on her shoulders," You were the first one I saw... and the only one I`d cared for. We didn`t have to do this. " He kissed her lightly on the neck.
Halle broke free for a moment and tried to run, but he caught her by the shoulder and continued where he left off, circling, breathing, and whispering in her ears," So pretty when you`re scared... Why run?"

Halle tried to think of a way out and looked back to the gym doors. He grinned, reassuring her," I`m afraid you won`t be able to leave that way. It`s locked." He had her by both shoulders again, tightening his grip. Her breathing grew harder as she let out a whimper just loud enough for him to hear. Halle`s eyes pleaded for him to let her go, but he began to trace his finger across her neck, examining the path until he found the right spot," Regardless, this isn`t what I`d had in mind..." She screamed as he bit down hard into her jugular, draining her of blood. Halle`s face grew pale as the last bit of life slowly ebbed away to nothing.

A shot fired behind him caught his attention and he turned to see two of his buddies with stakes in their hearts," Grisham!?" "Put her down," both hands were on his crossbow and aimed towards Scii. Scii tossed the girl aside, walking towards the intruder," Why would you want her? She`s dead anyway."
He grinned darkly revealing his teeth," I see... Even in death, she`s a trophy girl worth taking..."

Grisham`s fingers toggled the trigger sending out a stake that his foe easily dodged. The sun from the window seemed to come out of the blue, starting to burn his skin. "I`ll deal with you later.... But the girl is mine." He left reluctantly leaving his friend`s corpses behind to dissolute in the light unprotected.Grisham put his crossbow away and walked over to the now dead Halle, picking her up.

Something about it scares me, but it's still a great piece of writing. And to add to that, It must be really god for me to like it, as I was never into the whole vampires/horror kind of thing.