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 Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 4:46 pm
be as strict as you want it wont really hurt me
summary:
it is about a girl named annie and she has ADHD it is kinda a story like mine but little diffrent
she has it really ba and when she has to much sugar she gets really crazy and some people think its annoying because she does not want to tell some people. But one day she takes her medicane and does not get enough sugar and she gets sick and passes out. she goes to the hospital and finds out that she actually has Diabeties.she is really upset and trys to get use to it and the story pretty much shows what it is like to be a diabetic and some more things will happen but i am not sure what yet.
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 11:06 pm
Sounds great, post it when you're done! 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:15 pm
That sounds cool. Try not be too preachy whee More story-like. Preachy bad, story good.
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:24 pm
I wish you luck pulling that off, I know quite a few diabetics and they're... not the most fun people in the world. I don't blame them but hell you gotta live with what you're given.
I'd like to know what the plot of the story is, you've listed what happens to the main character, but what is the ultimate goal of the story? Ultimately, you need something to happen by the end, since neither diabedes nor ADHD is curable, those are simply going to add to the rising action. You character needs a goal, which can't be over coming either illness because simply she can't.
If you want to go with what works, a simple cliche drama will do the trick. For instance, girl likes guy, eventually gets guy, guy is driven off by her illness, she copes with losing him and gaining the diabedes, goes through horrible depression, realises all is not lost and finds someone else, all before graduation! Cheesey, yes, stereotypical, definately, does it make for a decent story, of course. If you're any into science fiction you could put an even deep twist to the story.
Just bouncing some ideas off you.
the Demon
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