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PharaohAtemuYami

PostPosted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 6:06 pm


I'm trying to write a YamiXSeto fic but I need some help. I got the idea for it but I need a co-writer. I sadly don't do YamiXSeto fics too well cause I manly do YamiXYugi ones. Can some want to co-write one with me?

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Title: The Price of Love
Parings: Yami(Atemu)xSeto
Full Summery: Seto Kaiba is the richest man in Domino, not only rich in money but rich in love of one Yami(Atemu) Mouto. But Seto also have people out there that want to take away everything that he holds dear. So when Yami get’s kidnap and missing for over two years, what will Seto do?
PostPosted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 5:02 pm


Not to rain on your parade, but who on Earth has the power to kidnap Yami?

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PharaohAtemuYami

PostPosted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 6:00 pm


Suiichi Youko
Not to rain on your parade, but who on Earth has the power to kidnap Yami?


Ah no one. But this idea had been in my head for awhile. ^___^
PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 2:24 pm


PharaohAtemuYami
Suiichi Youko
Not to rain on your parade, but who on Earth has the power to kidnap Yami?


Ah no one. But this idea had been in my head for awhile. ^___^

I agrre with Youko some one would kidnap Mokuba or Yugi but I can't see Yami getting kidnapped

~Sasuke Kaiba~
Captain


Yuugi-kun

PostPosted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 4:58 pm


~Sasuke Kaiba~
PharaohAtemuYami
Suiichi Youko
Not to rain on your parade, but who on Earth has the power to kidnap Yami?


Ah no one. But this idea had been in my head for awhile. ^___^

I agrre with Youko some one would kidnap Mokuba or Yugi but I can't see Yami getting kidnapped

Anubis came back and kidnapped Yami! ^________^
(Atemu-Sama I've read alot your storys and they are amazing!!!)
PostPosted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 12:04 pm


Yuugi-kun
~Sasuke Kaiba~
PharaohAtemuYami
Suiichi Youko
Not to rain on your parade, but who on Earth has the power to kidnap Yami?


Ah no one. But this idea had been in my head for awhile. ^___^

I agrre with Youko some one would kidnap Mokuba or Yugi but I can't see Yami getting kidnapped

Anubis came back and kidnapped Yami! ^________^
(Atemu-Sama I've read alot your storys and they are amazing!!!)


I highly resent the fact that they've turned Osirus' son, the god of embalmemt, Anubis, into an ugly evil bad guy! Anubis is nothing like that!

Kijin_Ishtar-Incarnate


SilentShadowDreamer

Omnipresent Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 7:35 pm


Kijin_Ishtar-Incarnate
Yuugi-kun
~Sasuke Kaiba~
PharaohAtemuYami
Suiichi Youko
Not to rain on your parade, but who on Earth has the power to kidnap Yami?


Ah no one. But this idea had been in my head for awhile. ^___^

I agrre with Youko some one would kidnap Mokuba or Yugi but I can't see Yami getting kidnapped

Anubis came back and kidnapped Yami! ^________^
(Atemu-Sama I've read alot your storys and they are amazing!!!)


I highly resent the fact that they've turned Osirus' son, the god of embalmemt, Anubis, into an ugly evil bad guy! Anubis is nothing like that!

*hugs you* Thank you. You have put into better words than I could.

PharaohAtemuYami, I think your fic would be better off if Yami left of his own volition, instead of being kidnapped. I don't know why he would without knowing more details of your plot, but kidnapping...just wouldn't really work.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 10:13 pm


Maybe some form of ancient magic could be used to block the shadow powers but that would put a larger plot behind the story than a simple kidnapping. It would, however, force Seto to deal with all of that magic that he finds so mythological.

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SilentShadowDreamer

Omnipresent Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:56 pm


Ooh, character development! eek I've heard of that!
(I am aware that this post was not helpful in any way. Sorry. I'm in that unhelpful kind of mood. ninja )
PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 6:33 pm


Suiichi Youko
Maybe some form of ancient magic could be used to block the shadow powers but that would put a larger plot behind the story than a simple kidnapping. It would, however, force Seto to deal with all of that magic that he finds so mythological.

good point. that would really thicken the plot to the point that you would need at lest nine chapters to write it in. that would make it so you would have to throw in an oc for the villan and to keep the fans you would have to write it in a way that the reader has no clue who the bad guy is or what they have planed. Probly taking form Setos point of veiw or maybe swiching form setos to yamis to yugis. and.... I ranting agian I'll shut up now....

~Sasuke Kaiba~
Captain

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