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 Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:18 pm
//The Intro//____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Welcome to my not-quite-finished concept thread for IUJ. I really, really hope you enjoy my concept and/or can help me fluff it up a bit. Please feel free to look around; I'm looking forward to anything you have to say about my concept.
Intro
Rough Concept
Passenger
Refined Backstory
Gaurdian
Notes
Writing Samples
Reserved #1
Reserved #2
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:21 pm
//The Rough Concept//____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Very Rough Concept There's this emperor, and he does emperor-like things (one being taking many concubines). He eventually finds one girl from a normal family and takes her as his latest whore. She proves to be a worthy woman for him, so he starts to give her more and more freedoms. The concubine sees some guards harassing some of the women from the local town and starts to reprimand them for it. The emperor allows this and soon starts to change his policies to fit his mistress' ideas. The guards (and other concubines) are enraged. Two head generals kidnap the mistress while the emperor is out at war and bring her to the other concubines for punishment. The jealous women rip at her expensive clothes and try to beat her; one then hatches the idea to "shut her up" for good. She and the other concubines sew the girl's mouth shut and then give her back to the generals, who plan on deserting her in the desert. As they head for the desert, however, they see something no one has ever seen before: the train. They decide to dump her body on the train and head back to town, claiming that a great beast took her (for that's what they thought the train was). The woman will be found as a child on the train (and if allowed, as a feminine-looking male) with his/her mouth still stitched up. Ho'kay... this comes from taking a dream and writing it the exact moment I woke up. I promise my writing really isn't this bad... honest >.>
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:22 pm
//The Child//____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Name: Na'im
Gender: Male
Past Gender: Female
Personality:
At a Glance...
Na'im is a solitary boy. He will not speak unless spoken to, and he will not use direct eye contact for anyone except his father and aunt. Rather than playing with other children, Na'im will watch from a distance and only think of new and exciting games for them to do (but he never mentions them).
In Depth...
Na'im is very fearful of the world around him. Every moment of his life he will constently be considering his options and outcomes... he will miss many oppertunities in fear of being reprimanded for his actions. He will gain only a few close friends in life, but he won't come out and say who he thinks they are; he'll keep close with others to avoid hard feelings. When given the chance Na'im will slip a dollar or two to any donation cup/organization that he can find; there is the desire to help others deep in his soul, but nothing to really kindle it. Those that are close to him will find that he makes a better servant than a friend, for he is afraid to offer his opinion to anyone that wants/needs it. In his mind he is better suited to pour the wine than to drink it; he will never reach it to the top in life. His smile can always be seen... but his laugh is never heard.
Appearance:
Physical...
He has a very gaunt frame... no matter how much he eats his little form shows his ribs and his skin can bruise very easily. His skin is very tanned and he has a golden eye on the right and a brown eye on the left. Ha'im wears his long, black hair tied with a ribbon so that his bangs will not fall in the way.
Clothing...
Even though his self-confidence is lacking... Ha'im wears about three to four strings of beads adorned around his shoulders and waist at a time (their colors range from tourquoise, crimison, salmon, gold, and silver). Usually he clothes himself in light-colored robes that touch the floor with sleeves long enough to cover his hands.
Distinguishing Feature...
Ha'im's main feature is his mouth... it is loosely stitched together. His lips can still be seen, and he can still talk. As a child the stitching is tighter, but it gradually loosens as he grows; the strings will remain attached to him as long as he lives, though.
Note Ideas:
Learn Your Place
A Whore is Not a Ruler
Try Talking Back Now
He Never Loved You
You're Not a Princess
Na'im types in Sienna /Dark Khaki , depending on where I'm RPing.
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:24 pm
//The Refined Backstory//________________________________________________________________________________________________________Coming Soon...
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:24 pm
//The Gaurdian//_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Name: Njörớr
Nicknames: Röktah, Rök-rök
Gender: Male
Race: Níðhöggr
Age: N/A
Hair: Brown, very thick,
Eyes:
Skin:
Height:
Weight:
Occupation:
Favorite Color:
Personality:
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Love Interest:
Marital Status:
Children:
Interests:
Dislikes:
Style:
Brief History: Coming soon...
History: Coming soon...
types in color/color, depending on where I'm RPing.Character Notes Please understand that this character is still in development, and is very liable to change as I see fit.
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:26 pm
6/15
Can posts smell like roses... 'cause this one kinda does.
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:27 pm
7/15
My llama farm is going to stay on this post. ^^ dramallama
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:28 pm
8/15
I'm now over halfway there! This post is going to be saved to remember the moment. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:29 pm
9/15
This post is on fire! burning_eyes I need to put it out. D:
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:30 pm
10/15
Two-thirds of the way there! surprised
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:30 pm
11/15
11/15ths of the way there! xD
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:31 pm
12/15
ZOMG! Four-fifths of the way there! ^^
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:32 pm
13/15
pirate I claim this post for its treasure. <3
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:33 pm
14/15
neutral Wow, these reserving messages are making me sound lame.
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:34 pm
15/15
Maybe if I replace them with a concept, no one will see the lame-ness. ninja
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