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Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 11:24 am
((Okay, well, not exactly sure as to how to start this little thread thing, since this isn't a thread that'll be used forever, it's like a little event, kinda, just no prizes or anything. xD Here're the basics. Shizuko, my first son and a banished demon, has, since he got booted from Hell, had a shadow of his former personality lurking in the back of his mind, a violent and bloodythirsty demon with no feelings whatsoever aside from hurting and destroying. It hardly ever shows itself, just with an occasional dark whisper or suggestion in the teenagers mind. In this mini-event thing though, that demon has been unleashed, and basically, Zuko is gone. The personality occupying his body is that of Errdegahr, the demon that Shizuko was before he got booted, and he's out for blood to punish those that sent him away! evil Just so y'all know, Err' got booted because he deviated from Hell's rules, and let a human escape from torture for a reason no one knows as of yet. So I just thuoght it'd be interesting to see how Zuko's friends and peers react to this, ah, "change." The rest of the Torren family, Aqua, Sere, n**, and IC me, won't be here, it's just good ol' Zuko. 3nodding
This is what Shizuko looks like: He is of average height, with luminous gold eyes with black slitten pupils. His hair is creamy white, with coal black tips/streaks, and his skin is a warm, suntan brown, and he's got big grey ram horns curling around his ears, which are long and pointed and come out away from his head. On his left cheek are two black claw marks, and around his neck is a black, vine-like tatoo collar. On his left wrist are more claw marks, as if a burning claw held onto his wrist for a prolonged period of time, and his fingers end in sharp claws. He generally wears a white t-shirt, long, really baggy black cargo pant-jeans, and a bright yellow-gold collared shirt, with the sleeves rolled up 3/4s of the way, and black vine patterns around the bottom of the shirt, which is also unbuttoned. His tail is a long black dragons tail, with four gold spikes on the end and gold tiger stripes along it, and his wings are large, membranous black dragon wings, with gold claws at the top to hold onto things, and, like the tail, gold-yellow tiger stripes.
If you need anymore information, just ask in (( )) 3nodding ))
Zuko holds his head tightly, curling his tail around the large boulder he was sitting on in the clearing. Acchh... The pain, make it go... He bites his lower lip, hanging his head between his knees while still holding onto his horns with his hands and shaking his head, groaning as the movement only increases the pain. No, not this time, Shizuko... The dark voice from his past whispers in his mind, sending another wave of pain to the confused teenager. No, not this time. You've had control too long now, Banished One, and it's MY turn to come out and play... The voice laughs maliciously in his head, disappearing for a few minutes and leaving him in a cold silence in which a name echoes hauntingly. Errdegahr... He cries out as there is a stab of pain in his head, like a black dagger, and he falls onto his knees, holding his head as tightly as he can with his hands.
((Anyone can step in now with a response 3nodding Oh yeah, when Zuko is himself, the text will be colored gold, and when it is Errdegahr, it will be colored blueviolet. Enjoy! biggrin xD))
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 1:00 pm
Yume had been walking to just escape reality for a moment. Her mind as gone from her as she felt a small tug on one of her braids. Jiyuu was in her arms staring up at her with his pale eyes. She smiled at him before turning a coner. Her eyes laid on Zuko and she froze. He seemed to be in pain..."Zuko?" She whispered and placed Jiyuu down before running over to his side. "Zuko! What's wrong? It's Yume!" She called out to him placing her hands on his shoulders.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 1:09 pm
Sirene Naiads Yume had been walking to just escape reality for a moment. Her mind as gone from her as she felt a small tug on one of her braids. Jiyuu was in her arms staring up at her with his pale eyes. She smiled at him before turning a coner. Her eyes laid on Zuko and she froze. He seemed to be in pain..."Zuko?" She whispered and placed Jiyuu down before running over to his side. "Zuko! What's wrong? It's Yume!" She called out to him placing her hands on his shoulders. He opens his eyes slowly, and they are a faint shade of blueish purple, the gold tinting it lightly. "Yume...?" He whispers, his whole body shaking. "Yume, it-it hurts, I don't know what it is..." He sits back on his heels eyes shut and his head hanging back a little as a faint groan escapes his lips. Yeesss... The half-breed cat... Errdegahr whispers in malicious glee. You're fond of her, aren't you, Banished one? Ha ha ha ha...!Zuko's eyes snap open as he is suddenly overcome with apprehension. Don't you touch her! He mind-snarls, hoping to get the personality of his past to disappear. If you have to do anything, do something to me! Not her, not Jiyuu, no one else! There is a faint tching sound in his head. Now now, dear Zuko, where is the fun in that, when you can't even scream like a female...? Err' asks, with a mental sneer.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 1:18 pm
"Zuko! What hurts? What is it?" She asked slowly moving her hands to his arms to make sure he doesn't just take off from her. She was scared now but she couldn't move, she couldn't run. No matter what happened, he needed someone and she was the only one there. "Jiyuu, get somewhere safe!" She called out and dug her nails into Zuko.
Jiyuu looked up and and ran to the wall.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 1:28 pm
Sirene Naiads "Zuko! What hurts? What is it?" She asked slowly moving her hands to his arms to make sure he doesn't just take off from her. She was scared now but she couldn't move, she couldn't run. No matter what happened, he needed someone and she was the only one there. "Jiyuu, get somewhere safe!" She called out and dug her nails into Zuko.Jiyuu looked up and and ran to the wall. He makes a noise as he feels a slight pain in his arms, and he looks oddly at Yume's nails digging into his arms, a little bit of blood showing from where they punctured the skin. His eyes are a much deeper violet purple now, most of the traces of gold are gone. He shakes himself, holding his head, and the violet disappears in the molten gold for a moment. "Yume, please, get away... I don't know what it is, but... No, it-it wants to hurt you, Jiyuu, anything! Don't stay here, I don't think I can control it..." He shakes himself again, his tail lashing the rock behind him, shutting his eyes at the throbbing in his head. He hangs his head back again, and stops shaking. His body is glowing a faint purplish gold, and after a moment that disappears, and the claw-scars on his cheek and left wrist are now just a darker shade of brown then his skin instead of the rough scars they had been a moment before. He opens his eyes again, and they are solid purplish blue, with no whites showing, just two black, slitted pupils.
He hisses softly, his sharp white teeth glinting in the light. "Yeesss... Finally, I'm free...!" He laughs softly, the sound dripping with malevolence, as Zuko's thoughts and personality fade to the back of the new demon's mind. No, stop, please! Gah, damnit, leave her out of this! Don't touch her! Errdegahr idly brushes Zuko's thoughts away, standing up from his kneeling position and brushing the dirt and dust off his pants, his gaze settling back on the cat-girl whose claws are still in his shoulders. He raises an eyebrow, asking "Don't you think you'd better let go now, half-breed?" He sneers, letting the word hang for a moment to turn it into a deep insult.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 1:42 pm
"Zuko?" Yume blinked suddenly, her hands dropping down his arms. "Zuko, what's wrong? Why are you acting like this?" Shw whispered looking up at the man standing before her. Her mind was screaming at her to grab Jiyuu and run. Run far and fast but her heart wouldn't let her. But how could she help someone so cold to her...
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 1:48 pm
Sirene Naiads "Zuko?" Yume blinked suddenly, her hands dropping down his arms. "Zuko, what's wrong? Why are you acting like this?" Shw whispered looking up at the man standing before her. Her mind was screaming at her to grab Jiyuu and run. Run far and fast but her heart wouldn't let her. But how could she help someone so cold to her... He laughs loudly, shaking his head at the hopelessness. "Sorry, half-breed, your darling Shizuko isn't here anymore." He smirks cruelly. "Just harmless, dear old Errdegahr instead." He yawns as if in boredom, sitting down on the boulder, curling his tail around it idly. He rests his chin on his fist and his elbow on his knee. "So, tell me about 'Shizuko.' I havn't been able to learn much of him from my forced lurking in his head since the Banishment..." He snorts as he rolls his eyes, though the movement/feeling is only able to be distinguished by his head moving, since his slitted pupils don't move that much like normal eyes. He flicks his wings to his back, furling the black and gold pinions agaisnt his shoulders and tapping a clawed hand on hs other knee.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 1:56 pm
Yume stepped back away from him and placed her hand to her mouth. She couldn't believe this guy. It wasn't the Zuko she knew and cared for. It was another man...someone she had never seen.
"Why would I ever tell you a thing Zuko? If you are part of him, you should know all you need to." She snapped trying to keep her voice calm.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 2:01 pm
Sirene Naiads Yume stepped back away from him and placed her hand to her mouth. She couldn't believe this guy. It wasn't the Zuko she knew and cared for. It was another man...someone she had never seen.
"Why would I ever tell you a thing Zuko? If you are part of him, you should know all you need to." She snapped trying to keep her voice calm. "Oh, I may be a part of him alright, certainly doesn't mean I know everything about him." He raises an eyebrow again, and he laughs shortly. "Turns out your dear Zuko's got as strong a will as I have, which is fairly surprising considering the cicumstances, even though he used to be me." He stands up, approaching the girl slowly with an evil glimmer in his eyes. After his first step, he stops, not moving, not even breathing for a second.No, leave her alone! You've had what little fun you deserve, if any at all, now go away!" Zuko's plea rings out in Errdegahr's mind, but he just shakes it off after a second of losing control.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 2:29 pm
"So he is there." Yume smirked but still stepped back. Her eyes scanned over them as she tried to think, tried to find a way to help get Zuko back.
It was then Jiyuu moved. Using his nose to find Zuko's body, he moved in and dug his teeth and nails into the flesh of the demon he liked so much.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 2:34 pm
Sirene Naiads "So he is there." Yume smirked but still stepped back. Her eyes scanned over them as she tried to think, tried to find a way to help get Zuko back. It was then Jiyuu moved. Using his nose to find Zuko's body, he moved in and dug his teeth and nails into the flesh of the demon he liked so much. "What the- Gah!" Errdagahr snarls as the small child bites his leg through the cloth of his paints. "Stupid halfbreed scamp!" He growls, shaking his leg furiously to dislodge the cat-boy, snapping his tail around to grab Jiyuu around the waist, pulling him off his leg. He lifts him up with his tail, before holding him around the throat with one of his hands, not tightly enough to strangle him, but just hard enough to make it difficult to breath, a little bit of blood seeping through his pants.A soft voice cries out mentall, as Zuko batters his mental body agaisnt that of Errdegahr. Yume! YUME! Please hear me, please, let her hear me... He struggles with all the fire in him agaisnt his old self, trying to get a single second of control, just enough to get Jiyuu safe and away. Yume! Do something, anything, help Jiyuu! Grab him and GO!
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 2:42 pm
Jiyuu wigged for a few moments before going limp. His nails were digging into his hands and drawing blood as the moments passed before he was having are hard time breathing. "Zuko..." He cried out before falling limp.
"Jiyuu!! Yume screamed out for a moment before a male voice hit her. Placing her hand to her head, she blinked. Zuko... She whispered and called out in her mind. Had she been hearing things...no...he couldn't be in her mind too.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 2:50 pm
Sirene Naiads Jiyuu wigged for a few moments before going limp. His nails were digging into his hands and drawing blood as the moments passed before he was having are hard time breathing. "Zuko..." He cried out before falling limp. "Jiyuu!! Yume screamed out for a moment before a male voice hit her. Placing her hand to her head, she blinked. Zuko... She whispered and called out in her mind. Had she been hearing things...no...he couldn't be in her mind too. Errdegahr smirks cruelly. "Finally a silly child is quiet. Utterly uselss." He drops Jiyuu on the ground, wiping his hand on his pant leg while looking at Yume with a feeling of great amusement. "Having fun, halfbreed?"Yes! Yume! It's me! Zuko, don't do what Errdegahr says, do anything you can! I don't know what will get him to let go of me, but remember when he stopped for that second? I think he was feeling pain or something, from when you had your claws in my arms, and he let me go for a few seconds when Jiyuu bit him. Try and hurt him! Don't worry about the pain lasting, I can always get healed up if it works, just get Jiyuu outta there, now! He sends a wave of emotion to his friend, full of desperateness and love for her and Jiyuu. Go, now!
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 3:21 pm
Yume nodded. She understood and now, she had to get closer to him but how...Hearing his voice again, Yume looked up and saw her brother. "You know, Errdegahr...it has been fun." She smirked up and stood up walking next to Zuko's body. "You are very amusing." She smirked walking next to him and nodding keeping a small eye on Jiyuu's body.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 3:30 pm
Sirene Naiads Yume nodded. She understood and now, she had to get closer to him but how...Hearing his voice again, Yume looked up and saw her brother. "You know, Errdegahr...it has been fun." She smirked up and stood up walking next to Zuko's body. "You are very amusing." She smirked walking next to him and nodding keeping a small eye on Jiyuu's body. Errdegahr looks at her quizically, head cocked to the side, before smirking slightly, his fangs glinting. "Yes, I try so hard, and I aim to please..."(My line! domokun xD) He bows mockingly, sitting down on the boulder again , and making a move as if to kick Jiyuu's body away, but his foot stops before it connects, and instead carefully shoves the boy away from him, first with his toe then farther away with his tail.I stopped him from kicking Jiyuu... You know how strong my legs are from the gymnastics, Errdegahr pro'lly could've broken something... Zuko's voice is faint in Yume's mind, but still there. He's planning on doing something to you, I can't tell what though, I can only see his surface thoughts... He can only hope the warning is enough to keep Yume from getting seriously hurt, if at all."Come here, Halfbreed." Errdegahr orders without any warning other then him seeming more amused, and a tad bored. "Would you like to know something?"
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