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 Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 11:48 am
Hey, I'm doing this little Fan-Fic. Please come and check it out. I will always update this page as long as the fan-fic goes on. And if there are still people reading it here. Here's a link: Eureka Seven: Currupted Hopes:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3139382/1/ Any way, if you could comment on the story at all, I'd really appreciate it. You can just post them here if you want, I'll see them. Also, there are other Fan-fics in that same place as well. Any way, I would REALLY REALLY appreciate comments posted here. Usually I don’t use caps to emphasize something... but really... Updates: Chapter 16 has been completed and posted. Seventeen will definitely be in within next week. Suspected chapters left?: 1, sorry. Currently completed chapters:
Chapter 1: Left on Shattered Land.
Chapter 2: Action and Reaction
Chapter 3: Realizing a New World
Chapter 4: Guilt to Guilt
Chapter 5: Reuniting the Past
Chapter 6: Betrayal at Home
Chapter 7: Murdered Desires
Chapter 8: Spiraling Hopes
Chapter 9: Baring with Pain
Chapter 10: Passing the Winter Breath
Chapter 11: Tossing Reality
Chapter 12: A Fractured Moon
Chapter 13: Loosing the Path
Chapter 14: Dark Veils
Chapter 15: Locked Unlocked
Chapter 16: Corrupted
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 12:41 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 6:33 pm
Haha that was pretty good. It kept just as interested as I was while watching the anime itself, waiting to see what would happen next, well done 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 8:51 pm
I like it. I really like the idea of the military splitting into two factions. It seems to make alot of sense. The POF is an amazing idea and works really well.
Also thanks alot for posting that Fan-fic site. I had come across it once before but hadn't made it back to read any.
If the writer continues the story I'd really be interested in reading it.
A few points:
I hope a meeting between Eureka and Anemone happens in the next chapter.
The new LFO... I'm not sure I understood the part about the compact drive. Was it a new Amita Drive or just a compact?
The pacing for the story is really good. It keeps moving and doesn't seem rushed. I really like that about it.
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 2:24 pm
Thanks guys for the comments, it helps more then you know. Also, Tolly, your comments helped out a lot. I'm not a liberty to reveal anything, but the story shall due its answers. Also, chapter four just came out last night. And he's hoping to get chapter five in by tonight. Please, keep commenting people! If there is something in the story that bothers you, such as if a part was a little confusing or didn’t make sense, then please comment!
Any kind of comment on the story is Appreciated
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 9:45 pm
Hey, I've just been keeping tabs on my friends fan-fic, Eureka Seven: Currupted hopes. I just recently change the title of this topic to something a little more interesting. Also, you can suspect me to posting when ever a new Chapter is released. The main reason I'm posting now is because chapter five is OUT!!! So any way, its pretty lengthy. Dont let that scare you though, it only means more story to read... Any way, thank you guys for every one who's reading.
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 3:31 pm
I`ll read it tonight and make an edit with my comments, Can`t wait whee Gah I feel like i`m watching a new season rofl
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 4:28 pm
Ditto, Bleach subs are calling to me right now. Must.. obey.. must watch...
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 6:54 pm
Yes!!!! Chapter six is out! And personally I like this one. Its his longest chapter yet. There really isn't much to say but, GO READ IT!!!
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:43 pm
Hey, I finally got around to reading this. "You're friend" is really doing a good job with it. I read 4,5&6. The dinner scene with Eureka, Renton, Dominic, and Anemone was great. It wasn't over the top and it showed a friendship between them that seemed right. Kudo's on that. Chapter six... well it was great. I feel like this is the point where the story is really taking off.
Seriously, I'm thoughtly impressed with this story. Tel your friend he's doing an amazing job and to keep up the good work. I'll probably read chapter 7 tommorrow.
chow.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:47 pm
One more thing:
there were two scenes I was really impressed with. The Xellein (sp?) flying between earth and the crust of the upper planet. It's a beautiful visuall image. One I'm sure Bones would have loved to have done.
Second, the idea of Renton seeing Eureka in the moon light. And then seeing the message that was engraved on the moons surface.
Nobody took the time to tell them about it earlier. It would make sense that it would be more visible from the surface of the crust planet as opposed to the Earth.
Kudos for those scenes.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 11:27 pm
Thanks for the compliment, he really apprieciates it. It really helps to know when your doing something right. So thank you Tolly.
Also, as you guys already know, chapter seven is out. I'm going to call this the "special chapter" Because it's chapter "seven" The number one reason it gets this is because I'm just tired and want to type something virtually pointless. Second reason is because Eureka "Seven"... enough said there. Any way, I'm going to hit the bed.
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:34 pm
Chapter eight is out at last!!! Its his longest chapter yet. I think this one is my personal favorite so far. Any way, read and enjoy my friends.
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 3:33 pm
Woot Woot, chapter 9 is out at last! So yeah, I figured I'd let you guys know that I'm Kaster-Revised. The guy who actually writes the story... I had a good reason for kind of hiding the fact... Now that I think, it was kind of pointless in the first place : D... But I still had my reasons, so at least you guys know now. Heh, not that it really mattered. So if you guys have any questions, shoot away.
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 9:28 am
Yes, at last! Chapter 10 has submerged my story. If you dont have anything better to do, then your solution is here! Ok... well, its out, read, enjoy.
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