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Titika
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 11:45 am


Ok Everyone welcome to the Collaborative Story game.
Well, It's not really a game but we all work together to make story.
This is Fantasy, We're dealing wiht Elves and Wizards and anything else you can think of.
The way this works is each person will write a few paragraphs to add to what the previouse person as written.
Then some one will add more after that and continue on from where the other left off.
This is a story I started a while ago and never continued, Lets see what you guys can think of.
I know it starts off quickly, I didn't really lead into the beggining much [I'm horrible at starting stories]
Feel free to take the story where you like.
It's almost like an RP but you all wright from the same point of view.
The story will not have a name untill we get more into it.
I'll start it off.

- Rules -
Stay on topic.
Do not end the story!
Write at least 10 lines. [A few paragraphs would be best]
Try to make story run smoothly.
No killing all the characters, unless it's gradual and makes sense.
Speak in 1st person. [I understnad it's a girl, but Try your best to stay in that point of view].
I have the right to delete any posts that do not fit.
If the story turns out good, do not take it and claim it as your own. We're all working together to create this.
If speaking OOC please put text in ((Double brackets))
Follow Rules of Guild&Gaia.
Don't make it sexual.
During the Story, Please leave story to the left, Do not center your text]
If skipping through unneeded time use '***' to represent a scene/Time break. [Do not skip ahead to much]
Please read whole story before posting, So we don't run into confusion.
Be Literate [Try your best, I have horrible spelling and Grammar, but I try. use spell check.]
Do not critizis the way others write.
Pm me with Questions.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 11:47 am


-The story-

“What are you?” I question the shiny unidentified object. With no response, Of course, I stare at it in amazement.
“An apple, It’s an apple” A voice from behind the brush whispers. I wisp around quickly to see who’s there. “Who are you, Where are you?” I ask in confusion. A little man no taller then 4ft appears beside the leafy bush. “I am Gregor” The little man responds. “..Uh.. What.. are you?” I respond back.
“Well I’m an elf of coarse!”
“An elf? What’s an Elf?”

“Well ... I’m not sure quite sure how to explain our selves. But we are..hmm” The little boy trailed off. After a moment of quiet mumbles and hard thinking from the little boy I interrupt “Well, I’ve certainly never seen one of you before. Where I come from There are no.. elves.”. “Really?!” the boy asked in excitement. “Well of coarse not, I’m Talika, a wizard, from the land of Armonth. Were we live there are only Dragons, and Wizards” “I’ve never heard of Armonth before, Let alone wizards. How did you get here?” The boy asked curiously. I picked up a leaf and looked at it in deep thought, Thinking about my home and how I actually got here. “I don’t.. Don’t know” I replied. “I just..I can’t remember” Concentrating on the slowly browning leaf, I watch it as it shrivels up at my touch. “Well then, Since you have no where to go you mise well come with me” The boy said grabbing my hand and pulling me along the dirt walk way.

“MOM” The boy yelled as we approached a small little building among many others at the edge of the forest. I looked around the village. Everything looked normal. “I’m guessing not everyone is your size, are they?” I ask the midget of a boy. “Oh no, My father is even taller then you are, And my mom is about your size” The boy continued to pull me around and around the little building in search of his parents. We rounded what seemed to be the 100th corner...

“Get away from my son” A woman yelled grabbing the boy and holding him tight. ‘What’s the probl..” A tall slender man asks as he rounds the corner. With a swift motion he has his bow and arrow aimed right at me. “What’s your business here? Never go near our son” “I . I.” I try to respond. This is all happening so quickly. I slowly back away bumping into a small potted tree, I swivel around to see it’s leaves slowly wilting.

***

I my self would rather be like those plants right now. Shriveling up and dying. I haven’t eaten for days and I don’t know how much longer I can stand this. I’ve been in here for who knows how long. Every now and then I can here the near by …elves… whispering. About me. I slowly crawl over to the bars blocking my way out. “I swear, I mean no harm” I breath out. My voice scratchy and dry. The long blond haired man walks over to my.. cage, Holding out a cup of hot coco. I slowly reach for it. My trembling hands curve around the warmth. I take a sip. It’s a new feeling. Warmth, Fluid, Life. “I swear, I mean no harm” I repeat. “What are you doing here?” The tall man responded. The boy I had seen earlier walks up to him and hides behind his leg. Trying to go unnoticed he peeks out looking at me, Tears in his eyes. “Khorhox, The wizard. He lives over in those hills” The archer pointed through my barred windows towards snow capped mountains in the horizon. ‘He has caused our village lots of troubles.” He says, And after another short pause he continues “He sent minions to our village, taking lives of many loved ones. He’s still after us, Even though the war passed many years ago. We were left weak and defenseless, yet he still want’s to fight. We gave up…” Now I understand, I know longer feel hate towards these people, for locking me up like this. Some one of my own kind, has bean tormenting them they’re whole lives. “I’m sorry” I say quietly. Realizing how big this world really is. Different species and new lands no one has ever known before. I feel so guilty. Even though I have taken no part in such deeds. I feel dirty, unworthy, hated. I wanted to set things straight. I was going to find Khorhox.

Titika
Vice Captain

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