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 Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 9:12 pm
"love?"
I stole my mothers life at birth
and as Kazekage's son
I was overprotested,spoiled and left alone
I thought that was love
Until that accident happened
These past six years..
my father tied to assassinate me several times
So why do I exist and live?
I asked myself that question
but I could not find an answer
But I need those reasons while I am still alive!
Or it would be the same as being dead
And this is what I concluded:
I exist to kill evertone other than me
I fight only for myself
and I only love myself
As long as there are people to kill in this world
To make me experience the joy of living
My existence will remain
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Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 9:13 pm
i luv it with a passion heart
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 1:02 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 1:08 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 6:52 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 6:56 pm
Awwwh... it's so pretty... and yet sad. It makes me want to go into Naruto world, back in time to when Gaara was a baby, and give him fudge. >_<; heart Mmmmmm Chocolate.
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 6:35 am
To me it seems only like the passage,
that Gaara says to Naruto in the hospital....
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 8:13 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 5:07 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 11:02 am
It's very deep. Nice job. biggrin
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Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 2:44 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 6:02 pm
Pinumbra
To me it seems only like the passage,
that Gaara says to Naruto in the hospital....
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 1:42 pm
i thought it was pretty ok. people these days seem to think that poems have to flow or sound a certain way. ie rhyming. but that isnt so. free verse poems can be anyway you want them to be. it can be 2 words or 5 pages long. it could rhyme or made no sense whatsoever because you write poems for your self satisfactory. if you think it's good . its all that matters. sorry i get really protective over poetry. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 6:44 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 12:50 pm
Mysc_Moon i luv it with a passion heart I love your sig with a passion.
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