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 Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:51 pm
Query of ventilation.
A stolid mind with an ajenda. Insipidly dominating the life of our heroine. She sings the words of an amiable master. Distinct in her tune. She plays, she laughs. Modestly walking a path of disdain. And the darkness of an uncertain future decends.
Cheers.
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Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 3:38 pm
There are a few technical errors, but I'm sure you want content feedback, right? The words are pretty, but I'm not really sure what the point is.
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 5:43 am
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