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 Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 10:45 am
I recently wrote an Axel/Riku one-shot, and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to look over it for me before I post it on ff.net. Basically what I'm looking for is someone who can check for correct characterization, flow, and mechanics. Also, I'm absolutely terrible at writing intriguing summaries, so if someone would be willing to help me with that, well...that would be great. x3
Title: Chocolate Heaven
Pairing: Axel/Riku
Rating: T
Word count: 1,081
Summary: Axel wants to celebrate an anniversary with martinis and hot, drunken sex. His only problem? Riku doesn't drink.
If anyone's interested, I ask that you either post here or PM me.
Thanks in advance! =D
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 11:35 am
I'll be a beta-reader! I love reading stories and correcting mistakes! And I'm okay with every pairing there is. Except straight. *shudders*
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Daniel has Amnesia Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 3:08 pm
No offense, but thats not that great of an idea for a fic. ._. and the pairing makes absolutely no sense.
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 3:18 pm
D;
Bow loves that couple.
She has a taste for odd pairings.
And Bow shall be a beta-reader.
:3
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 3:18 pm
KeaLe the Yaoi God
No offense, but thats not that great of an idea for a fic. ._. and the pairing makes absolutely no sense.
Actually, most of my friends like that pairing. I do too. I do see how it doesn't make sense, but some people don't Akuroku or SoraxRiku, so it is expected that some people might like this pairing.
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 4:22 pm
I find the idea to be pretty good. Good luck Torrina Shirogane with the fic. I'm sure it'll be good.
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 8:52 pm
Well...I'm not too fond of the pairing, but...if it's got Riku in it, then how bad can it be, right? wink Will you post the fic here when it's been beta-ed? I'd love to read it! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 9:08 pm
KeaLe the Yaoi God
No offense, but thats not that great of an idea for a fic. ._. and the pairing makes absolutely no sense.
I'd have to disagree with you there on the latter note. The fact that it isn't IC isn't really a problem as far as I'm concerned. The more popular parings such as Sora-Riku and Axel-Roxas are nigh on perfect, no denying that, but occasionally it's just refreshing to see something else than those. B.N.A.P.Hime Well...I'm not too fond of the pairing, but...if it's got Riku in it, then how bad can it be, right? wink My thoughts exactly. XD
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 9:01 am
KeaLe the Yaoi God
No offense, but thats not that great of an idea for a fic. ._. and the pairing makes absolutely no sense.
O.o Does it have to make sense for people to like it? ^^; *has a thing for Zexion/Demyx*
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 5:41 pm
~ Wishing.for.a.Heart ~ KeaLe the Yaoi God
No offense, but thats not that great of an idea for a fic. ._. and the pairing makes absolutely no sense.
O.o Does it have to make sense for people to like it? ^^; *has a thing for Zexion/Demyx*
And Good Luck Torr. O:
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:08 pm
~ Wishing.for.a.Heart ~ KeaLe the Yaoi God
No offense, but thats not that great of an idea for a fic. ._. and the pairing makes absolutely no sense.
O.o Does it have to make sense for people to like it? ^^; *has a thing for Zexion/Demyx* Rock on! Zemyx Rocks!
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 9:50 pm
Auranstlar ~ Wishing.for.a.Heart ~ KeaLe the Yaoi God
No offense, but thats not that great of an idea for a fic. ._. and the pairing makes absolutely no sense.
O.o Does it have to make sense for people to like it? ^^; *has a thing for Zexion/Demyx* Rock on! Zemyx Rocks! O: Yush. Yush it does. <333~
*glomptackles Clicky*
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 4:55 pm
~ Wishing.for.a.Heart ~ Auranstlar ~ Wishing.for.a.Heart ~ KeaLe the Yaoi God
No offense, but thats not that great of an idea for a fic. ._. and the pairing makes absolutely no sense.
O.o Does it have to make sense for people to like it? ^^; *has a thing for Zexion/Demyx* Rock on! Zemyx Rocks! O: Yush. Yush it does. <333~
*glomptackles Clicky*
Hullo thar.
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 6:50 pm
If you still need proofreaders, I'd be happy to help!
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 7:15 pm
I can e-mail it to you, if you want. :3
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