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 Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:25 am
Life never ends
You just carry on as a scavvering soul
Not one person realy loves you
your just and emty being in this world
there is nothing that you on on the face of the earth for
you were never realy alive
for this is my life
the life of a lonly kid
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 7:26 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 7:33 pm
dead_nymph13 I like what the poem says, but there are a few parts that strike me in a negative way... Life never ends You just carry on as a scavvering soul Not one person realy loves you your just and emty being in this world <--hmm awkward said there is nothing that you on on the face of the earth for you were never realy alive <---explain? need more >< I dont understand so much to say this is soo great. but it presents a good message ^^; for this is my life
the life of a lonly kid <--good point, but kinda meaningless? maybe if you legthen the poem more, it might make more sense ....then again, is this your poem? -_-
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 11:53 am
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:57 pm
The body is but a vessel for the soul, a puppet which bends to the soul's tyranny. And lo, the body is not eternal, for it must feed on the flesh of others, lest it return to the dust from whence it came. Therefore must the soul deceive, despise and murder men.
- Quoted from A.J. Durai
Is this what you mean?
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 6:55 pm
Nice qoute, kaitoshigure. But what are you referencing it with? The poem or the analysis of the poem?
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 7:32 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 2:46 pm
xXNeverEndingAngerXx Life never ends You just carry on as a scavvering soul Not one person realy loves you your just and emty being in this world there is nothing that you on on the face of the earth for you were never realy alive for this is my life the life of a lonly kid *snaps* very interesting 3nodding
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