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Anonigoth

PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 10:37 pm


******** the world and all its bloody lies
It's time for us to cut our mortal ties

Sweetly, Silently
we're going down
stars are spinning
like a merry go ******** those bastards made me ******** them and all the things they said

I'd give up anything to go back to the way things should have been
But now is too late and I don't care anymore after what I have seen

Nevermore will I feel you whisper in my ear
Nevermore will you kiss away my angry tears

Sweetly, Silently
we're going down
stars are spinning
like a ******** merry go round.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 7:26 pm


i think if you make it into a song the chorus, or repitive verse could us some work...rythm, maybe (just a suggestion) sweatdrop

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